>>292764No, my good anon. *Now* I have just painted over in red.
The whole idea behind my redlining wasn't to redo the entire thing; I thought the body was reasonably well done. It was the face that got me. Even by anime standards, that face is really bad. The mouth is way off, the eyes seem to sitting on a flat plane. etc etc.
I'd use the whole "understanding the structure of the face and drawing realistically" argument, but that wouldn't exactly stand up when I fucked up the angle of the mouth on my own redline, wouldn't it?
I am a bit concerned, however, that you're basing your idea of "attractive," and hence your attraction to women on a face that is basically two circles with lines over them, and then some more lines indicating that someone has relocated her mouth with a shovel.