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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 05:24:00 No.297121 View View Reply Original Report

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I need help with his right foot. I'm having trouble finding a suitable angle at which to position it. Also the left foot looks a little wonky. HELP PLEASE!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 05:39:00 No.297124 Report

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Is this chicago ted!?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 06:13:00 No.297134 Report

Quoted By: >>297239

That's not an uzi.

Malethoth K !!Pvayaec4vdT

Malethoth K !!Pvayaec4vdT Sat 29 Nov 2008 06:18:00 No.297135 Report

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what am is center of gravity, gesture

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 07:08:00 No.297156 Report

Quoted By: >>297163 >>297191

sasuke

sasuke Sat 29 Nov 2008 07:51:00 No.297163 Report

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>>297156
pro

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 08:18:00 No.297170 Report

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All of his weight is on his right side, so his left foot needs to look like its planted and solid looking.

Just a suggestion...

sasuke

sasuke Sat 29 Nov 2008 08:35:00 No.297175 Report

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I believe his foot should be pointing in the same direction of his knee.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 09:08:00 No.297178 Report

Quoted By: >>297190

Fix the fingers first, then we'll talk about the foot.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 10:29:00 No.297190 Report

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>>297178

the hands are placeholders, I just need help on the feet. I also agree that the body needs tweaking, any suggestions?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 10:41:00 No.297191 Report

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>>297190
Okay, just explaining what I did here:
>>297156
-right now, he's facing away from the person he's helping up with his foot facing away, but leaning towards them and turning his head their way- I made it so his whole body is facing sort of towards them
-his "helping hand" should be reaching out for someone to hold it, rather than balled up in a fist
-I made it so he's holding the uzi in front of him rather than out to his left, making it so that he seems to be moving in less directions

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 10:57:00 No.297197 Report

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>>297191

with the balled up fist, I was going to have the other character grabbing around his forearm. Also his left hand is being pulled as well, by zombies.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 10:58:00 No.297199 Report

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>>297197
in that case, he should be grabbing the other person's forearm, and looking towards the zombies in a defensive stance as he struggles to pull his gun arm away.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 14:37:00 No.297239 Report

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>>297134

Indeed. It's a Mini-Uzi.

And for a change it's not too bad, I mean... it has the distinguishing characteristics of a Mini-Uzi in the right spots.

That said, it needs work. Guns get so often overlooked in comics/art/whatever... they need to be clean and proportional... and maybe because I'm a /k/tard and an artist, but it's distracting to have well rendered characters and bags and stuff... and then a fucking blob of a gun.

-(:)

-(:) Sat 29 Nov 2008 14:53:00 No.297244 Report

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Oh hey, a slime -(:) ~

His whole upper body looks weird. I guess the whole post looks weird. His neck is so curvy, it is the second thing that stood out to me, the first being "oh why is he drooling lawl." Come to think of it, it looks downright unnatural, the neck.
If the person is being pulled by zombies on our right and helping someone up on our left, then he should be clearly looking at one of these.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 17:48:00 No.297267 Report

Quoted By: >>297274

something about the sleeve around his 'helping hand' is bothering me... it doesn't look quite right. i'm not entirely sure what it is that's wrong, it just doesn't look quite right to me.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 18:29:00 No.297274 Report

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continued from>>297267

I worked it out... it feels to me that the sleeve should be behind the cuff, not out in front of it like that, if you know what i mean...the perspective isn't right.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 29 Nov 2008 19:25:00 No.297288 Report

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If you were to just stand in front of a mirror and try to do this pose, you'd learn very quickly that slanting your legs and torso like that in one direction is impossible, therefore there IS no solution for that foot because you're making shit up out of your ass.

Also, fix the fucking mittens

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