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[1373228964] Haikus【Creative】

VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 00:29:00 No.152091 View View Reply Original Report

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Haiku Thread. Your own, not your own, your favourite or something you found funny. All Haikus are welcome

Summer's beginning

Summer has arrived
Yet I am here and
Waiting for the rain to stop

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 04:52:00 No.152093 Report

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Haiku always have
Five syllables in the first
And third lines only

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 04:55:00 No.152094 Report

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Heron in my house
In my kitchen making mess
Pots and pans all over

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 04:59:00 No.152095 Report

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I messed it all up
An extra syllable used
No post deletion

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 09:41:00 No.152099 Report

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Have cold. Feel like shit
Why are these goddamn eggs so
Difficult to peel

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 10:42:00 No.152100 Report

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Ambiguity
Thousands of friends surround me
Yet I am alone

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 11:21:00 No.152102 Report

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>>3

Heroin is how
I read your haiku's first line
That made it funny

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 12:36:00 No.152103 Report

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Haiku do not work
in English, just as rhymes don't
work in Japanese.

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 14:52:00 No.152104 Report

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>>8
This may be true but
Yet I find it pleasant to
Talk in this fashion

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 23:09:00 No.152108 Report

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xJdxJ5llh5A

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VIPPER Mon 08 Jul 2013 23:34:00 No.152109 Report

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It's surprisingly difficult to find people reading Japanese haiku on youtube.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Cf6pIy4Jlc

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VIPPER Tue 09 Jul 2013 16:17:00 No.152118 Report

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at the age old pond
a frog leaps into water
a deep resonance

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VIPPER Tue 09 Jul 2013 19:25:00 No.152120 Report

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>>12
matsuo basho!

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VIPPER Wed 10 Jul 2013 15:04:00 No.152132 Report

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What if you write out English haikus in Katakana?　You can't just rewrite existing English haikus, though. "Yes we can", which is 3 syllables, would be written as "イエス・ウィ・キャン" in Katakana, consisting of 8 "on"; the unit to which the haiku's length is restricted. I recommend reading more about this: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/On_%28Japanese_prosody%29.

I was surprised that something like "きょ" counts as two "on".

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VIPPER Wed 10 Jul 2013 21:00:00 No.152140 Report

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>>14
it's one! Maybe you weren't reading carefully.

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VIPPER Wed 10 Jul 2013 21:47:00 No.152141 Report

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>>15
I don't know how this happened. You're completely correct and I apologize for spreading misinformation.

Unless someone secretly edited the article since I last read it!

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VIPPER Mon 15 Jul 2013 14:11:00 No.152245 Report

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This thread is falling
Due to all the necroing
I'm gonna bump it

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VIPPER Mon 15 Jul 2013 16:36:00 No.152249 Report

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>>17
Thank you very much
Yet this place was forlorn
Since the beginning

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VIPPER Tue 16 Jul 2013 02:17:00 No.152258 Report

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My "Two weeks of studying Japanese Japanese Haiku"

日本語です
おやすみなさい
４ちゃんえる

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VIPPER Tue 16 Jul 2013 11:50:00 No.152268 Report

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>>19
crud... I don't think this is right.

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VIPPER Tue 16 Jul 2013 12:11:00 No.152270 Report

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>>20
depends how you want us to pronounce "4"

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VIPPER Tue 16 Jul 2013 12:37:00 No.152271 Report

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I didn't know
it's going to be that bad

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VIPPER Tue 16 Jul 2013 16:10:00 No.152276 Report

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>>21
If you pronounce it よん it's ok

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VIPPER Wed 17 Jul 2013 08:31:00 No.152285 Report

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>>23 that would make 6 morae (each kana = 1 mora)
besides he misspelled ちゃんねる

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VIPPER Sun 21 Jul 2013 15:03:00 No.152349 Report

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困　出　ボ
　　　　　　　ら　せ　リ
　　　　　　　せ　と　　ュ
　　　　　　　る　床　｜
　　　　　　　　　屋　ム
　　　　　　　　　を　　を
　　　∧＿∧
　　（；´Д｀）
　　（つ彡⌒ミ
　　　）「（　・∀・）
　　　　 |/~~~~~~ヽ

　　　　　　　〆⌒ヽ　　ﾌﾞﾁｯ
　　　　　　（　･∀･）つξ
　　　　　　（つ〆⌒ヽ
　　　　　　　｜(　｡･_･｡)
　　　　　　　 |/~~~~~~ヽ

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VIPPER Sat 27 Jul 2013 21:45:00 No.152461 Report

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Holy fucking shit
Due to the necrobumping
New threads are ignored

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VIPPER Sun 11 Aug 2013 14:29:00 No.152658 Report

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summer is boring
but it really shouldn't be
I should do more stuff

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VIPPER Mon 12 Aug 2013 22:21:00 No.152677 Report

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No.

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VIPPER Tue 13 Aug 2013 12:15:00 No.152684 Report

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why do you hate fun?
this here is vip quality
don't be saying no

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VIPPER Wed 14 Aug 2013 11:36:00 No.152697 Report

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てすと

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VIPPER Tue 03 Sep 2013 02:11:00 No.152851 Report

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summer is over
"where did all of my free time go?"
I ask and sigh

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VIPPER Thu 05 Sep 2013 20:52:00 No.152885 Report

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>>31
This one is mt favorite.

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VIPPER Sun 20 Oct 2013 07:57:00 No.153241 Report

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Life, a lump of shit
Floating in the pot of time
Flush me already.

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VIPPER Sun 20 Oct 2013 09:46:00 No.153250 Report

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Text boards reign supreme
Bow before my [i]mastery[/i]
of the [b]BB[/b]

code.

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VIPPER Sun 20 Oct 2013 10:14:00 No.153252 Report

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text boards are for SERIOUS DIcSCUSSION, whereas
image boards are for lame shit like memes and 'raids'.

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VIPPER Sun 20 Oct 2013 10:32:00 No.153258 Report

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THIS BOARD IS FOR SERIOUS DISCUSSION ONLY
GET OUT

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VIPPER Sun 20 Oct 2013 10:47:00 No.153259 Report

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THIS BOARD IS FOR SERIOUS DISCUSSION ONLY
GET OUT

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