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Anonymous Tue 03 May 2011 03:45:00 No.25581816 View View Reply Original Report

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This is my first time on /co/.
I just come to you all with a critique of this.

I made some webcomics about a year ago and never decided to release them due to thinking theyre rubbish. So i'd like you all to give your thoughts on it. It's just a rough thing I did in flash but all creative criticism is greatly appreciated.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 03 May 2011 03:49:00 No.25581892 Report

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It's not really funny.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 03 May 2011 03:52:00 No.25581952 Report

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- Don't export the image so large. No one likes having to resize the work to read it, and being a stick strip, there's no details that are brought out by being so large.
- The joke has too much of an expository setup. Show, don't tell. Then, the punchline is just a backtracking of that exposition. It doesn't work.
- Too much copy-paste. Drawing skill isn't a necessity with webcomics, but I'd recommend trying harder, at least enough to differentiate characters without putting large labels that explain who they are.
- Pick a more legible font.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 03 May 2011 03:55:00 No.25582034 Report

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Should have ended in "Carrot Top Tea". Tea made from Carrot Top.

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