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Anonymous !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:44:00 No.26693921 View View Reply Original Report

I understand that /co/ created one in the past, but it's 2011 and she's not quite used anymore. So for this year, I was thinking that as a /co/mmunity, we could work together with submitting ideas and drawings to make a mini comic for this new hero.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:45:00 No.26693944 Report

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Well she needs to have some tits and ass

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:45:00 No.26693966 Report

Quoted By: >>26694107

make her Cassandra cain, in fact let's just rewrite her and make her our /co/ hero

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:46:00 No.26693980 Report

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She is Cirno in a cape with big muscles

Endpiece

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Endpiece Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:46:00 No.26693987 Report

Quoted By: >>26694297 >>26698609

Here's my suggestion. Costume colours need some tweaking though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:47:00 No.26693990 Report

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should she be teenage or delicious mid to late 30 milf age?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:47:00 No.26694007 Report

Quoted By: >>26694064 >>26694752

Asian in a wheelchair.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:48:00 No.26694015 Report

Quoted By: >>26694221 >>26694752 >>26694794

>>26693921
As I recall, the heroines that /co/ has made have tended toward the busty side. I, for one, would support the notion of making a female superlady who is not ample in bust nor buttocks. A character with a more athletic build.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:48:00 No.26694029 Report

Quoted By: >>26694055

Why female?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:48:00 No.26694033 Report

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I have an idea like making her a psychopathic that has the power to swallow her foes.

She shows off her huge belly and removes it in public, to warn others before committing crimes, she begins belching, as she digests her foes body and takes a fat turd.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:49:00 No.26694048 Report

Quoted By: >>26694297

Slut Girl

ONCE A MILD MANNERED CALL GIRL, SHANIQWA JONES LEARNED THAT SHE WAS ACTUALLY AN ALIEN FROM THE PLANET VAGINA 4 IN THE FALLOPIAN GALAXY!

USING HER POWERS OF ULTRA SLUTTINESS, SHE SCOURS THE WORLD FIGHTING CRIME!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:49:00 No.26694055 Report

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>>26694029

Why not

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:49:00 No.26694064 Report

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>>26694007
Actually, I like this one. Just needs a little bit more.

Asian in a wheelchair who pilots a transformer?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:49:00 No.26694069 Report

Quoted By: >>26694122 >>26694752

She has no legs so she kinda hovers, and like no arms but she can shoot lightning out of her eyes or something. Also, she's black

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:50:00 No.26694088 Report

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She needs to be either asian or black

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:51:00 No.26694107 Report

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>>26693966

I'm down with this.

We can rebuild her, gentlemen

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:51:00 No.26694114 Report

Quoted By: >>26694151

I vote asian because asians are cute.
And I'll be fucked if I don't want to fuck her.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:51:00 No.26694122 Report

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>>26694069

so, mind quad's black female sidekick?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:52:00 No.26694151 Report

Quoted By: >>26697166

>>26694114

Asians aren't cute with that annoying high pitch voice, But I don't mind an asian one

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:53:00 No.26694181 Report

Quoted By: >>26697166

If she IS asian, please don't make her into a godamn generic japanese anime character.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:54:00 No.26694204 Report

Quoted By: >>26694230 >>26694252

Would she have powers?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:54:00 No.26694221 Report

Quoted By: >>26694752

>>26694015
I've always liked the idea of a thin athletic supergirl wearing fake breasts as part of her cape persona. Best of both worlds that way.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:55:00 No.26694230 Report

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>>26694204

No

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:55:00 No.26694252 Report

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>>26694204

I think she needs to be a superhero like Batman. She has no powers and uses gadgets and other stuff to help her

Judge Anon

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Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:56:00 No.26694264 Report

Quoted By: >>26694314 >>26700000

A female detective, private or not, gains the ability to relive the last 10 seconds of whatever she touches/focuses on, at great expense of her already quite tired mind. She finds herself dragged into incresingly strange cases and having to deal with a weakening grasp of time brought about by the effect of her newfound abilities on her brain.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:56:00 No.26694268 Report

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She should just be a Giant boob with a vagina.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:57:00 No.26694297 Report

Quoted By: >>26695422 >>26696613

>>26693987
Looks cool. Is there a back story?
>>26694048
There's already a series with that name.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:57:00 No.26694314 Report

Quoted By: >>26694408

>>26694264

Does it only work on dead/broken things?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 05:58:00 No.26694318 Report

Quoted By: >>26694382 >>26694742 >>26694752

>>26694252
Not to change the direction of the story here, but I think we're going with the wrong non-powered basis here.

Maybe a little less Batman, and a bit more Ironman?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:00:00 No.26694382 Report

Quoted By: >>26694786

>>26694318

Like a female ironman? I love it

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:01:00 No.26694408 Report

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>>26694314
I'd go with yes, and add inanimate objects. So the shock of having to "feel" inanimate or dead is what plays havoc with her mind, along with the time issues. Add something to the old "relive trauma of dead person" psychic cliche. How does it feel to be a piece of furniture, or an entire room?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:02:00 No.26694432 Report

Quoted By: >>26694673 >>26694752

Wait, is she supposed to be representative of /co/?

Because if that's the case I think she should be eloquently angry all the time about matters that are not really of any consequence. She's also probably a lesbian, but only for fat girls because they don't perpetuate the traditional concept of beauty but secretly it's because she has that kind of ridiculous fetish, and she denies it with levels of misogyny approaching the likes of Robert Plant because one probably broke her heart in the past. She needs goggles for shipping and no cape because capes are shit.

Also asian and in a wheelchair, I guess.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:08:00 No.26694580 Report

Quoted By: >>26694610

Imagine a female version of Captain Atom.. but without the shining skin. Instead she has an aura that covers her when she uses her powers. She moans a lot when is "absorbing" energy. This secretly will give her sexual pleasure but only the writers will know it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:09:00 No.26694610 Report

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>>26694580
I should read the OP's text next time.
Seriously guys. Stop posting images with text on them.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:10:00 No.26694648 Report

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Were-Cave Woman.
Jaunitta Gomez was a mild mannered flight attendant until she was doused in neanderthal DNA and squashed by a "portable" DNA reader from the cargo hold.

She survived, only to discover that anger or her period triggers a transformation into a 8ft tall semi-attractive Were-Cave Woman!

It's kind of a She-Hulk rip off, but it could be fun.

poopy

poopy Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:11:00 No.26694673 Report

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>>26694432
what did you do to Darkseid

What the Hell!!!

What the Hell!!! Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:11:00 No.26694678 Report

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Why bother? Nothing ever comes of it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:12:00 No.26694702 Report

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Her power is to fart superbad.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:13:00 No.26694742 Report

Quoted By: >>26694842

>>26694318
So are we going with the "asian girl in a wheelchair" storyline, only the wheelchair transforms into an exoskeleton similar to Iron Man's that lets her fight crime? Because I'd read the fuck out of that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:14:00 No.26694752 Report

Quoted By: >>26694842

>>26694007
>>26694015
>>26694069
>>26694221
>>26694318
>>26694432

So we've got bitter, jaded legless asian with an athletic build who dons fake tits and robot legs to fight crime.

I'm... I'm okay with this.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:15:00 No.26694786 Report

Quoted By: >>26694862

>>26694382
See, here's what I'm thinking. You've got this young woman, bright, booksmart, tech-savvy, and she wants to fight crime to make the world a better place. Problem is, she's a bit short on cash. So a lot of the tech she uses is invented and hodgepodged, with her armor sporting a very junkyard-tech look as a result.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:15:00 No.26694794 Report

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>>26694015
>athletic
>no ass

C'MON MAN

Eddie

Eddie Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:16:00 No.26694827 Report

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/co/nrad with tits.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:17:00 No.26694842 Report

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>>26694742
>>26694752
Clearly, the girl was an athlete, probably a marathon runner or a martial artist, who became jaded because she could never reach the fame of her more beautiful friends, and a lot of boys were even afraid of her and what she could do. Then an accident came and she lost her legs, and she was suddenly unable to do even what she most enjoyed. But a scientist, either a friend of her family or a close friend of hers, offered to put her as "test driver" for a prototype new exoskeleton. During the first trials, she ended up saving the lab from a bunch of terrorists who wanted the prototype to help arm their army, and so she became a hero.
She puts on fake tits because she still has some image issues.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:17:00 No.26694855 Report

Quoted By: >>26694890 >>26694936 >>26694978 >>26695050

Basically a female Rocketeer.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:17:00 No.26694862 Report

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>>26694786
Her grandfather owns a junkyard, which is where she gets all her material from.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:18:00 No.26694890 Report

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>>26694855
And we would all read the fuck out of that.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:19:00 No.26694936 Report

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>>26694855
Marvel beat you to the punch: a character in the new Mystery Men series is called the Aviatrix.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:20:00 No.26694945 Report

Quoted By: >>26695010 >>26695077

Ok I read the thread and would the character have to be a stand alone character with no relation to /co/ kind of a original character do not steal?

Or is she supposed to be the embodiment of /co/ as it stands to date? Kind of a mixing pot of the anons who post here? I don't want to bring in internet personalities including my own.

I'll try and come up with a short something when people respond

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:21:00 No.26694978 Report

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>>26694855

No actual powers, just a jetpack, and maybe something to make her punches and kicks stronger.

And she fights crime, and invaders... in an idealized art deco world with a golden gleam to it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:22:00 No.26695010 Report

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>>26694945
We could just imply it and not explicitly make the connection. Like call her The Cobalt Cripple or something.

Judge Anon

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Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:23:00 No.26695050 Report

Quoted By: >>26695151

>>26694855
ON SECOND THOUGHT, you know what? Make her Amelia Earhart. Turns out that she disappeared when she flew straight into a battle between aliens running away from their despotic government, and though she managed to help them escape, she was badly wounded in the effort. Concerned about her health, the alien rebels merged her with her plane, turning her into a flying engine of liberty, a swooping symbol of freedom, a jolting jet of justice and judgement, who even now fights a covert battle against an insidious enemy that lives and plots within our very borders!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:23:00 No.26695077 Report

Quoted By: >>26695145 >>26695178 >>26695185

>>26694945
No, don't bring in internet personalities, we didn't do that for the other characters we created. She's just a jaded, legless asian Iron Woman who built a suit from the scraps lying around her grandfather's junkyard.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:25:00 No.26695117 Report

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How about we make a female Superhero who was accused by a supervillian of rape, so there's a sudden rise in Super-Villiany from over-weight nerds who want to get raped by her. That's kinda an original story.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:25:00 No.26695145 Report

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>>26695077
TONIA STARK BUILT THIS IN A JUNKYARD

WITH A BOX OF SCRAPS

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:26:00 No.26695151 Report

Quoted By: >>26695185 >>26695206

>>26695050
Only if she looks like this.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:26:00 No.26695178 Report

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>>26695077
I find it kind of tough to believe that an asian from the track team could build robot legs from scraps. They tend to pick one thing and obsess about it until they win or kill themselves. Plus a cripple with poor body image doing all this herself is really sad.

I think she needs a kid genius friend behind her gear or something.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:27:00 No.26695180 Report

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Steam powered robot tits?

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:27:00 No.26695185 Report

Quoted By: >>26695238

>>26695077
Ok I'm all for ignoring /co/ then but doesn't adding the whole made robot from scraps in gran's basement kind of uncreative?

How about she was a former engineer who dropped out due to laziness and got a job at an auto shop where she met this old professor who got sacked for exposing himself due to a tumor in his head that gave him an death date.

>>26695151
I second this whole heartedly

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:27:00 No.26695206 Report

Quoted By: >>26695238

>>26695151
You bet your ass she'd look like that. Maybe with an eyepatch or something, or some small scars on a side of her face.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:28:00 No.26695238 Report

Quoted By: >>26695348

>>26695206
>>26695185
I would like to keep these two separate characters. They're both great on their own.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:28:00 No.26695240 Report

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But she's actually a man.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:30:00 No.26695305 Report

Quoted By: >>26695454

BETTY MCPUNCH

HER POWER

IS TO PUNCH THINGS WITH SUPERPOWERS

AND AN ASSORTMENT OF GADGETS ALL OPERATED BY PUNCHING

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:31:00 No.26695346 Report

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Bioia:Imagine a 6'5 giant purple naked woman(without nipples, vigina,mouth,ear or nose,butshe does have DAT ASS and DEM tittays),she has superstrength,invunitivilty,short range electric attacks,and substained breathing system in suit.
Story:Her brother,a brillent biogeniectist,was working on the bio suit program.She's herself is a detective. Her brother wanted no one to steal his suit so he makes it where only his D.N.A can access one.One day her brother tries out a new suit and it controls him.She is called in by the F.B.I the pilot one of her brothers suits.She doesn't want to be a hero just to save her brother,most of the time she does some F.B.I missions.Her brother has superstrength,superstrong skin electric shielding

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:31:00 No.26695348 Report

Quoted By: >>26695418 >>26695454

>>26695238
Make one a robot, and the other could be the builder.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:34:00 No.26695418 Report

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>>26695348
But I'm in love with both of their backstories already.

I'm sure they could coexist without relying on each other.

Endpiece

Endpiece Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:34:00 No.26695422 Report

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>>26694297

Do you want the long or short version?

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:35:00 No.26695454 Report

Quoted By: >>26695509 >>26695628 >>26695684

>>26695305
Betty is a great 1900s name so I think if she was to look like Amelia Earheart from Night of the Museum that would be fitting.

She would also need to the slick talk and fast pace of the 1900s as well

>>26695348
That could be an interesting concept. It could be a buddy cop character team but how robotic are we talking?

Android, Cyborg, Robot, Synthoid, etc

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:36:00 No.26695484 Report

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PAULA BUNYAN

WHO CHANGED HER NAME AFTER SHE REALIZED THAT SHE COULD SUMMON AND CONTROL AN IMMENSE, MOBILE STATUE OF PAUL BUNYAN

AND BABE THE BLUE OX

IT'S LIKE BIG O WITH TOURIST ATTRACTIONS

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:36:00 No.26695509 Report

Quoted By: >>26695765

>>26695454
Robot like you can't tell they are a robot until the casing is removed?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:38:00 No.26695561 Report

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Ok so she's a mentally unstable highschool girl, and she rides around on the shoulder of this giant war mech.

She found it in an old abandoned military complex, happened to activate it and the thing recognized her as it's owner. When she brought her boyfriend to show it to him though, a tragic mistake caused it to respond and kill the boy because it thought it was protecting her from him or something.

This did a number on her mind understandably, and she now believes her boyfriends spirit resides within the war machine, and recognizes it for all intents and purposes *as* her boyfriend. All it cares about is protecting her. I suppose she could just as easily pilot the thing and ride inside, but I think it's important to show a distinction of the two as separate beings, which having her ride on it demonstrates.

Naturally though there are people that would want to separate the two of them, and so aside from living on the run and fighting crime or villains when she sees fit, she has to worry about people like other heroes, the government, etc...

>tl;dr a crazy highschool girl falls in love with Liberty Prime and rides around on it's shoulder to fight crime

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:38:00 No.26695574 Report

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LUCY LUX

TOTALLY NOT A RADIUM GIRL

WITH THE POWER TO LASER

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:39:00 No.26695628 Report

Quoted By: >>26695765

>>26695454
Clockwork innards instead of electrical parts.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:40:00 No.26695645 Report

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Has the gender of The Salmon been determined? I mean, it could even be a running joke, similar to that of the TF2 pyro. Never really sure of which gender The Salmon is, simply because The Salmon is always referred to as the gender-neutral The Salmon.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:41:00 No.26695684 Report

Quoted By: >>26695738 >>26695889

>>26695454
"Battlin" Betty Volare, daring aeroplane pilot of the 20th century! Men wanted her and women wanted to be like her! A pioneer, an adventurer, and a nation's sweetheart! A heart that was broken when she disappeared in a freak electrical storm during one of her longest flights ever.
Turns out that she's spent the last 70 or so years travelling through space righting wrongs and fighting for what's right, and is now returning to Earth hot on the heels of a diabolical extraterrestrial conspiracy to consume our planet's atmosphere and turn it into energy for their war machines.
But Battlin' Betty knows that the best way to fight your enemy is on your own terms -- in your own backyard. And for Betty, the entire sky is her yard... and she ain't givin' those two-timin', two-dime alien ding-a-lings a single darn inch of it!

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:43:00 No.26695731 Report

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Seems like we're getting more into the Earhart concept.
I'm saving this for future draw threads.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:43:00 No.26695738 Report

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>>26695684

Hey, good job. This reads pretty well.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:44:00 No.26695765 Report

Quoted By: >>26695891

>>26695509
>>26695628

Ok so engineer girl wasn't so good at making robots so she make your run of the mill one.

Cool, and to mirror this use of primitive technology she has made a female character from the 1900s.

So our hero is an engineer drop out who is Asian who is legless and friendless. She has an athletic build that stems from, ironically, running track and playing football. During her legless years she built a robot who looks like Amelia Earheart and has a 1900s fast talking American accent.

Anything I missed?

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

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Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:48:00 No.26695889 Report

Quoted By: >>26695959

>>26695684
Glorious

I want this in somehow but I can't think of anything just yet

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:48:00 No.26695891 Report

Quoted By: >>26695955

>>26695765
Should there be a quirky pet that is not normally used a a pet by people?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:49:00 No.26695938 Report

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Farmer Brown (2243 AD)

Droughts. Over population. Fires. Pesticide immune insects/bacteria. Pollution. Over reliance on a small number of hardy genetically modified plant lines.

Clearly, the last generation had it pretty rough. That's not even including the super humans running around. Funny thing is, they didn't fair much better. Lifting planes, and flying around while shooting laser beams out of your eyes uses alot of calories.

Luckily, the Amish were in the position to swoop in half-way save the day. A lot of freedom's a small price to pay for three meals a day. Alabama Cyrus tolerated knitting/cooking/cleaning/gardening while the boys farmed or got super powers through significant coincidence.

That changed when one her watermelons turned out to be an explosive genetically altered watermelon. The blast caked her genes giving her control over plants. Unfortunately women belong in the kitchen and the Amish don't take kindly to women super hero'n it up. Thankfully, she's got a fake beard and some overalls

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:49:00 No.26695955 Report

Quoted By: >>26696061

>>26695891
of course!

What did you have in mind?

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:49:00 No.26695959 Report

Quoted By: >>26696068 >>26696113

>>26695889
Our asian inventor girl gets into it by mistake. Betty becomes her reluctant mentor at first, and eventually warms up to her and they become close friends. Maybe the girl is a fan of her, of the spirit of adventure and excitement, and kinda reminds her of those days of happiness and joy, of the sheer pleasure of flying higher than anyone.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:52:00 No.26696032 Report

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A DIY, highly improvisational time-traveller.

Sure she fights crime, but hers is more a business model for problem-solving. Your car gets a flat? You hire her, and it turned out that your tires were changed the night before, preventing issue. You slip and break an arm? You hire her, and you found that a matress happened to be there when you fell. Supervillain robbing a bank? You hire her, and things get interesting...

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:53:00 No.26696061 Report

Quoted By: >>26696113 >>26696196

>>26695955
I don't know. Maybe something that is extinct?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:53:00 No.26696068 Report

Quoted By: >>26696149 >>26696196

>>26695959
Hero and sidekick, with both female? I cannot express how okay with that I am.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:54:00 No.26696113 Report

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>>26695959
A impressionable adult who the mentor is trying to vicariously live her life through

Genius! This opens up a lot of chance for mental instability and conflict.

>>26696061
Like a dodo bird? I love it!

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:55:00 No.26696149 Report

Quoted By: >>26696244

>>26696068
So Betty starts out as this super-serious no-nonsense kinda hero, and she's kind of a bitch to the girl, but after a while she warms up to her and finally reveals who she is... and it turns out the girl is a big fan of her, since she was always inspired by her desire to go beyond, to fly further and faster than anyone else, and that rekindles the flame of adventure into Betty's half-human heart, and by the end of a week she's doing loop-de-loops and barrel rolls and drawing shapes in the sky.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:57:00 No.26696196 Report

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>>26696068
Same here, I think this concept is really going to good places.
>>26696061
Velociraptor?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:58:00 No.26696234 Report

Quoted By: >>26696344

I am so lost.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:59:00 No.26696244 Report

Quoted By: >>26696360

>>26696149
Oh my God, I can't tell you how ok I am with these characters. I really hope you actually stick to this story, /co/, instead of just brainstorming and letting it fizzle like other projects you've done.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 06:59:00 No.26696251 Report

Quoted By:

Rapey A. McPregnated

Her full middle name is abusedinabadrelationship.

She would fit right in with the DC universe.

malicious-alice

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malicious-alice Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:00:00 No.26696311 Report

Quoted By: >>26696360 >>26696386 >>26697462 >>26700095

lol idk

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:01:00 No.26696337 Report

Quoted By:

Kinda interested in this. Wouldn't mind scribbling up a design for a /co/ super heroine if you guys could come up with and agree on her looks and such.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:01:00 No.26696344 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696234
Amelia Earhart-styled heroine comes back after disappearing for 70 years to battle evil corporations, builds an exoskeleton for a legless, jaded, former track runner Asian girl. Cue superheroic shenanigans.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:02:00 No.26696360 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696244
I'd be willing to write or co-write something like this. Gimme a moment and I'll try to write down a small bit of dialogue.

>>26696311
I dig! The wings remind me of Silverhawks. I still think she should wear an eyepatch, tho'.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:02:00 No.26696386 Report

Quoted By: >>26696532

>>26696311
We have a Betty!

We need a name for our legless engineer heroine though

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:06:00 No.26696516 Report

Quoted By: >>26696584 >>26696736

At the very fucking beginning we establish that she has a boyfriend already. His purpose will be that she really loves him and he keeps her grounded to reality. He does not know she is a superhero. Under no circumstances will he be used as a plot device like being held hostage, breaking up with her, rival love interest, or dying for the sake of drama.

Like Alfred he rarely makes an appearance and when he does, he doles out the wise advice and unlike Alfred he also is there for random sexy time or relaxing montages.

This way we don't have major plot points revolving around how our heroine makes awful decisions to save her love muffin unlike every single male-hero that feature a love interest in every form of media ever. I would instantly nominate for excellence any story that uses this relationship model, even for male heroes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:07:00 No.26696532 Report

Quoted By: >>26696845

>>26696386
Well, if we're sticking with the asian theme, Amami means beautiful sky in Japanese, you could do something with that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:07:00 No.26696551 Report

Quoted By:

Her only power is she's impossibly hard to kill. And not invulnerability, or fast healing, she just can't seem to die. And that's it, she doesn't have any other skills or powers. Heck, she might not even have an actual power, she's just impossibly hard to kill.

She figures she can fight crime, uses a gun or a sword maybe, but she's really just terrible. About what you could expect of an average person, but against villains and armed criminals or even thugs she's bound to fail, but she never gives up! Most situations will revolve around her trying to stop a crime, and seeing how much punishment she can take before either the villains give up, or cause themselves to fail by some flaw in their plan.

>Tries to stop a bank robbery, jumping through a window yelling "HII-YAH!", but gets shot in the head or hit by a car or thrown off a building
>"Ow... fuck that hurt! You're gonna pay!"

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:08:00 No.26696584 Report

Quoted By: >>26696774

>>26696516
That is a very good idea, top marks anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:09:00 No.26696590 Report

Quoted By:

Will there be secret identities and costumes?

Endpiece

Endpiece Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:09:00 No.26696613 Report

Quoted By: >>26697734 >>26698609

>>26694297
>Looks cool. Is there a back story?

There is, but it's pretty complicated. The basic pitch is "a tag-team whose weaponry is a fusion of Spider-Man and Iron Man". Said weapon is actually the suit you see in the picture - it grants superstrength/speed and masterful use of the suit's claws (left claw Crab, right claw Pistol Shrimp) lets you swing around town or sweep crowds of mooks off their feet - though the suit overheats fairly easily and battles are usually interrupted by the person wearing it swinging out of battle to 'tag in' their partner. That spells trouble if hiding spots are slim, the enemy takes chase or something else comes between the partners.

The girl is an orphan who comes to a small town because of a woman who declares herself to be the country's (and subsequently the world's) first superhero - the girl wants to call shenanigans because her parents were covert heroes for the British government. The father and mother (part-Polish), reminiscent of Gatchaman, were joint second-in-command of a particular squadron - joined by a Frenchman who specialises in fighting with his feet, a mysterious hood/ten-gallon-hat/longcoat-wearing Italian vigilante with four bandaged arms, and the French aviator and commander of the squadron. Why is the girl coming to this town now? Because it's the centre of an 'elaborate hoax' that her parents were involved in, and one of the first 'villains' the 'superhero' defeats to prove her point the Frenchman who was greivously injured in the aforementioned incident, to the point of having his legs amputated and his barely scraping enough money together to afford stumpy cyborgnic implants is an all-too familiar face for our girl.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:11:00 No.26696676 Report

Quoted By: >>26696816

"Well girly, there you go. That's it, my worst-kept secret, all laid out nice and proper-like for your eyes to gaze upon. Betty Volare, that's what they used to call me, back when they still remembered me. Ever heard of Icarus? Handsome fellow, dropped from the skies like an anvil on a cartoon coyote for trynna fly too close to the sky? That's me, or at least, that's the story of my life. Flew too darn close and burnt down, only instead'a falling down, I only kept climbin'. And climbin'. 'TIll all I could see of Earth was a shiny blue ball in the middle of nothing, and then, just nothing. But now I'm back, and to be quite honest, Earth is lookin' just as alien as any other planet I've visited. Icarus and me. Whotta couple, huh? Two fools heading towards the stars. At least people remember him."
"I remember you. I've always remembered you. Even though I... I never met you, I always felt like... like we were friends. Heh, stupid, I know. But... Every time my parents would ground me, I thought of you. I thought 'I'm sure Betty Volare's parents never grounded HER!'. Because you couldn't be grounded. You'd never have let them. You were the one who flew higher than anyone else, who made heaven her home, sweet home, who disappeared with her head in the skies and her eyes towards the sun! You were my hero, Betty. In a way, I guess you still are."
"I'm no hero, girlie. Like Icarus, I'm just a darn ol' fool."
"Well, maybe you are, and maybe I'm a fool too, but you know what? I think this world could use more fools like us. How about we go find out?"

animoose

animoose Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:13:00 No.26696736 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696516

I very much support this idea. Hopefully the boyfriend doesn't end up being a quiet Marty Stu.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:14:00 No.26696774 Report

Quoted By: >>26696900

>>26696584

Hey what about that for a superheroine? A female version of Kamina?

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:15:00 No.26696816 Report

Quoted By: >>26697003 >>26697005

>>26696676
Wonderful but I'm not really getting much out of the narration of Amami. She sounds eager to meet her childhood hero yes but is there anyway you could add a little more depravity from her?

She's supposed to be jaded and friendless. She has no legs and that made her curse the world. All she did was dream of going where people only dreamed of and now she's stuck in a chair. Forced to sit and watch as the world passes her by.

Love the dialogue of Betty though, really spot on.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:16:00 No.26696845 Report

Quoted By: >>26696887

>>26696532
And Shou means to soar. Amami Shou? I kind of like it. Are you guys ok with this, or should her name be more americanized?

Are we ok with a Jap

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:17:00 No.26696887 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696845
Whoops, didn't mean for that to get cut off. What I meant to say was, are we ok with a Japanese name, rather than a Korean/Chinese/other Asian name?

Jackie Smazz !!h+W0Cdgvd+H

Jackie Smazz !!h+W0Cdgvd+H Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:17:00 No.26696891 Report

Quoted By:

Alaskan girl with Adhesive Powers (can make things stick to each other).

She'll be called Ig-Glue.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:18:00 No.26696900 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696774

The badass mentor of a fledgling new potential superhero. He's not sure if he can, or even should use his new found powers for justice, but with a rousing speech or a kick in the right direction she'll convince him one way or the other.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:21:00 No.26697003 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696816
In that case, I'd add a bit of angry retort before her first dialogue:

>>"What, that's it? That's why you're such a bitch? You flew too high? At least you're able to fly! Even now, even when you should've been long dead, you're still flying! Look at me! I can't even WALK without this heap of junk! Do you have ANY idea what I'd give to be you for a day? Hell, for an HOUR?"
>>"And just what do you think you know about me, young lady?"

And then cue reveal that she's a fan.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:21:00 No.26697005 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696816
It could be that she's shocked out of her jaded view of life for one moment just by meeting Betty. I mean, it sounds like this would be their version of meeting Captain America. Even the most cynical of people would melt in his presence.

Luu

Luu Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:22:00 No.26697050 Report

Quoted By:

I love this tread.
Do they have the dodo or not?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:26:00 No.26697142 Report

Quoted By: >>26697173 >>26697208

Ok, we've got personalities, pics, and dialogue for our heroines. Now how about villains?

I would really, really like to see a hardass business woman as the main villain. The kind of woman who had to scratch and claw her way to the top and god damn it, she's not going to let some idealistic bitches take this hard-earned position away from her (if we're still going with the evil corporation idea). She's not an evil person, mind you, she's just got a mind and personality like a freight train - if you don't get out of the way, you're going to get run over.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:27:00 No.26697166 Report

Quoted By:

>>26694151
>>26694181
Jubilee is asian

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:27:00 No.26697173 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697142
Needs a hook hand.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:28:00 No.26697192 Report

Quoted By:

If the pet idea is done to some capacity, I like the idea of a Dodo bird. You could even draw parallels between it's flightlessness and Amami.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:28:00 No.26697208 Report

Quoted By: >>26697301

>>26697142
It's possible that she's an unwitting pawn of a secret cabal of alien invaders who, after having their asses kicked across half the universe by Betty, have decided to ruin her planet out of spite and hatred. So their plans range from trying to start wars to ecological disasters to all other manners of evil douchebagginess, and she's int he thick of it without even realizing it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:30:00 No.26697251 Report

Quoted By: >>26697405

How about a villain that pretends to be their friend. Maybe with a secret identity, or they just go about their crimes in a way that doesn't allow their face been seen.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:31:00 No.26697301 Report

Quoted By: >>26697378

>>26697208
Exactly! She fights the duo for a long time without realizing she's become a pawn, and when she does realize, she quits and fights the organization herself as a standalone antihero who sometimes helps the two, sometimes fights them.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:33:00 No.26697341 Report

Quoted By: >>26698711

Her name is Iron Curtain. A young Russian girl in a greatcoat, thick boots and a ushanka, wielding a hammer and sickle.

SHE FIGHTS FOR THE GLORY OF HER MOTHER RUSSIA.

Depending on where it takes place, she may not like the west and those capitalist pigs, but she hates crime and villains even more, almost as much as she hates Nazis. If taking down vile criminal scum means working on western soil or allying with capitalist pigs, so be it.

Actual superpower-wise she can seep and control molten iron from her body. Hence she has something of an iron curtain at her disposal and can use it for protection, or ensnaring opponents, making weapons, etc... she's skilled enough with her signature weapons though that she doesn't usually need her powers.

Bonus points if she exists in a time period like the modern day where communism and soviet Russia no longer exist. She still believes in it all though, of course.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:34:00 No.26697378 Report

Quoted By: >>26697454

>>26697301
What about an anti-villain

Anti-heroes have been quite an overexposed field.

Like the previous anon said she's a freight train she does what she needs to and she is familiar with getting to where she needs to be at the right time.

I don't want to think of her as a goodie goodie who is not afraid to break a few fingers but as a bad woman who is more than willing to kill someone but not too devious to let someone who can be spared go.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:35:00 No.26697405 Report

Quoted By: >>26697506

>>26697251
An inventor friend who builds a set of armor that is later used by a supervillain who apparently stole it from him. Our hero tries to comfort the guy and they seem to be hitting it up real good, then suddenly it turns out that he's using the armor to get himself some easy money. Cue big fight that ends with the guy running away with half his armor destroyed... and being picked up by the big evil boss, who offers him the one thing he's been missing these last few years. "A steady job."

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:36:00 No.26697441 Report

Quoted By: >>26697887

meh just fucking around with some design ideas. no story ideas to contribute.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:37:00 No.26697454 Report

Quoted By: >>26697510

>>26697378
Ok, I like it. Would she try to continue to move up in the ranks once she finds out she's been used as a pawn by the alien organization (she'd probably be very well received and highly promoted in a short amount of time, if she's that devious), or would she fight against them and form her own team?

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:37:00 No.26697462 Report

Quoted By: >>26697767

Incidentally but not to deviate we don't have a physical description of Amami. I really like the Betty drawn here >>26696311

malicious-alice

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malicious-alice Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:38:00 No.26697482 Report

Quoted By: >>26697510 >>26697528 >>26697656 >>26697666 >>26697887 >>26697997 >>26698198 >>26698588

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:38:00 No.26697492 Report

Quoted By:

I MTHRFCKNG LOVE THIS THREAD!

proceed

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:39:00 No.26697506 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697405
Yes

YESSSSS

Judge Anon

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Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:39:00 No.26697510 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697454
If she's REALLY devious and scheming, I see no reason why she couldn't do both.

>>26697482
>>what seems like a bobcut under the helmet
>>eyepatch
A woman after my own heart.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:40:00 No.26697528 Report

Quoted By: >>26697577 >>26697635

>>26697482

Fucking love it

But why does she have an eye patch? I missed most of this thrad

malicious-alice

malicious-alice Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:42:00 No.26697577 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697528
I dunno, Judge Anon sort of made that call, which I am ok with.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:44:00 No.26697635 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697528
Part of her backstory would be that she was wounded while trying to help a bunch of renegade aliens escape an evil empire, and for her troubles was "fused" with her aeroplane. By these pics, it's likely that she can "summon it" as an exo-skeleton/flying armor, like a 40s Centurion, but she can also fly without it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:45:00 No.26697656 Report

Quoted By: >>26697730

>>26697482

The eye patch needs a purpose, it shouldn't be added on for kicks. Was she stabbed in that eye?

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:45:00 No.26697666 Report

Quoted By: >>26698136

>>26697482

Inspring! This is going places

Now all we need is a picture of Amami, anybody got a particular hair style they like. I don't want to go with generic long/short hair.

Also we need to input the dodo somewhere because it really speaks to their need to fly and the dodo being a flightless bird.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:46:00 No.26697698 Report

Quoted By:

Survival

As long as Princess Vanessa Tepes smiled at the camera and kept her mouth shut, she was the top of the political food chain. Since her bloodline's directly responsible for the first vampires and were wolves, she just needed to be a trophy queen fro some vampire/wolf prince and she would've been set.

Her pranking lust ending up costing her everything. Turns out that leading on a werewolf and a vampire and pitting them against eachother for the lulz can have consequences.

The princess wakes up to find that she's been bitten by both and disowned for becoming "soiled". The two viruses battling inside her cause her shift to revert back to the last common ancestor between wolves and bats, the improperly classified platypus.

Carrying all the weaknesses of vampires/werwolves and none of their strengths, she's going to have to sneak her way back to the top.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:47:00 No.26697730 Report

Quoted By: >>26697841 >>26697866

>>26697656
What if it hid a high tech visual device that replaced an eye? X-ray vision and such.

Endpiece

Endpiece Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:47:00 No.26697734 Report

Quoted By: >>26698609

>>26696613

We don't learn much about the girl before and after she left town, other than odd details here and there - suffice it to say she gained foraging skills and a thirst for independance at the cost of her childhood, and a distrust for authority or other people being in command - she feels uncomfortable not being 'in control' of the situation, so while she likes the idea of being a team leader she's not fond of partnering up with people). Basically imagine a lion cub abandoned by its parents, left to fend for itself, living a tough but rewarding life of freedom for years - before being captured and caged in a zoo.

She's a terrible swimmer but wishes (and has wished since she was a child) to be a marine biologist. She has a pretty poor grasp on pop-culture. She also has a heavy thirst for action and gets stressed easily if she's not fighting, swinging, working out or doing physical exercise. On top of this she's fond of swindling people out of stuff (odds and ends, practical stuff) and trying to squeeze the most out of what she has even if people offer to give her stuff for free - it doesn't 'count' to her unless she does it herself and she hates to beg. She calls it 'being economical', 'thrifty' or 'practical-minded'; other people call it 'being a total tightwad'. All great qualities for a hero to play sideki-er, partner to! Despite all this she makes a very loyal, strong, cunning and charming friend - eventually.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:49:00 No.26697767 Report

Quoted By: >>26697866 >>26698198

>>26697462
I'm thinking Grace Park, as far as looks go.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:51:00 No.26697841 Report

Quoted By: >>26697856

>>26697730
It could be that the patch is hiding a mechanic eye that she uses when flying and essentially gives her a HUD/targeting system. But since the eye isn't the prettiest of sights, she tends to keep it hidden when around people. If she takes it off, then that's bettyvolarish for "someone's about to get their butts whooped".

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:52:00 No.26697854 Report

Quoted By:

I call her Complainica she has the awesome powers of double standard, high pitch whine and the ability to make $ disappear! Also any attackers or just random male people even look at her in a way she sees as disrespectful or lude they are instantly charged with sexual harassment! Her one weakness other women because she is raging lesbian.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:52:00 No.26697856 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697841

GENIUS

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:52:00 No.26697866 Report

Quoted By: >>26697998

>>26697730
This could go far seeing as she's as robot. Maybe she hides the eye because it exposes her robotic nature.

>>26697767
This look I like, we could also give her a uncaring face and defeated eyes.

Can someone draw this as she's in her wheelchair while trying to stare down the dodo. Dodo could be named something silly too.

Isnurf or something. Playing on the whole kooky nature dodos seems to have, (thanks Tiny Toons) but also it is a very laid back animal almost lazy

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:53:00 No.26697887 Report

Quoted By: >>26697967

>>26697441
this is really good
>>26697482
this is not,
too many fucking accessories, she looks like a superhero from a 60's tv show with even worse fashion sense, FUCK

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:55:00 No.26697967 Report

Quoted By: >>26698129

>>26697887
>she looks like a superhero from a 60's tv show

How is that a bad thing?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:56:00 No.26697997 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697482
I am having too much fun ripping on this cunt!
shehas saggy ass tits (they go down practically to her waist!)
fucking suspenders, even fucking hipsters know that looks fucking stupid.
a fucking eye-patch and a jesters hat, is she a retarded clown pirate?

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:56:00 No.26697998 Report

Quoted By: >>26698064 >>26698083 >>26698097

>>26697866
I'd go with "cyborg" more than full robot. Like, there's still a human heart somewhere in there. Cheesy, I know, but she's Amelia Earhart meets the Rocketeer with aliens. Cheesiness is not an obstacle, it's a goddamn main ingredient.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:59:00 No.26698064 Report

Quoted By: >>26698179

>>26697998
I agree

Don't want to make her seem to unhuman

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:59:00 No.26698065 Report

Quoted By: >>26698198

Want to draw but don't have time to read the whole thread.

Synopsis on design?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 07:59:00 No.26698083 Report

Quoted By: >>26698146 >>26698151

>>26697998
Brain floating in a glass jar in the head section, hidden under false coverings and hair?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:00:00 No.26698097 Report

Quoted By: >>26698324

>>26697998
Can we get some more dialogue from you, Judge? Maybe when Amami sees the suit Betty made for her for the first time, and she realizes she'll never have to be in a wheelchair again.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:01:00 No.26698129 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697967
it looks like this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X0UJaprpxrk

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:01:00 No.26698136 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697666

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:02:00 No.26698146 Report

Quoted By:

>>26698083
I wouldn't go that far. Perhaps make it so most of her head is mechanic, and the "jar" is her cranium. It's not that her body was completely rebuilt, more like it was burnt down and broken and later reinforced and enhanced with implants.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:02:00 No.26698151 Report

Quoted By:

>>26698083
... or half a brain, with the other half in a near identical evil lost twin.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:03:00 No.26698179 Report

Quoted By: >>26698255

>>26698064
>>26698064
It's plenty possible to have her be a full robot and still sympathize/relate to her. It's a little over used in anime, but it allows for the "what makes a person" deal just as much if not more than a cyborg.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:03:00 No.26698198 Report

Quoted By: >>26698435 >>26700369

>>26698065
Cyborg Amelia Earhart character, mentor to legless jaded asian girl who was a former track runner and engineer dropout, returns after being thought lost for 70 years. She builds an exoskeleton for asian girl, together they fight a big bad corporation being used as a pawn by aliens who have it out for cyborg aviator. We have a design for Betty here
>>26697482
and we've decided the asian girl looks like Grace Park
>>26697767
except with a more jaded, cynical face and no legs.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:06:00 No.26698255 Report

Quoted By: >>26698303

>>26698179
Additionally, a full robot kind allows to switch the debate around. Some of the science coming out now is starting to suggest that humans probably don't even meet the definition of human, free will wise. Who better than a robot to call folks out on that?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:07:00 No.26698303 Report

Quoted By: >>26698508

>>26698255
Doesn't that add an element of near-immortality that will make it harder to view the character's safety as ever really being in risk? A full robot can always be repaired as an easy plot device.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:08:00 No.26698324 Report

Quoted By: >>26698366

>>26698097
"Look, Amami, I'm many things, but I'm no liar. This suit... in theory, it works, but we can't be sure--"
"Will it let me walk again?"
"Yes, but your body doesn't have the mechanical doohickeys that mine have. We don't--"
"Will I be able to fly?"
"Not for prolonged distances, not for now at least, but--"
"And I'll never have to use the chair again."
"Hey, sweetie, are you even listenin'? It. Is. Not. Safe."
"I'm tired of safe! Safe is having to depend on someone else to cross the street or get inside a car. THAT'S safe. Screw safe. I've seen safe, and it's not pretty. If walking and running and flying is dangerous, then let's get CRAZY!"
"Heh, I'm startin' to think you already are..."

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

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Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:10:00 No.26698366 Report

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>>26698324

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:12:00 No.26698435 Report

Quoted By: >>26698496

>>26698198
And the Big Bad Bitch who's head of the Corporation has that really strict businesswoman look - severe bun with gray at the temples, horn-rimmed glasses (which she keeps on a chain), business dress suit, the works.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:14:00 No.26698496 Report

Quoted By: >>26698577 >>26698588 >>26698712

>>26698435
So basically the female version of that paper company guy from heroes?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:15:00 No.26698508 Report

Quoted By: >>26698608 >>26698625

>>26698303
Depends on what she's made of and how easy she is to repair. Plus it introduces the problem with materials strength/fatigue/repeat loading. If she's shown to be constantly repairing and repairing parts while looking busted, I think it adds a different kind of mortality if coupled with humans nursing their wounds. Additionally, if she shown having to spend more time ordering things or checking parts, it's shows a time constraint. Allows for more dialogue between her and other characters, atleast.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:15:00 No.26698514 Report

Quoted By:

Her name is the Tentaraper.

Instead of being constantly sexually violated as a beautiful female woman in comics wearing spandex she has dominion over tentacles that appear out of thin air.

During her intro arc it's revealed she's a sociopath who was actually the person who raped every other female superhero ever.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:16:00 No.26698560 Report

Quoted By: >>26698588 >>26698714

fuck your /co/ hero

you'll just draw some shitty fanart of some fucking hipster piece of shit female with giant tits I fucking hate /co/ since mlp moved in so maybe you can make her a fucking horse or something equally furry and gay too fuck you shit fuck

peace out this is my last message on this shitboard ever

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:17:00 No.26698577 Report

Quoted By: >>26698712

>>26698496
I didn't even think about the similarities, but yeah, you could say that.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:18:00 No.26698588 Report

Quoted By: >>26698712

>>26698496
She could even have his subtle undermining and manipulation

>>26698560
>Shitty fan art with big tits

Shhhhh no one show him >>26697482

You will be missed anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:18:00 No.26698608 Report

Quoted By: >>26698670

>>26698508
It also allows for emotions to be translated through glitches. For example, stress could be translated through shaking hands or having eyes recalibrate themselves. Most of these could still be used under the cyborg idea though.

Endpiece

Endpiece Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:18:00 No.26698609 Report

Quoted By:

>>26697734
>>26696613
>>26693987

...hmm. Think I might try making a comic out of this. Thanks for the thread, OP.

Snarky Bastard

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Snarky Bastard Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:19:00 No.26698625 Report

Quoted By: >>26698966

>>26698508

or she could just be a complete raging badass.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:21:00 No.26698670 Report

Quoted By: >>26698788

>>26698608
Unless it is animated, it could be hard to express mechanical twitches in a comic form.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:23:00 No.26698711 Report

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>>26697341
I like it

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:23:00 No.26698712 Report

Quoted By: >>26698816

>>26698496
>>26698577
>>26698588
Sorry /co/, I really like the superheroine duo you've come up with and would like to see more of them, but I really love this villain too. She needs a drawfag, stat.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:23:00 No.26698714 Report

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>>26698560
Gonna go out on a limb and say you probably didn't read much of this stuff. It's not epic, but I'm not sure that it deserved the MLP apocalypse you threw at it.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:26:00 No.26698788 Report

Quoted By: >>26699028

>>26698670
Shake lines are pretty easy. Also a calibration scene could be shown as a two panel blurry to clear image with a word box mentioning that it's taking more calibrations than usual. Throw in some small factoids about the physical aspects of stress and it should work easy enough.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:27:00 No.26698816 Report

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>>26698712
hmm...I'll see that I can do

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:31:00 No.26698889 Report

Quoted By: >>26698969 >>26699015 >>26699066

I just want to say, these threads never go anywhere.

Sure, maybe you do flesh out a character but then nothing happens with it. /co/ sucks at coming together as a group and getting shit done.

Just take for example that "convention" that one guy wanted to put together and had people working in teams to create comic strips. Remember when they actually went through with that?

Or that transsexual superhero someone created and tried to shove down our throats for a few months in hopes of getting some ideas down. It was stupid.

These things never work. Power to you, but, they just don't.

malicious-alice

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evil lady

malicious-alice Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:34:00 No.26698943 Report

Quoted By:

Sorry that my style keeps on swapping, it's kind of what I do.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:35:00 No.26698966 Report

Quoted By:

>>26698625
Plenty true. I just think there's a lot of potential in showing that being a super killing machine may not be as fun as one might think. It's like seeing how much maintenance is required for a plane or a tank and imagine being that plane or tank.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:35:00 No.26698969 Report

Quoted By: >>26699028

>>26698889
I know, we're great at characterization, but we suck at organization. Makes me sad, these are some really good ideas.

Maybe someone will take the idea from this thread and one day put it into a legitimate comic form. We can dream, anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:36:00 No.26699015 Report

Quoted By:

>>26698889
And what, exactly, are you contributing by saying that? You're the equivalent to the douchebag that has to tell everyone 'playing Guitar Hero doesn't mean you can ACTUALLY play an instrument, dumbass'.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:37:00 No.26699028 Report

Quoted By: >>26699110 >>26699231

>>26698788
Though it would add an interesting effect or two, I'm still not sold on the idea of full robotics. My premise was that she was straight up fused with her airplane, like the aliens thought the plane was another creature that was deathly wounded and agonizing, and so decided to use what was left of it to cure Betty's broken body. The alien tech is more like the "glue" that keeps it all together, in a metaphorical sense, though it could also be literal through some sort of techno-gel that allows her to summon an enclosed flying battle armor based on her old airplane. Like a pulp Centurion, y'know?
Still, a lot of effects could be used on that, as well as the general theme of loss of humanity. She's not entirely human, but she's not entirely robotic either. And who knows? Maybe there was something about her airplane after all. Maybe it wasn't a fusion of a human and a machine, but of two beings that created an entirely new one...

>>26698969
I'd be more than willing to write one or two scripts for this stuff.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:39:00 No.26699066 Report

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>>26698889
To be fair, a femal super hero would be a little easier to work with than a transexual. Honestly, I think the best way to get things started would be to start making reaction pics with her first to drum up a little more support. Then again, I don't know shit about doing shit, so it could just be a new way to fail.

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE

Inspector Redwood !Rcd8kmTONE Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:41:00 No.26699110 Report

Quoted By:

>>26699028
I wouldn't mind writing something as well. Maybe some adventure they have together but now it's 0:40 and I need to sleep

Make a thread tomorrow if this one 404s

Someone should try and log the information somehow. Don't want it all getting lost after all the effort we put into it

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:42:00 No.26699131 Report

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Extremely revealing clothing, also she can never be stronger than a male hero.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 08:47:00 No.26699231 Report

Quoted By:

>>26699028
Could be neat. You might want to check out a book called The Age of Spiritual Machines. There's a mini chapter describing a thought process of selecting dominant species from an outside perspective similiar to what your're talking about.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 09:11:00 No.26699871 Report

Quoted By: >>26699940

Done my scribble. Kinda rough, but I think it looks like how you guys described the villainess.
I kinda thought that maybe her edge would be that she saw how often crimes were being committed and made a way for her and her company to benefit from any crimes and such happening, so that other people's inconveniences could benefit herself in some way. The hero steps in and ruins this for her.
I'm half awake so most of the shit I'm suggesting is probably really stupid, so just enjoy the picture I suppose.

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 09:13:00 No.26699940 Report

Quoted By:

>>26699871
Maybe she's one of the pioneers in superpowered insurance premiums, and the head honchos of her company (the aliens in disguise) are connected to media networks that are riding a big wave of super-paranoia, so pretty much everyone is begging for her insurance policies.
The funny part here is that Amami and co. try to keep damage to a minimum, so in the end very few people ever get to cash in their insurances.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 09:16:00 No.26700000 Report

Quoted By:

>>26694264
Like the idea, but it was kind of done. Officer Macdonald from Gotham Central was a descendant of an older hero (forgot who).

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 09:20:00 No.26700095 Report

Quoted By:

>>26696311
LHOVE IT.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 10 Jun 2011 09:31:00 No.26700369 Report

Quoted By:

>>26698198
This sounds amazing if done right.

Indonesian Gentleman

Indonesian Gentleman Fri 10 Jun 2011 09:57:00 No.26700975 Report

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Bump for more superheroine brainstorming. I'd make Betty appear as a cameo in my own comic... if only I have time to get my shit together and draw it. Curse you, college!

Judge Anon

Judge Anon Fri 10 Jun 2011 10:02:00 No.26701077 Report

Quoted By:

I'm just gonna save this thread as a webpage in case we ever need it again. And I'd totally jump at a chance to write a script out of all this.

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