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Anonymous Sat 15 Nov 2008 16:54:00 No.292445 View View Reply Original Report

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My first time putting "motion" and "action" into one of my pictures...

I just have a feeling something is wrong. (Linework, I know I can't color for shit.)

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Anonymous Sat 15 Nov 2008 21:48:00 No.292486 Report

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think its great..just a lil static..maybe trry exaggerate the poses a bit more.

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Anonymous Sat 15 Nov 2008 21:54:00 No.292487 Report

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lrn2foreshorten so your poses look less 2d

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Nov 2008 22:30:00 No.292493 Report

Quoted By: >>292560

Also, the machine/skeleton/thing's sword seems to stop rather abruptly behind the guy's arm. That gives it a really strange lack of realism, given the direct lack of context of weapon condition. It can be broken all you want, but if it's not obvious it'll ALWAYS look wrong.

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Anonymous Sat 15 Nov 2008 22:37:00 No.292496 Report

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looks pretty great, guy.

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Anonymous Sat 15 Nov 2008 22:49:00 No.292497 Report

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maybe this tutorial will help you op
http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm#line_art

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Anonymous Sat 15 Nov 2008 23:20:00 No.292505 Report

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no motion what so ever.
If i get it correctly, the guy is supposed to stab the machine right? If so he should lean alot more to show the force behind the sword.

D:>

D:> Sun 16 Nov 2008 00:49:00 No.292531 Report

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>>292445
Just needs a few piles of corpses and you've got an uber WH40k picture.

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Anonymous Sun 16 Nov 2008 00:53:00 No.292534 Report

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45pZyomwsns

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Anonymous Sun 16 Nov 2008 02:58:00 No.292560 Report

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>>292493
>machine/skeleton/thing
He's a Necron Lord from WH40K... changed a bit as I can see

Btw this assassin is pretty much fucked considering Necrons being made of autoregenerating metal...

About their poses they're actually funny. Like dancing or something like that. Nice try though

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Anonymous Sun 16 Nov 2008 09:54:00 No.292648 Report

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sage for not being the original artist.

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Anonymous Mon 17 Nov 2008 19:26:00 No.293024 Report

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the guy's head is flat

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