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Anonymous Fri 31 Oct 2008 04:26:00 No.286207 View View Reply Original Report

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ok so i just finished this, i've never been to good at drawing pokemon but i had a go at it and personally think it turned out quite well.

some critique would be nice even saying its complete shit and pointing out its flaws would be nice because all i want to do is get better at drawing

Fuckballs

Fuckballs Fri 31 Oct 2008 04:37:00 No.286209 Report

Quoted By: >>286210 >>286222

Fuck yes Nidoking

Well I guess the entire image feels... Tilted. I notice that in a lot of images. Don't know what causes it.

WELL AS A PROFFESSOR IN NIDOKINGOLOGY, I can tell you that the biggest mistake you made is that his back spikes look like his back goes in a straight line from his neck to the middle of his tail, instead of the spikes curving in like they should. Also you made his midsection plate too wide, it's thinner than the chest and hip plate, just like actual abs are.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 31 Oct 2008 04:42:00 No.286210 Report

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>>286209
heh now that you mention it i never really noticed that whole back spikes thing, now that i think about it i guess the tail is wrong because the spikes should go around it or something

and thanks for the heads up on the midsection, anything else i should improve on maybe the face of jaw line or anything?

Fuckballs

Fuckballs Fri 31 Oct 2008 04:46:00 No.286212 Report

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>>286210
Problem is, Nidoking's spikes end before the tail, and since they follow his spine the tail can't go 'round them.

Yeah now that you mention it, the forehead spike looks like it's coming out of his eye, you need to center it more, and try to make a line go down more for the second spike to show a head behind it.
Also, the thumb looks like it comes out of his elbow, and that's all kind of wrong.

For ultimate awesome of Nidoking, refer to>>286073

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 31 Oct 2008 05:55:00 No.286222 Report

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>>286209
images which are 'tilted' are caused by improper use of perspective or complete lack of knowledge about it.

the feet are not on a 'plane' and have no vanishing point. Yes, you should be considering perspective when drawing ANYTHING.

Anonymous

View Same Google ImgOps iqdb SauceNAO unknown.jpg, 0B, 0x0

Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 05:18:00 No.287162 Report

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<~~~~The drawing should look more like that

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 05:28:00 No.287166 Report

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where is cock?

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