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Anonymous Tue 11 Nov 2008 10:46:00 No.290938 View View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>291064

Sup /ic/

It's ass-o-clock and my professor wants all the art done for my website tomorrow and I procrastinated. I've spent all night doodling up a character and now that it's onto the layout shit I'm fucking stumped and super stressed out.

Any help would be greatly appreciated as well as suggestions >_> This is going to be an art site of mine.

Oh, and FFFFFFFFUUUUU

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 11 Nov 2008 20:07:00 No.291048 Report

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/ic/ has failed me on my homework help quest :(

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 11 Nov 2008 21:28:00 No.291064 Report

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>>290938

It's probably your drawing has animu written all over it....and i/c don't exactly take kindly to animu....

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 11 Nov 2008 23:26:00 No.291106 Report

Quoted By: >>291135

It does? ;_;

I mean it's ultra-cute and gay, and has a frilly adorable dress but I didn't think it was very anime-ish.

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iopq !M5/8/5dKZM Wed 12 Nov 2008 00:29:00 No.291135 Report

Quoted By: >>291138

>>291106
where the fuck is the nose then?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 12 Nov 2008 00:32:00 No.291136 Report

Quoted By: >>291141

I think it looks pretty good.

No, it's not very anime. Especially not with those eyes. The face does sort of bug me though, like those dot eyes next to how detailled everything is.
The candy things are not very spherical, give them a little bit more shading

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Anonymous Wed 12 Nov 2008 00:38:00 No.291138 Report

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>>291135
Above the mustache, duh.

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iopq !M5/8/5dKZM Wed 12 Nov 2008 00:41:00 No.291141 Report

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>>291136
>No, it's not very anime. Especially not with those eyes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 12 Nov 2008 00:51:00 No.291143 Report

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The darkish background color combined with the spotlight effect make the thing more creepy and less light/fluffy/sweet than it could be. I highly recommend a much lighter colored background.

Also, it's a bit late for major revisions, but the name suggests, yaknow, actions. So it probably would've been wiser to have the character in an action pose, maybe leaping towards the viewer, with the title curving back and receding in space behind her. Candies could be flying everywhere. As it is, it's just boring and.. kind of lonely.

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Anonymous Wed 12 Nov 2008 01:00:00 No.291146 Report

Quoted By: >>291211

>>291141
the kind of eyes I normally associate with manga are not little dots, more like the attached pic ESPECIALLY on humanoids

I think you should keep that moustache >:]

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The Tartlet !!THV2PWwBkHv Wed 12 Nov 2008 03:32:00 No.291211 Report

Quoted By: >>291245

>>291146
The eyes are commonly found in chibi, which is a style generally associated with animu to begin with.

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dark !dooMer.vIU Wed 12 Nov 2008 05:46:00 No.291245 Report

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>>291211
looks still yaoi to me

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 12 Nov 2008 07:20:00 No.291296 Report

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I would laugh at you if you were my classmate.

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