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Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 05:46:00 No.945726 View View Reply Original Report

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crit my sketches.
i started line drawing last month and want to purchase ps or a similar program soon but don't know which version to get. Hit me with your best crit, i can take anything.
The first one is one of the earlier sketches i did, i am going to post them chronologically.

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Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 05:47:00 No.945727 Report

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2/3
I did this one about a week and a half ago.

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Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 05:49:00 No.945728 Report

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3/3
I drew this Sunday morning.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 06:10:00 No.945739 Report

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So nobody is Criticize this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 12:54:00 No.945748 Report

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Your drawings are pretty flat looking. You need to learn the "render rules" and become kind of like a rendering-machine, deviating from the rules only to produce a better effect.

This is the Vilppu Drawing Manual

http://www.sendspace.com/file/tvmnjp

Read page 137 and after to get a better sense of what I'm saying. Basically, you need to figure out the correlation between the angle of a form and its tone, and that section of the book basically spells it out for you. You're showing more rendering with the last one, but you're misrepresenting the shape of the face really badly through lighting (and through the shape of her jaw...).

So, yeah. Just get extremely critical of your own work, but don't get dragged down by it: just set up lots of small goals and work to overcome them. Drawing/illustrating only gets more and more fun the better you get at it, just keep at it. It's a seriously awesome skill to have.

[Ter]

[Ter] Thu 28 Apr 2011 21:19:00 No.945861 Report

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I don't see why you're using that tortillion so much without any light to contrast it with.
I think that's a big contribution in the flatness.

Not to mention, your lines seem too wobbly. Try making the sketches good before drawing.

And I've slept 6 hours in 78, yaaaay.

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Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 21:49:00 No.945873 Report

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underage spotted

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 28 Apr 2011 23:04:00 No.945897 Report

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dude, DO NOT do digital.
It will make your art look THE SAME as everyone else' s digital art.

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