>>947513For a landscape drawing, you shouldn't have gone with a square frame. Why the tilt? it's odd and off putting
Your work needs a lot more detail, a LOT more, or at least, a clean stylistic approach
Your water looks like a blue painted floor. there needs to be a level distortion, it needs those little wavy textures.
Your composition could use some work too. The mountain position is a little high, it feels unbalanced
I love your colors though