I really like your inking OP. It's really strong.
Though, I wish you would spend as much time on your coloring though. The coloring on the pages don't match the inking imo. It seems it wants to be dark, but the colors look so bright.
This page:
>>943284while inked beautifully seems really empty. Like there's so much white space everywhere. It really bothers me...a LOT. Maybe I would feel different if the elevator shaft panel was darker. That way the lighter panels would pop out even more. Also, there's this panel with his eyes and then the security guards just stop in their tracks. What is going on?
Also, where are your sound effects? Their world is so quiet...