>>294935Not really. It doesn't seem to make a lot of sense for the light to be hitting the purple haired one on the top of the head while hitting the grey haired one right in the face. And if the lights are coming from above, it doesn't really make a lot of sense for the light to be hitting the grey haired one on the lower part of her face while her chin is down and back from her forehead.
Unless it's supposed to be random spots of light being thrown about by a mirror ball or something, in which case the inconsistency is okay, but I still stick by the shading on the face of the grey haired one.
Something you should try going, even if you do draw in a very flat cartoony style, would be to have the light on her face give a little bit of dimension, rather than just sitting on a stripe in the middle of her face. Have it start to curve around cheekbones, lay a shadow from the nose, shadow around the eye
And for as light of spots as the spotlights make, there should be an equal amount of shading. There does seem to be some subtle amount of shading, but it's far too slight of a change in contrast.
