>>287261Two threads? well shit, the first time I tried to upload my browser crashed, and I didn't see the second one >_<
As for your critique, fucking thank you! I've been cursed with an art student body who hasn't a damn clue how to critique, its really refreshing to receive a constructive critique. So thank you anon.
My biggest issue was figuring out how to translate the target areas, as you are right, people are stupid and the kote and do circles are hard to distinguish at first. I've edited though the circles are still there, My thinking is you see the circle, it goes to men, you see the entirety of men is red, so you know that men = a head attack (though it is a strike to the top of the head, and so the entire head highlighted could be thought to include the throat, same with do, its a side of body attack, but the attack slices through, so the entire body highlighted could be mis read as including the back, but you never attack an opponent from the back, but I feel like those are details that don't need explained on this sort of poster as kendo is not a 'self taught' activity and you often have a sensai to tell you that youre doing it wrong. /endramble)