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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:23:00 No.4391033 View View Reply Original Report

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Can I get some real criticism on this coordinate please?

daily-lolita.livejournal.com/4463207.html
Didn't get much of a response on daily lolita, which is usually just a ton of "OHH HOW KAWAAAII" and no real suggestions unless you're a total hot mess anyways.

Give me honest opinions if you have them, you can't hurt my feelings (I know where I am).

While we're here, general lolita thread?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:26:00 No.4391049 Report

Quoted By: >>4391073

I like it, and I'm jelly of your cute hair. What's your jewelry look like? Any closeups?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:27:00 No.4391054 Report

Quoted By: >>4391075 >>4391093

I would ditch the bunny necklace and put the gears necklace on a longer chain, and maybe have more neatly-styled hair, but other than that you look quite lovely and I can't find much to nitpick. Well done.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:29:00 No.4391059 Report

Quoted By: >>4391093

Looks good! Only thing to add to what's already been said is that I would wear a different bracelet. Maybe something more steampunk or leather to match with the gears necklace.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:31:00 No.4391066 Report

Quoted By: >>4391093

The bunny necklace the the bracelet ruin it for me. Everything else is lovely.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:31:00 No.4391068 Report

Quoted By: >>4391093

Looks overall good to me, but I don't like the necklaces. Neither of them look good on their own, and both together look worse.
The earrings look a little too big to me, the heaviness and blackness clashes with the otherwise cute outfit.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:31:00 No.4391070 Report

Quoted By: >>4391093

I like it, and your hair is really cute.

I don't think the sweet necklace goes with it the rest of it though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:31:00 No.4391071 Report

Quoted By: >>4391093

This actually looks really good imo. I really like the tights you're wearing, but I think if you found some in the same color with an argyle or diamond pattern, they would tie in with the dress really nice. Also a pair of light weight wrist length gloves might look good.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:31:00 No.4391073 Report

Quoted By: >>4391089

>>4391049
I was so nervous about using my real hair with all the wig use going on in lolita these days. Plus it was so windy and this was the end of the day, it looks so messy :( Thank you!

Pic is my jewelry besides rings/necklaces.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:32:00 No.4391075 Report

Quoted By: >>4391089 >>4391142

I don't see much wrong with it. I think>>4391054is right, ditch the bunny. I'd also like to see some sort of headdress or bow, rather than a flower, but that's just me.

Other than that, nothing. I love the belt. But ditch the pose. Holding your skirt like that just makes it look like you're missing a petti and I hate it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:32:00 No.4391077 Report

Quoted By: >>4391087 >>4391142

It's okay. Personally I don't like the tights and the shoes. The belt is to big imo, and your necklaces and orchid headpiece don't fit with your theme. I kind of wish you were wearing a blouse but I know it's summer so I don't this it's necessary.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:32:00 No.4391078 Report

Quoted By: >>4391142

I like it, even though I'm not a big fan of the print. The only things I would change are 1) no sweets jewelry, and 2) brown headbow or hairpiece. I hope that helps.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:32:00 No.4391079 Report

Quoted By: >>4391142 >>4391309

I think you need to lighten up on the eye makeup

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:33:00 No.4391082 Report

Quoted By: >>4391142

i don't know enough lolita to be able to give a helpful critique, but /you/ are so pretty! I love your hair and smilie, it makes you look so sweet.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:34:00 No.4391087 Report

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>>4391077

never mind about the gear necklace. Looked like a black blob in your op.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:34:00 No.4391089 Report

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>>4391073
Aww fuck man, those nose rings were a bad idea. I'm glad you're wearing the tiniest studs possible.

I agree with>>4391075, learn to pose. Work on it in the mirror, or something.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 03:37:00 No.4391093 Report

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>>4391054
>>4391059
>>4391066
>>4391068
>>4391070
>>4391071

Thank you all, points noted! I had a feeling the bunny necklace looked off, but I love to support my friends who make jewelry-I'll do without it and the other more delicate jewelry next time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 04:51:00 No.4391142 Report

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>>4391075
Thank you, I definitely want to make a head piece of some kind, I ran out of time for the event we were attending.
I took a ton of pictures "posing" but I felt like they all looked like I was trying to be a supakawaiiweeaboo. Will practice!

>>4391077
Thanks for your opinion, I feel like fully shirred OPs look strange with blouses, but that's just me.

>>4391078
Thanks!

>>4391079
I overdid it on the makeup a bit because I always look back at pictures of myself at conventions and think I don't have nearly enough makeup on compared to others. I'll work on it, still thought I had less on than most girls who do the thick liquid eyeliner, false lashes, etc.

>>4391082
Aww thank you!

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 05:17:00 No.4391175 Report

Quoted By: >>4391218

no1s gunna comment on dat friend? XD

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 05:42:00 No.4391218 Report

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>>4391175
No one cares. OP made a thread asking for opinions on her, not her friend. Stay on topic.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 06:14:00 No.4391309 Report

Quoted By:

>>4391079
I think it looks fine.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 07:21:00 No.4391526 Report

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you look great! I'd like to see the outfit with either heels or higher shoes (rocking horse or whatever.) I think it would make you stand out even more!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 07:40:00 No.4391598 Report

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I don't have anything to add but I just want to congratulate you on having the balls to come on here and ask for real criticism.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 09:06:00 No.4391920 Report

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I thought that dress was supposed to be pink, looks purple to me. Lolita needs more purple.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 09:08:00 No.4391939 Report

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quit bumping this attention whoring thread.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 09:09:00 No.4391941 Report

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I'm almost tired of seeing this dress, but I do love the belt with it! It makes it breaks it up and bit and works well with the colours. I think if would be awesome if you made a bit more of a steampunk twist to it. Some awesome boots and a little leather jacket. IDK.
You look cute as it is too.
I'm curious how it would look with a gibson girl hair-do

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2011 20:48:00 No.4393544 Report

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It's a good outfit imo and you're hella pretty. You look like Courtney Love before she got old and busted.

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