Op here
>>296609Thank you for the criticism :D I'll fiddle with the small stuff tomorrow.
>>296615Wow, thank you. Really, that helps a lot. I kept wondering why it looked far too boring no matter how many tiny things I added. I'm honestly sick of it and I never want to see it again. Ive been working on it off and on for the past week or two.
Very, off and on. Again, thank you. Your advice was actually an eye opener.
>>296617Yesh, Ive considered starting over a few times, but it's due on the 30th and I can't e bothered at least with how much Ive fucked it up.
Again, thank you all for the C&C.