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It's too busy, with too many small elements that are hard to see from a distance. Also, way too many different fonts that clash like crazy. Large, space-gobbling graphics that are too generic to add anything to your ad.
Ditch the Microsoft Word clipart. Trim your text. Focus on the most important services you offer and make your text concise. Choose 1 or 2 point of focus and give them punch.