Haganeya Jin's stuff is cool but he relies a lot on weird wordplay, I honestly don't think a translation, especially one done by amateurs, would be anywhere as good as it in its source language (then again to some extent the same can be said of pretty much anything translated ever).
A lot of the text will probably end up horribly awkward. I'd just like to point out in advance that this isn't evidence of bad writing, it's evidence of bad translation.
I don't know, I keep seeing people blaming the writers whenever stuff is translated badly and that just annoys me.
>>6423038>>6423046>>6423052>>6423054Stuff in OP's image is mostly from Gunshinkyoushuu, with Edgar's Demonbane, which lost to Nyarlathotep. Elder God Demonbane is infinitely more powerful and defeats Nyarlathotep countless times, but you don't actually see it do anything until the end of Kishinhishou where it does the infinite Demonbanes thing (and nothing else).