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Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 04:51:00 No.948183 View View Reply Original Report

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hello /ic/
can you give me some critique on this?

I have some problems with the girls mouth, and the wolfhead, I can't seem to get it to fit in, I'm tempted to replace it with some other animal or skull head, ideas?
also do anyone have referances for this particular angle of the face? I need to study it a bit more.

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Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 06:20:00 No.948234 Report

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needs more tex

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Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 07:52:00 No.948277 Report

Quoted By: >>948287 >>948320

>>948211
mister wolfhat looks much better this way
only problem i have with her are the shoulders which seem kinda too wide, but the rest looks good
>problems with the girls mouth
dont know what you mean, i think it looks good, but if you mean you want another expression, maybe a lil smile...with it it looks like she is slightly amused by putting the hat on the wolf

Btw, i would rly like to know if it is from some anime or manga, or if you just randomly drew a girl putting a hat on a wolf-guy...

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Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 08:22:00 No.948287 Report

Quoted By: >>948298 >>948302 >>948320

>>948211
was exstremely helpful, made me realize how flat it actually looked.

>>948277
I tried to fix her shoulders, does it look better now?
I also put on a smirk like you suggested, I feel this suits the picture better but I couldn't get it right before.

also nope, this is original art. the girl is a OC of mine though. she's a vampire, and I think my original idea was to have a werewolf beside her, but it looks way to un-aggressive for that, so it's turned out to be just some reandom wolf-head creature.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 08:49:00 No.948298 Report

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>>948287
did some more minor changes and made his arm less straight.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 08:54:00 No.948302 Report

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>>948287

Ok, the wolf head bothers me.
He looks looming.
It's like a mix between
Cartoonish more "animated" wolf.
bland vacant animal stare

Which makes him looks like he has no idea what's going on.

Either give him emotion or make him seem like a more (creepy) brainless animal. (perhaps droop his eyes and let his mouth hand open) I duno.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 09:58:00 No.948320 Report

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>>948211
lol, i didnt realize this wasnt you when i made the redlines>>948277...

>>948287
yes, thats what i meant with the smile, but work a bit more on the arms

>>948302
i wouldnt suggest making him a creepy or brainless animal, the way his body is standing and clothed, it makes me think of a calm, well mannered and educated companion (gentleman-like is probably too much), but you are right, he needs a proper expression with more emotion on his face...

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 10:01:00 No.948321 Report

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wolf necks a little funky, It seems way to inward,

some shading would do this pic wonders

choose your background really carefully, I feel like depending on the background, this could either be a really mediocre pic, or a really good one.

I personally like her expression, it has some sas to it. At the very least its more origional than a slight smile

(so far) I'm actually going to say I like it, (however if it remains unchanged than I'd have to leave it as a little below average)

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 02 May 2011 19:00:00 No.948505 Report

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OP here
I find it a bit hard to line animal faces, I think it's going to be changed pretty drastically when I get around to put some colours on it. I'll upload it when I get that far to let you see if it's still off.
I'm a bit unsure about the transition from wolfhead to neck though. should I just keep the neck furry?

I'll try to make a bit more exspression on him.

>>948321
it's currently only the base sketch, so proper lines and shading is on it's way.

you might have guessed it, but backgrounds are my weakest point, especially at flat-down boring angled pictures like this. it's a bit of a shame but I thought I'd just put some sort of wall in the backgrounds, maybe with some paintings of former wolf family members, so it looks like the two of them are getting ready for a formal photograph.
however if anyone have any other ideas I'll gladly hear them, I'd like take my time with this picture and make it properly, including the background.

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