>>287244This is a kid jumping into an adult's arms, right? That's what your proportions seem to indicate... I think the arms are too long... and the legs do seem weirdly placed... and the hand on the adult seems to be very tensed and angry as you have it now... fine if she's gonna beat the shit out of the kid, but if that's not what you're going for I'd relax the hand. Draw "through" both figures when doing this kind of work.