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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 19:43:00 No.297294 View View Reply Original Report

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Any one good at line art?
I suck balls at it, can you give my picture a go at it?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 19:50:00 No.297295 Report

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Is it really ready for inking? Still seems a little loose

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 19:52:00 No.297297 Report

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yeah it is really loose, but that's what I was going for to give it a more soft feel. I'm atm colouring it. and then gonna see what I want to do.

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 20:03:00 No.297300 Report

Quoted By: >>297301

good anatomy, but I think you should fix the face up a bit.

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 20:04:00 No.297301 Report

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>>297300
thanks, and alright, what do you suggest?
I mean what should I work on more?

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 20:56:00 No.297311 Report

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Her shoulders, arms, and hands are also a bit too big, but I'm not good at drawing it either. ahaha...

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 21:16:00 No.297313 Report

Quoted By: >>297322

Why ask for it inked if you want it loose?
And also.. why ask for inks when you're not done drawing it or getting the anatomy right?

I don't find the hands big though.. but are her shoulders really that wide? I suppose it can be ok, just looks off on her raised shoulder

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 21:34:00 No.297322 Report

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>>297313
oh thanks, I didn't see the problem on the shoulders till now.
and I was tired when typing the part about soft, I wasn't very clear.
When I started drawing it I planned it to not be inked and just softly coloured.
But after I put it up I wanted to try it out with line art, completely forgetting the fact that I had not finished the sketch.

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 22:52:00 No.297332 Report

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hmmm, I cleaned it up and fixed the shoulder.

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iopq !M5/8/5dKZM Sun 30 Nov 2008 00:34:00 No.297354 Report

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>>297294
she's a bit long, but I wouldn't complain too much about anatomy

but the face is goddamn horrible

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