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ポケモンの女主人公

きょう Sun 26 Oct 2008 16:13:00 No.284863 View View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>284973

はじめまして。
ポケモンの女主人公描いてみました。
パソコンで描くのは初めてなので、アドバイス頂きたいです。

私はまだ中一なので、あまり難しいことがよくわかりません。
なので、解りやすく言って頂けたら、と思っています。
我侭かもしれませんが宜しくお願いします。(´・ω・`)

因みに、下書きをケータイで写メってパソコンで上書きしました。使ったの
はsaiです。

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 26 Oct 2008 16:14:00 No.284864 Report

Quoted By: >>284874

>(´・ω・`)
Is that a butt?! Are you waving your butt at me?!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 26 Oct 2008 17:57:00 No.284874 Report

Quoted By:

>>284864
It's a little face, like :3, but Japanese.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 26 Oct 2008 18:02:00 No.284876 Report

Quoted By: >>284886

Okay, putting this through Google translator yields this:

Nice to meet you.
I tried to draw a heroine of a Pokemon.
The draw for the first time on a PC, so we would like advice.

I Hazime Naka yet, so I do not know that much difficult.
So, I?RI?KETARA easier, I think.
?SHIKU may??. ( '? `)

?MINI, shooting at a mobile phone message draft it has been overwritten with a PC. Used
The sai.

So you'd like advice? Okay. It looks really nice. Granted I can't see the whole picture, but I like it. Her shoulder looks a little bit too narrow, though. And why is she wearing an eyepatch?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 26 Oct 2008 18:12:00 No.284878 Report

Quoted By: >>284891

If this is your first time drawing on a computer then I think you've avoided most of the mistakes that are done at first(using the burn/dodge tool, all sorts of cheap effects and so on)
This is a pretty ordinary picture. I don't understand what is going on at the shoulder area. Does she have a giant tumor on her chest?
The shading is really minimal, I can't even call it shading. More like making some areas slightly darker than others.

きょう

きょう Sun 26 Oct 2008 18:22:00 No.284886 Report

Quoted By: >>284892

>>284876
あまりにも狭いショルダー？
うーん、おそらくあなたの言うとおりです...

あまりにも怠惰を描くこと目
意見をお寄せいただきありがとうございます(⌒Ｏ⌒）

きょう

きょう Sun 26 Oct 2008 18:44:00 No.284891 Report

Quoted By:

>>284878
私のように思える私の知っている問題領域..
おかげで再び(´・ω・`)

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 26 Oct 2008 18:46:00 No.284892 Report

Quoted By:

>>284886
どういたしまして

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 00:07:00 No.284973 Report

Quoted By:

>>284863
Nice picture but are you lost?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 00:16:00 No.284974 Report

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the fact that people are actually replying to this seriously makes me sad

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 00:23:00 No.284976 Report

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Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 00:25:00 No.284978 Report

Quoted By: >>284986 >>284990

WTF /ic/ Just cause she's japanese you automatically Kiss her ASS?
..I've seen much much much better artwork on here get shat on immensely and the best you could come up with here was "A tumor on her shoulder"
If I or anyone else were to redline this ...this .. thing.. it would be a complete redesign..
Very original Pokeman art.. yea.. no .. I'm serious
where the hell is she looking? looks like she's mid raped Orgasm, that is if your pupil is what I think it is.
your shoulder looks like that of a 80 year old woman with Multi-organ Failure. From what I can tell you're trying to depict her turning around and looking at you with her hands sortof infront .. but you cant see the hands only lumps of some sort.. and her back is does not correlate with the rest of the pose.

You obviously wanted to squeeze in that watch thing of hers but it looks more like an afterthought and doesnt go very well with the picture.. maybe because it's on a completely different plane then the rest of the arm?.
She Doesnt have a nose.or if she does I cant see it.
The folds on her Ribbon are not very realistic at all.
you ran out of patience on the ends of the ribbons and didnt bother to do anything with them except make them straight lines..
The Hat's fold is also retarded.. look at the back of the head LOL ..the front isn't much better

This is probably an elaborate tro;l land I've wasted my time...but

Tl;dr Fuck your moonspeak.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 00:39:00 No.284986 Report

Quoted By:

>>284978
I think the nose is all the way next to the eyepatch

きょう

きょう Mon 27 Oct 2008 00:48:00 No.284990 Report

Quoted By: >>285036

>>284978
あなたの意見は非常に厳しいです...匿名さん
しかし、フィードバックをお寄せいただきありがとうございます...

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 02:49:00 No.285036 Report

Quoted By: >>285039

>>284990
I don't understand your Moon Runes, you're posting on an english board atleast have the decency to post in ENGLISH Unless you didn't want me to read your reply in that case WHY DID YOU POST IN THE FIRST PLACE?.

Or russian.. I can also understand russian..

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 02:53:00 No.285039 Report

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>>285036
Can you teach me russan

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 03:18:00 No.285044 Report

Quoted By: >>285046

Static lineart is boring. Add variation in linewidth.

Anatomy is poor - sharp shoulders, misplaced nose.

Attempts to hide ignorance of anatomy - obscured neck, cropped picture, side-on pose.

Ignorance of construction - unconvincing objects (scarf, hair, hat stand out as particularly flat).

Ok colouring.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 03:42:00 No.285046 Report

Quoted By: >>285235

>>285044
>Attempts to hide ignorance of anatomy - cropped picture
I lol'd

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 04:38:00 No.285056 Report

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look at that thing under its chin.

Sesshouruto Strife

Sesshouruto Strife Mon 27 Oct 2008 05:34:00 No.285063 Report

Quoted By: >>285070

This is probably the weirdest troll I have seen in /ic/...

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 05:55:00 No.285070 Report

Quoted By:

>>285063
And oddly so, most successful one in a while!

Even so, this is no more than 3/10.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 17:36:00 No.285235 Report

Quoted By:

>>285046

If there's a 'full' version of this picture produced by the same artist, I'd like to see it. Until then, its a small piece of shit instead of a bigger one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 27 Oct 2008 19:33:00 No.285252 Report

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what in the hell happened to her shoulders? her arm looks as if she had a severe case of anorexia too.

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