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Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 12:56:00 No.945387 View View Reply Original Report

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So I've been working on improving shading and adding emphasis to my art, and I made this one for my art class. It feels like something's missing though. Any thoughts on what I could improve?

please excuse shoddy picture taking skills.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 13:03:00 No.945389 Report

Quoted By: >>945393

Just needs some gasoline and a match

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 13:07:00 No.945392 Report

Quoted By: >>945395

You could try a different background color, and add black somewhere maybe.

I like the idea of a skin colored background with only the eyes white. Then make the grey moustache / eyebrows black. Possilby make "games" have a thick black stripe behind it to add emphasis to it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 13:07:00 No.945393 Report

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>>945389

i'll keep it in consideration. actual feedback is appreciated, though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 13:09:00 No.945395 Report

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>>945392

I'll give it a try! Thanks for the thoughts!

Icarus !!oo7lODFiXWW

Icarus !!oo7lODFiXWW Wed 27 Apr 2011 13:39:00 No.945401 Report

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You need more contrast in Warios features, and in the text. It's all kind of the same value.

WhyYouWannaCritOnMe

WhyYouWannaCritOnMe Wed 27 Apr 2011 14:10:00 No.945414 Report

Quoted By: >>945497

Personally, for something like that, I wonder what would happen if you were to keep it graphic? I think that would be pretty cool.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 14:25:00 No.945421 Report

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not op. i fucked it around. got bored posterizing the face.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 19:51:00 No.945482 Report

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shit like this for art class? excuse me wtf r u doin

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 21:12:00 No.945497 Report

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>>945414

Like how so?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 21:19:00 No.945499 Report

Quoted By: >>945519

Since you obviously suck donkey balls, wise choice to not include the pointing hand.

>goodchoiceshitdick.jpg

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 22:16:00 No.945519 Report

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>>945499

I'm not Rembrandt, asshole. Cut me some slack.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 27 Apr 2011 22:27:00 No.945526 Report

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>heisnotamused.jpg

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 03:49:00 No.945662 Report

Quoted By: >>946104

The most distracting thing for me is that the type is centered with the face until it gets to games and then suddenly it is off center, though that may be the angle of the picture. Otherwise, I'd say push your values, brighter, bolder colours,

What was the assignment?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 29 Apr 2011 06:24:00 No.946104 Report

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>>945662

The assignment was to make a propaganda poster of some sort. And yes, it does seem off center, but that just might be the shitty picture-taking. I'm thinking of adding a background of radial stripes, but i'm not sure how that would look.

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