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Anonymous Fri 31 Oct 2008 23:47:00 No.286589 View View Reply Original Report

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Does it have enough value?
I hate drawing in pencil because my art teacher tells me I never have enough value.
I normally just keep to collage.
- and sorry for the crappy photo of it.

So have at it /ic/

GreyDeath

GreyDeath Fri 31 Oct 2008 23:56:00 No.286595 Report

Quoted By: >>286601

No. Shadows aren't dark enough.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 01 Nov 2008 00:06:00 No.286601 Report

Quoted By: >>286604

>>286595
Okay dokie. I'll go back and make it darker then.

Is it just me or is one side lighter too?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 01 Nov 2008 00:12:00 No.286604 Report

Quoted By: >>286610

>>286601
It's just you...
Your artwork is truly a masterpiece...Picasso would probably cry out loud in disgrace...

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 01 Nov 2008 00:25:00 No.286610 Report

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>>286604
Oh thank you.

But idk if Picasso would do such a thing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:45:00 No.287047 Report

Quoted By: >>287118

For the given situation you really want to bump up the constrast. Like, loads. Switch to a heavier pencil and really lay down the blacks in the shadows, which looks like the majority of the piece.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 21:05:00 No.287054 Report

Quoted By: >>287118

your style is great. it'd be neat to see it inked. you might want to try painting with black acrylic paint. imagine inking it, but with paint... you can water it down lots to do minor shading, or you can leave it thick and opaque. again, great style.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 01:09:00 No.287110 Report

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>your style is great

LIES

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 02:25:00 No.287118 Report

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op here..

>>287047
Im always afraid to go with a darker pencil, most likely because of inexperience with them.

>>287054
I like that idea, maybe if I fist take a darker pencil to it, then I use your idea to ink it with paint it.

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