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We don't mature, we just complicate. We're the same 5 year old, Our emotions stem backward, They're inside us, under the layers, of old, bitter flesh, like onion peels, We get sad at the same things, we just don't let out guttural cries, mad at the same things, we just rationalize why not to, We don't mature, we just pile on the dirt, and when it's too late, we realize, that child smothered under rubble,
Anonymous
landon's making a good contribution to the board but i'm biased because a real good friend of mine is named landon
Anonymous
every poet on this board is an insufferable childish bore.
Landon !!nBqZl5bQBVO
Landon !!nBqZl5bQBVO
>>1739898 Now present this viewpoint in poem form.
Anonymous
>>1739903 >>1739911 Hey mate explain this text found
Here
>>1739851 Please
Landon !!nBqZl5bQBVO
>>1739924 It's a poem I pulled out after playing chess with my little sister.
Anonymous
OP's poem: Why can't we remain children and why don't people like manchildren?
Anonymous
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>>1739930 I disagree with the poem, I was a vegetable, mentally, I would say nearly autistic until the age of 7 where I was "simply" slow, but he, that's me.
Anyway I liked the way is wrote.
Anonymous
>>1739937 This is what I thought the poem was about I would like OPs analysis on the poem though
Landon !!nBqZl5bQBVO
Anonymous
>>1739930 A poem you pulled out of your bumhole?
Landon !!nBqZl5bQBVO
>>1739945 Sure.
>>1739943 If I meant to analyze the thoughts in non-poem format, I wouldn't have expressed them in poem-format.
Anonymous
>>1739911 easy
being a teenager must be is hard
when one thinks one is
supposed to be deep
and meaningful
(and write deep and meaningful poetry)
the only experience
you have had with pain
is through watching movies and tv
but your poetry is
Anonymous
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>>1739945 WOW YOU CAN FIND POEMS THERE???????
Anonymous
>>1739945 Everything I write is something I pulled out of my ass. I don't edit anything because I'm a lazy fuck.
Landon !!nBqZl5bQBVO
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>>1739949 I like the last part, it has lots of impact. Overall I would say that it could be structurally tweaked, but that's just my own taste with flow.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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i write poems by pretending i'm writing the lyrics to the most powerful song in the world.
Anonymous
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>>1739952 You should polish off a turd at least a little bit, maybe sift out some of the corn chunks. Seriously, anything good I've ever written, I rewrote it at least once.
Anonymous
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>>1739949 >>1739948 Well im done thanks OP
Anonymous
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I took something from you. I took your spit. I took your bile. And I made your shit my own. Oh internet, the monkeys on fancy typewriters, boiling their puke to simmer and adding stale rotting opinions gathered from the bottom of a news special. When was the last time I laughed? I came here for laughter right? i came here for lulz.