>>297063The torso couldn't possibly be twisted like that and actually connect to the hips. You also gave her the most rigid spine possible; it's not a stripper pole, no one in that pose would flatly twist their spine along it's length. Her hips are shaped like a sagging sack of pudding and her anus looks like a melted hole in the plastic. Her pussy looks flat, more like the bottom of shoe than anything else. Her 'clothes' are obviously more to hide the transition between her hips and chest since it's not even equal lengths on both sides of her body. Her wings aren't level with each other either, the right is higher; you should try actually drawing through her body to see where they will attach on her back. And yes, downs-face has downs.
While someone might fap to it once, the second they see something similar with a much better grasp on anatomy, they will delete/forget they ever saw this.