use a sharper pencil...it will ...help alot..makes the drawing more life like...
the pose is rather wooden .
bad:
its looks as is if you've never seen a women and are just drawing from bad descriptions..no women shud have thighs so huge..yes..we love brests and what not but make them a bit more life like maybe?.youve spent so much time makin the perfect tits that they look way outv proportion ..maybe watch some porn (where i lernt to draw tits from ) or atleast troll thru some deviant art gallerys..
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good:
i do like the fact that ur able to make a facial expression in just a few lines...and the feet (both of them) are well positioned..which lots of people (myself included struggle with.