i think something that looks a little off is the boat... not sure what it is tho. i think what might do the trick is pumping the contrast on the water to get a more reflective feel, if ya know what i mean.
also, the town at the base of the cliff is really hard to see... i would recommend accentuating the beach area as well as increasing the contrast in the houses.
the grass in the color version is a little flat and boring... i think you should put more variations in the colors as well as putting more texture in the grass.
the sky could use a little work to. i think that, like the grass, there needs to be more of a variation of hue in the pallet. hope these suggestions help.
/ic/ seems a little dead tonight... would u also crit mine please?
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