Well I've been trying to draw for a while now, and I've been getting... well... better. But still I'm having a lot of difficulty drawing and making it look well... realistic and keeping things in proportion/the right place.
It'd be really helpful if I could get some tips about a couple of things
- The eyes I'm having trouble making them look correct; do they look right to you?
- Breasts... well neck down to waist i have a shit load of trouble.

Tips tricks and maybe redlines on my pic?

Thanks.