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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 18:30:00 No.287017 View View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>287018

I made a sketch of Demyx. Before I continue this I would like some critics on this...sorry for the blah-ears and other things I have left unfinished, but I'll do that when I make the clean lineart. I think there is something wrong with the eyes but I don't know what....

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 18:30:00 No.287018 Report

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>>287017
'scuse my English btw

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 18:55:00 No.287022 Report

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the eyes are too far apart. And the ears flop out rather a lot.

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 19:26:00 No.287026 Report

Quoted By: >>287027

I want to move his left eye (right for us) closer, but I drew the left eye on 2 layers accidently, so a part is on one layer and the other part on another...how can I move the eye as whole? Do you get what I mean..? It's hard to explain sorry..and I'm not very familiar with photoshop so I don't know how to do it myself.

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 19:29:00 No.287027 Report

Quoted By: >>287028 >>287029

>>287026
Try moving both of the parts on different layers and then fit them together again. Or you can always just redraw it.

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 19:32:00 No.287028 Report

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>>287027
But every time I do that, I cant make them fit correctly like they did at first.

I could redraw it...but I'd rather move the eye.

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 19:36:00 No.287029 Report

Quoted By: >>287035

>>287027
Nevermind it worked! I have changed the earts too. Thank you for you critics.

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:10:00 No.287035 Report

Quoted By: >>287036 >>287042

>>287029
post new one?

I have a problem with the nose, I don't like it.

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:23:00 No.287036 Report

Quoted By: >>287043

>>287035
Me neither, it creeps me out. Maybe if you didn't draw the nose bridge...

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:37:00 No.287042 Report

Quoted By: >>287046

>>287035
Ah darn, I tought it was ok... bawww. Ok, I'll see what I'll do with the nose. What do you think I should change exactly?

This is the new one! The ears are still very sketchy though.. Do you think the eyes still too far apart? Or maybe now they are too close?

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:38:00 No.287043 Report

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>>287036
I was trying a new kind of style for a nose hmmmm I guess I'll stick to my old style than

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:45:00 No.287046 Report

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>>287042
Maybe you could bring the eyes a liiiiiiiiiiitle bit closer

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:49:00 No.287048 Report

Quoted By: >>287136 >>287242

Better nose?

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Anonymous Sun 02 Nov 2008 20:57:00 No.287050 Report

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Needs moar akuroku

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 03:46:00 No.287136 Report

Quoted By: >>287235

>>287048
yes, that nose is better.
However, the tip needs to be more defined and have a better shape.
If she had such nose, her nostrills would look really funny.

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 11:15:00 No.287235 Report

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>>287136
But Demyx is a guy, he's a character from a game. OP made him look even gay-er than he actually is.

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 12:10:00 No.287242 Report

Quoted By: >>287275 >>287301 >>287309

>>287048
He needs a more masculine jawline. Right now he has a very feminine jawline. I do believe you're trying to draw him all "bishie", "moe", or whatever you kids are calling it nowadays, so google up some twinks or something.

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 12:29:00 No.287246 Report

Quoted By: >>287296

The eyes are weirding me out... they look like they're staring in two different directions.

Yes, I know photographs can do that as well, but it still weirds me out nonetheless

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 13:48:00 No.287275 Report

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>>287242
I don't know why, but I lol'd at the filename "manface"

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 16:52:00 No.287296 Report

Quoted By: >>287298

>>287246
Lazy shit OP took one eye, copy pasted to the other side, and flipped it.

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 17:01:00 No.287298 Report

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>>287296
What!? I didn't do that. Don't just go accusing people. If you look closely, you see that isn't a copy

and I tought he/she meant the photo of the guy?

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 18:24:00 No.287301 Report

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>>287242

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 20:35:00 No.287309 Report

Quoted By: >>287311 >>287366 >>287407

>>287242

Upon?

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Anonymous Mon 03 Nov 2008 21:09:00 No.287311 Report

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>>287309
HOLY SHIT

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 01:34:00 No.287366 Report

Quoted By: >>287383 >>287407

>>287309
Upon? Is that upon?

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 03:18:00 No.287383 Report

Quoted By: >>287407

>>287366

It totally is.

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 04:39:00 No.287394 Report

Quoted By: >>287649 >>287654

And here I thought Demyx was already funny looking. Now I just wonder what the fuck you would do to Lexaeus' face to make it SUPAA KAWAII.

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 05:37:00 No.287403 Report

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looks cross eyed

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 06:02:00 No.287407 Report

Quoted By: >>287410

>>287309
>>287366
>>287383

If you guys think it's Upon, I might as well load the whole picture so you can see his penis. Merry Christmas, /ic/.

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 06:26:00 No.287408 Report

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2rICIMMsVc

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 06:40:00 No.287410 Report

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>>287407
That's not Upon. This is Upon ho ho ho.

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 22:23:00 No.287649 Report

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>>287394
FUND IT

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Anonymous Tue 04 Nov 2008 22:40:00 No.287654 Report

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>>287394
Don't give OP any weird ideas Demyx looks fine like this, but I don't want to see Laxaeus shoujo-fied.

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