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Very nice, overall. The layout looks fine, if a bit cluttered at times. Language criticisms:
>mother languageIn English we typically say "mother tongue" or "native language."
>You can download a lot of hentais by torrent (µtorrent is a good software to download), to find torrents:"Hentai," like so many other Jap loanwords, is the same in plural as it is in singular. Also, commas are not period replacements. Here's how I would write that sentence:
You can download a lot of hentai via BitTorrent (µTorrent is a good torrent client). Sites to find torrents:
>WWWHSHARE.NETMissing a dot.
>(the best one: *name of the hentai* + "torrent" = win)I disagree. I would say "[name of hentai] + site:
bakabt.com" is the best. BakaBT has tons of well-seeded torrents, even for hentai, but the only problem is that the site requires registration to search. Fortunately, they left the site open to searching by search engines.
>www.boards.4chan.org/r/NONONO. I think it is HIGHLY unwise to directly link to 4chan in there. Secondly, if you insist on including it like a faggot, make sure to get the url right. It's just "
boards.4chan.org/r/";.
>usefullUseful.
>« »We never use these in English; we use quotation marks.
>very good graphics"Graphics" in this sense is usually reserved for movies or video games. Try "art" or "animation," whichever it is.
>chara design"Chara" is not a valid abbreviation of "character." Maybe "char.", but there's really no reason to not just spell out character.
