>>175561I'm inclined to agree. This is terminally lazy artistry and I can't pretend to enjoy your frightening mistakes anymore.
Step 1: Nudge lips up wards on face a tiny bit, remove heavy sketch lines around them. They are too prominently emphasized, and have an awkward pursing shape that is unnatural and unsexy.
Step 2: Either add more gravity to boobs. Or keep them from poking out so far.
Step 3: Use actual solid flowing lines. Hell, use that Bezier tool or whatever, Your forms are simple enough for that to work easily.