my first poem ever. let me know

Running through time, as i try to jot a rhyme
Nothing I say, can illuminate the day
Feelings in me, want to set them free
Got to have her love, someone above
Please help me out, think I'm gonna shout
Friends all gone, lost like a fawn
Miss my home, always alone
Feeling betrayed, someone give me aid
Enough is enough, times sure seem rough
Fade to black, there's no going back.