/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

well im not sure what is going on here. I see some human ghost-like forms, and what looks to be of a spiral of light emmiting intestine like thingie traveling through disco hell. So what were you going for?

The colors are slightly garish. The magenta is a bit too much perhaps? The spiral isnt a natural spiral shape? I dont know, it doesnt say a whole lot to me, seems to be some sort of dark sci-fi fan art somewhere between a mid 90s video game like hexxen, if it was influenced by the matrix.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 16:52:00 No.947900 Report

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I am not certainly sure but I have this feeling I have seen this before in green and as a wallpaper.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:29:00 No.947862 View View Reply Original Report

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Hello /ic/. I'm a long time reader but first time poster. I recently began studying female anatomy and I would like you guys to critique my Drawings. My friends on deviantart say i'm really good and i'd like to hear what you think. Here is a sample of my work. Please enjoy.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:43:00 No.947872 Report

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gtfo of /ic/ with this generic furry crap

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:49:00 No.947876 Report

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>>947869

Op here I dont see why everyone hates furries. Its just my drawing style. This is my OC lex. I draw males much better.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:52:00 No.947877 Report

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Why do all you dumbasses keep falling for the really obvious ones?

Oh... right.

Stop being dumbasses.

Guts Rage !!S3zxvj8fTmm

Guts Rage !!S3zxvj8fTmm Sun 01 May 2011 15:53:00 No.947878 Report

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>My friends on deviantart say i'm really good and i'd like to hear what you think.

This has to be a-

>Its just my drawing style. This is my OC lex

Confirmed troll.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:54:00 No.947879 Report

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>sexy_yet_cute_by_havoc1102-d3emdbasdas

Yeah, no.
Next time at least change the name of the image you downloaded off of deviantart in a weak attempt to "troll" the board.
Actually, just pick another thing to do with your time altogether, because you clearly suck major ass at trolling.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:00:00 No.947719 View View Reply Original Report

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So /ic/ do you know of some good animation software?

where on 4chan would you ask this? thanks

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:24:00 No.947735 Report

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depends of what kind of animation, flash and toon boom studio for 2d

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:28:00 No.947736 Report

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>>947735
yes, 2D. thanks for the tip

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:35:00 No.947739 Report

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pencil is pretty good.
basic and free

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:42:00 No.947746 Report

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Flash. Director's okay for it, especially if you're a beginner.

Or if you're just after making some Gif's, Photoshop will suffice.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:33:00 No.947867 Report

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Retas(if you work as a team), TVPaint, Flash

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 13:36:00 No.947797 View View Reply Original Report

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sup /ic/

need some critique and advice on my cartoon (its not shaded and is only a rough idea). I'll take any advice.

I've mainly been a geometric sketcher, so stuff like this doesn't come as easy to me.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 14:31:00 No.947845 Report

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dude, not very good...practice! but not cartoons! get ok/meh... then make fun of your artistic flaws->cartoon!

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 14:36:00 No.947846 Report

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Yea. Biggest problem you got right now is all of your characters looking alike. Slow down a bit, step back, take a breather, maybe look at some porn, and then take a second look at your work as neutral as you can.

After a little bit of introspection look at some of the styles done by some of the top cartoons of the last 10 years. Notice any sort of similarities between all of them despite having vastly different styles? All of them don't follow one formula between all the characters.

By that I mean, think of each character as a sort of caricature in that each character's shape has some bits that are twisted, elongated, inflated, deflated, or overall differently shaped. Try mixing up the way your characters are designed. Take the look of the character in this post>>947797as a sort of base, but the character in>>947832is obviously more round, using rounder, sausage like appendages to being over weight.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 14:37:00 No.947848 Report

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>>947846

With that said, yea. You also definitely need to learn to loosen your figures up. I'm sure you don't want to hear this, as it's basically /ic/'s fallback to pretty much anything. But learn to draw from life. You don't have to actually sit there everyday and draw some nudes for 5 hours for a dozen years before you learn to draw cartoons. In fact quick 20 minute sketches every couple of days helps just as much.

Also, study and maybe even figure out the techniques of other cartoon artists and see how they do things. Don't outright copy them however, but get an idea of how they do things rather then make your art look like theirs. Here's a few links to help you out.

Chris Sanders - http://www.chrissandersart.com/gallery/ (did Lilo and Stich and a few others)

Robert Crumb - http://www.rcrumb.com/ (regarded as the grandfather of underground comics)

Natasha Allegri - http://natazilla.tumblr.com/ (Does Adventure Time, works for Cartoon Network, and is an adorable read)

Bruce Timm - http://www.comicretro.com/artists/timm/bottom.html#timm08 (Does a lot of DC work, and apparently from this gallery, a lot of porn too).

That last one with Bruce Timm might not be a good choice to add though, since Bruce Timm has a problem with all of his characters looking alike at times.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:05:00 No.947855 Report

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Worst looking legs I've seen so far. Work on design with the legs and then everything else.

The legs are actually quite straight at the end.
Pic related: quickie in Inkscape

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 15:08:00 No.947857 Report

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>>947855
What the fuck is this shit? Are you trying to make OP suck worse?

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 10:57:00 No.947694 View View Reply Original Report

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Blocklettter "M".

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CindyCrosby !9v6M5yELAM Sun 01 May 2011 11:55:00 No.947716 Report

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1?

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:53:00 No.947756 Report

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Hippity Hoppity

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:53:00 No.947757 Report

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Looks like shit.
Your target audience will love it.

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 14:55:00 No.947853 Report

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>>947757
Anti-graff nigger detected

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Aether- !LfRtMmYsGM Sun 01 May 2011 15:02:00 No.947854 Report

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>>947853
Looks like shit, been painting for 5 years. What now?

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 12:56:00 No.947763 View View Reply Original Report

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hey guys, how can i improve my lines?

I'm using a jailbroke version of photoshop cs4.

I'm trying to make them look more....I dunno, professional?

thanks

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 13:57:00 No.947828 Report

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>>947809
>protuberant noses
>wtf innie noses

Anon wants all cartoons to look like this

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 13:58:00 No.947829 Report

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>>947825
Hum...

How old are you? You see drawing/art as a passion?

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 14:00:00 No.947834 Report

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>>947829

yea, i do see it as a passion. plan on going into an art school after highschool. This is more recent. did this last night.

im kinda into cartoons

...be gentle

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 14:07:00 No.947838 Report

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>>947834
Your drawing seems to have a lot of cartoon influence... And I don't know if you like it, your style is very simple and undetailed and symbolic...
What artists you admire?

It's hard to give an opinion about your drawings because I don't know who you are, and you are posting only digital pieces. There isn't much personality in them.
I will advise to draw the noses more realistic, avoid a spherical form in every face/skull and make more realist and dramatic humans bodies and eyes. Eyes are beautiful but in spite of that you only draw circles.
(But I say this only because this is the way like things, YMMV)

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CindyCrosby !9v6M5yELAM Sun 01 May 2011 14:46:00 No.947849 Report

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>>947825
>a light in the darkness.jpg

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EBE Sun 01 May 2011 14:02:00 No.947836 View View Reply Original Report

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Anonymous Sun 01 May 2011 13:23:00 No.947785 View View Reply Original Report

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Come on /ic/ I need some good old critiques here

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Jim FC- 1334 8229 7185 Sun 01 May 2011 13:41:00 No.947808 View View Reply Original Report

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hey /ic/
first time dropping my art
i like doing mostly paranormal since i dont have to be realistic about it

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