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Greetings, /m/en. I bring updates to my grand project.
The novel, "Before the Cold Stars," is currently at 17,000 words. Read them here:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?nmmendgngtz
I'm eagerly anticipating criticism. I need it, badly. This version of the text has a fair number of the changes suggested in a previous thread in it - Isidor, the lead character, is now less modelled on Blofeld or Dr Evil and more on MEIN KAISER, as is fitting.
And so, with that, I leave this thread for:
Criticism of what's written - how should it be improved, what should happen next in your minds, and so on.
Posting of Space Opera miscellanea. LoGH art, /m/anly music, and so on.
Anything else relevant.
The novel, "Before the Cold Stars," is currently at 17,000 words. Read them here:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?nmmendgngtz
I'm eagerly anticipating criticism. I need it, badly. This version of the text has a fair number of the changes suggested in a previous thread in it - Isidor, the lead character, is now less modelled on Blofeld or Dr Evil and more on MEIN KAISER, as is fitting.
And so, with that, I leave this thread for:
Criticism of what's written - how should it be improved, what should happen next in your minds, and so on.
Posting of Space Opera miscellanea. LoGH art, /m/anly music, and so on.
Anything else relevant.
