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Its very "liney" . When your trying to draw a realistic head; you start off by sketching the features, but use shading to bring them out instead of outlining it with just one line. You're proportions aren't bad, except I don't know what perspective you're trying to achieve. Is it supposed to be front view or slightly side view? I say this because one eye is closer to the side of the face then the other. You really gotta work on shading and detail. This picture looks unfinished. If you added more contrast between the tones and more detail his features it would look ore realistic. Also work on the hair.