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What kind of critique are you looking for? What are you trying for? If you give us some framework, you will get less its anime the anatomy is all wrong, type of responses.
Well its above average for the anime doodles posted on /ic/ though i know nothing about anime. At least, while there is no shading really, you a few nice solid tones.
The pose is really stilff, like a robotic version of walking. The legs make enough sense, but it falls apart at the hips/torso. How the hips attach to the torso is distractingly confusing.
Then the face is frontal without any indication in the shoulders the body is turning.
That said, there isnt a whole lot of interest. The most interesting thing is the textureof the graphite/charcoal in the socks. Which when doing character illustration is not what you want me to say. I get very little information about the character from this sketch. Except a general fashion sense, and perhaps being good at dancing the robot.