>>947940I didnt get spaceship cause of the cockpit and wings. (why do spaceships have wings, there is nothing to fly through?) But it does looked curved, which gives it a rubber appearance.
Well first thing, Dont say i am going to make a spaceship and slap it right in the center of your canvas/paper. Think, about your composition, and what a spaceship does. Show it flying towards us, away from us, over something, doing something. When you slap it in the center all your piece says is "i am a spaceship" What is it doing? why is it there?
Also why is it surrounded by white?
the perspective is slightly off, the back wing wouldnt be as visible. And the flames are slightly oddly shaped, but this misses the point, if these were both correct, we would still need a reason to care. Give us something, a narrative, a emotion, something.
