So /m/, I'm getting a Teaching job in Japan but before I go I have a plan. My friends and I were thinking of buying tuxedos and Sentai helmets, go to Tokyo and be a very meek version of a Super Sentai. The only problem is that we don't have a name! I have one in english "Super Sentai Businessmen!" but not one in Japanese, you know how most Sentai have like "ShinkenGold" "GokaiRed", what would a businessman sentai's be?
Anonymous
Instead of Businessman, in Japan its called Salaryman
Anonymous
>>7014605 Oh, okay.
I never understood the whole "Shinken" prefix thing, what would a Salaryman one be? How do they decide the Prefix?
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>>7014618 Try translating them and finding out. If you intend to go to Japan permanently you should be learning Japanese.
I saw you post this in another forum of which I won't say the name for sfety purposes nice try trying to jack somebodie's idea. You dumbfuck.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7014625 Kivat, get out. How do you know it's not the same person? Did you think of that? Or maybe it's one of the friends. Think things through you dumb ass.
OP, I'd totally just run around as like Salary-Red or Red-Man. Just because well fuck the names, it's who you are that matters.
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>>7014625 ...I didn't "jack" an idea. I don't post on any other forums either. W-wait a minute, why the fuck do I care about why HyperKivat says? He's the worst fucking tripfag on /m/.
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>>7014625 Look who is talking about stealing. OOZ steals subs all the time. Go fuck yourself.
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All i'm saying is can you take pictures?
Anonymous
>>7014629 Yeah, Salary-Red sounds good! Thanks, now for the next matter. Which helmet should I pick?
Anonymous
Shinesman. For how to dress up, look at Sunred.
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>>7014641 I love Sunred, I wanted to do that at first but I didn't want to outright copy the Weather Three and Sunred.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
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>>7014635 Choose one or two of them, then customize it. I'd make it something rather original ya know? Have you and your buddies go with a similar theme and customize them.
Anonymous
OP, someone already took your idea. Kabushiki Sentai Salaryman
Anonymous
>>7014649 NO! Well, that puts a damper on things. I need a new theme...any funny suggestions?
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
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>>7014671 Hrm..... OH I KNOW! You should get a bunch of Spandex suits alright. Now make some Bug themed stuff for em, like armor and helmets! Oh and people love motorcycles, use those!
Anonymous
>>7014671 Use the suit idea, but go with full black businessman suits and act in a very sophisticated manner.
Suit Sentai GENTLEMENGER
Anonymous
>>7014680 Add top hats and monocles to the helmets too for extra class.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7014680 Top hats. Don't forget to glue top hats onto your outfits. Monocles and Glasses are optional.
Anonymous
>>7014680 So it would be GentleRed, GentleYellow, etc? Cool. Sounds cool, the handkerchiefs in our pockets could be different colors too...
>>7014686 I'll hot glue them onto the helmets, this is sounding cooler and cooler as you guys help me, thanks!
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OP again, I think we'll shout "ORETACHI WA SHINSHI" Sound good?
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
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>>7014689 I say. Good show chap.
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>>7014689 Naturally your dedliest foes would be Rage-on team with RageRed etc. against your Gentle-team
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>>7014689 It would be ShinshiRed or ShinRed.
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When I went to Japan I walked around Tokyo for a day or two in a business suit and Luchadore mask. Half because I thought it was amusing, half because people in Tokyo are dickheads and I didn't want to be bothered. No one seemed to mind or question that I was wearing a mask in one of the largest cities in the world.
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>>7014719 No, Shin green. Not red.
Anonymous
>Go to Japan >Buy Ultra detailed, ultra quality Ultraman helmet for ultra expensive. >Go to Good WiIl >Buy Cheap Business suit >Cosplay as UltraSalleryman
Anonymous
>>7014730 I wish a bunch of /m/en would do this with me...
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
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>>7014730 Similar plan here. I'm just getting a Gas Mask instead and going as Mr. Foster.
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>>7014736 This Halloween. Do it.
Anonymous
so... it would be something like... Kyoso Sentai Gentlemenger (Manner Sentai Gentlemenger) ... I LIKE IT.
Anonymous
>>7014752 if you need it in japanese it would be:
挙措戰隊ゲントレメンガ
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>>7014752 >>7014755 OP here, I like everything about that title. I look forward to being KyosoRed.
Anonymous
>>7014758 ... I suggested the title... and damn I think I could draw a few pages...
what would be the argument tho?
Anonymous
>>7014764 The villain should be an unrefined mongrel of a monster that wants to make the world a fucked to death, pile of shit. The pages should be like an origin thing, any /m/en want to help me write the origin?
>>7014766 ok, I shall take on my tripcode for this one, as I'll gladly draw this.
tho one thing I suggest GentleRed as opposed to KyosoRed and so... has more of a ring and also as a pun.
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>>7014770 Yeah, I like that. I'll put on a tripcode on too
Anonymous
>>7014755 Shouldn't that kana be a soft g?
Just asking
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So /m/, any ideas on an origin story?
>>7014781 most certainly. it would be
挙措戰隊ジェントルマンヤー
KYOSO SENTAI... GENTLEMENGER!
... oh the spah jokes I can see I'll have to avoid...
anyway. so we have an unrefined monster... a "King of the slums" or something like that...
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Gentlmenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 00:57:00 No. 7014789 Report Quoted By:
I just realized that I spelled the title wrong...I am ashamed of myself.
Anonymous
>>7014755 Where you have the katakana RE in Gentlemenger, wouldn't it be more fitting for it to be RU?
The version of Windows 7 I have doesn't support other language packs besides English, so sorry about that.
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Gentlmenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:00:00 No. 7014797 Report Characters: GentleRed GentleBlue GentleGreen GentleYellow GentlePink “King of the Slums” or King EUGH (Title in progress) So I have a character list in progress, anyone want to name the king?
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>>7014797 the sixth ranger should be GentleWhite, sporting a white tux
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Gentlmenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:05:00 No. 7014803 Report Quoted By:
Characters: GentleRed GentleBlue GentleGreen GentleYellow GentlePink GentleWhite “King of the Slums” or King EUGH (Title in progress) General Appalling Kaijin: Sludge Kaijin Dust Kaijin Mud Kaijin So I added a couple of kaijin and a General/Right hand man of the King. Your thoughts /m/?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:06:00 No. 7014805 Report Quoted By:
OKAY, so I fixed my name again, missed the E...
Anonymous
>>7014797 ok ok ok, what about this...
a secret society of refined 18th century gentlemen that moved to japan (because they always have to move to japan) in order to stop an evil force that got to earth... the king EUGH who is a space warlord trying to conquer the universe and control it through bad habits and whatnot... these gentlemen fought him in the past and their succesors are to become the new gentlemenger with the help of a Butler who happens to be of a line of butlers dedicated to support the gentlemenger.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:09:00 No. 7014810 Report Quoted By:
>>7014807 I like that, Updated list.
Characters:
GentleRed
GentleBlue
GentleGreen
GentleYellow
GentlePink
GentleWhite
Dudley the Butler
“King of the Slums” or King EUGH (Title in progress)
General Appalling
Kaijin:
Sludge Kaijin
Dust Kaijin
Mud Kaijin
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>>7014799 Depend if it's a woman. There's apparently a rule that male white rangers don't have "white" in their codenames.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:17:00 No. 7014822 Report Origin Story: A secret society of refined gentlemen travelled to Japan to make money and teach the Japanese the way of the Gentleman. When they arrive in japan the sky rips asunder and the evil, filthy King EUGH and his General Appalling begin terrorizing the people in the most unrefined ways possible! Although the situation seems bleak, the gentlemen have an ace in the hole. With a spark of pure, concentrated suaveness they become KYOSO SENTAI GENTLEMENGER! They, with GentleRed leading them, drive off the disgusting threat! How's this sound to you guys? It's just a start, of course.
Anonymous
>>7014822 nonono, its the succesors of the original 18th century gentlemen that become the gentlemenger
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:20:00 No. 7014825 Report >>7014823 Oh! My mistake! I'll revise it.
>>7014825 here, pastebin the data for later checking.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:27:00 No. 7014841 Report I'm having a bit of trouble, should his father be dropping him off at a reform school that is a front for the Ranger hideout? A little premise would be much appreciated.
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>>7014841 well... the succesors of the gentlemen were all dropped on this reform school... even if GentleBlue is a genius, GentleYellow the princess of a small country and GentlePink an Idol... they happen to be assigned to the only dorm with a butler, who well... it is self explained.
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if the 6th ranger can't be GentleWhite... what about GentleVelvet or GentleSuede?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:42:00 No. 7014860 Report >>7014833 I'll be making another thread soon and I've never used that site before, how do I change things in the raw? I get that I type in there but there's no enter button.
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I promise to have some designs for tomorrow, mostly of the gentlecast and hopefully one of the helmets wich is what worries me the most right now, monocle included.
>>7014860 there should be an edit option somewhere
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 01:51:00 No. 7014873 Report >>7014869 Can't find it, all it says is "Create new Paste" and "Create New Version of this Paste" Is it the second one?
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>>7014873 nevermind then... we could use some sort of sharing tool, care to find one please?
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I'll make a pastebin and you give me notes on things in the thread?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 02:20:00 No. 7014935 Report Yeah, no. I'm not letting this die, come on /m/! Help me and Ryusei out!
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7014935 It wasn't even close to page 10. It ain't near dying bro. Also I suggest some form of Rich Master which they refer to. Think of Duddley as Alpha and this Master as Zordon. He's just more of an ass.
>>7014943 ...what about instead of Rich Master... we have a Rich MISTRESS?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 02:28:00 No. 7014956 Report >>7014949 >>7014943 So...like a benefactor of the school? Master or Mistress, tough choice...Let's make it a mistress.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 02:40:00 No. 7014983 Report Quoted By:
Jesus, this is gonna be awhile, I'm writing a fucking novel here.
>>7014957 >>7014956 Lady... Lady something... needs to be evocative... I feel she'll be ... slightly prone to use whips.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 02:46:00 No. 7014994 Report >>7014989 She's going to be a sex pun isn't she?
Anonymous
Where in Japan are you going to be staying, OP? And with what company? I just got hired by a place called Gaba and I'll be moving to Ikebukuro in February.
>>7014994 please PLEASE come up with a sex pun for her name, that'd really help me design her.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 02:49:00 No. 7015004 Report Quoted By:
>>7014995 Well, I'm using the Jet program and going to be staying in Osaka. They aren't shipping me off for about a year but I had this idea for awhile so I made the thread.
>>7014996 Lady Cravache
It means Whip in French.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 03:07:00 No. 7015043 Report Quoted By:
I have a name for the King now, King Osoroshii or King Horrid
Anonymous
Special Duty Combat Unit Shinesman
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 03:17:00 No. 7015075 Report I just realized that we are making something like /tg/'s Angry Marines.
>>7015075 ... uhmmm... add a twist to it? I may have something to show later
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 03:22:00 No. 7015086 Report >>7015082 No that's a good thing, /tg/ has their token mascots, The Angry Marines, and we'll have GENTLEMENGER!
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 03:33:00 No. 7015112 Report Characters: GentleRed- Dan Lincoln GentleBlue- Timothy Downs GentleGreen- James Crenshaw GentleYellow- Joanna Burns GentlePink- Allison Martinez GentleSuede Lady Cravache Dudley the Butler “King of the Slums” or King Osoroshii (Title in progress) General Appalling Kaijin: Sludge Kaijin Dust Kaijin Mud Kaijin I haven't shared in awhile so I'll post the updated Character list.
Anonymous
>>7015112 please don't tell me you just posted the names of you and your friends.
also... if these are the successors to the original gentlemen, shouldn't they be oddly japanese for lol sentai purposes?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 03:43:00 No. 7015135 Report Quoted By:
>>7015132 No, I made the names up. They aren't permanent, something I did so I could keep track of the kids.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7015132 Agreed. They do need a slight Japanese to them. Like first names should be Japanese. Last names should be English.
>>7015086 You ever hear of Gun-ranger. Ask /m/ about it some time. They were our equal to the Anger Marines for a while.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 03:57:00 No. 7015168 Report Quoted By:
>>7015161 Never heard of it, I guess this will be their successor. It's not going to be fun going through the document and replace the names but I'll do it.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
Okay guys, How about this? Instead of them all wearing tuxes/tophats/whatnot, why not have each one wearing some different form of classy/dignified outfit? One could definitely wear a tux, and have a top hat and an assymetrical helmet with a monocle on it.. One could be wearing a three-piece suit. One could be wearing a nice suit or tux with a cravat instead of a tie. There could also be one wearing slacks and a smoking jacket. We just need something for the fifth and sixth... Also, their weapons would all be, well, classy. You could have a cane/canesword, a pipe (that shoots fire, of course.), and maybe like a pocketwatch with an extending chain and retractable blades.
Anonymous
>>7015175 I like the concept, I'll try to work a few variations on paper (meaning SAI) and show them so people get to see and pick. tomorrow I'll have those, so if this thread dies, mr. writing force or I'll setup a new thread.
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>>7015182 damn, forgot my trip derp
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:03:00 No. 7015194 Report >>7015175 How about for their henshin things, they use Pocket Watches?
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:04:00 No. 7015199 Report Quoted By:
>>7015194 Also, help me with the first names of each kid?
Anonymous
>We just need something for the fifth and sixth... Tailsuit, and have the sixth appear in random outfits of gentlemanly passtimes. Safari/Tennis/Different evening gowns/etc works better for a woman obviously could give a different running gag for the sixth if they only show up ocasionally "Sorry I was hunting big game".
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>>7015209 "sorry I was playing tennis with the French ambasador"
"You pulled me away from the opera for this?" and proceeds to use opera glasses as a weapon etc.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
>>7015209 Okay, you just gave me some ideas.
I love the idea of one of them in a safari/hunting getup, complete with whatever the hell you call those hats where one side is pinned up. The last one could be wearing a boating outfit - white slacks, blue blazer, and a captain's hat. That, or one of them could be wearing some sort of dress military uniform.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:16:00 No. 7015244 Report >>7015225 Nice! I like that, so could you list the outfits for me, I'm just at the Henshin moment and I'd like to know what they would be dressed as.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
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>>7015225 Also, safari/hunter guy would definitely be named Roland, after Roland Tembo from Jurassic Park: The Lost World. Shit, make him a double homage - name him Roland Roosevelt.
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ok, compile those ideas for me to start working on em'.. hopefully making them match with their respective gentlemenger
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:28:00 No. 7015280 Report >>7015244 Okay so, I heard
Tux
Slacks and smoking jacket
Three piece suit
Suit with a Cravat
Tailsuit
and random gentlemanly sports clothing.
Weapons are Cane sword, Pipe that shoots (BLUE) fire, Polo hammer, Fencing sword, Dagger, and Various fancy sports equipment.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7015280 Random dude has to be Green.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
>>7015280 I say ditch either the tail suit or the tux. I think they're too similar and it would be better with one or the other.
Just my two cents.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:32:00 No. 7015294 Report >>7015289 I thought we said that Suede would be the Random one because he would show up randomly.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:32:00 No. 7015298 Report Quoted By:
>>7015293 What should we do then?
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
>>7015293 Also, all the ideas I've come up with really only work for male characters. We need some concepts for females, unless we want to go with an all-male team and continue the gentleman theme and have them all be members of an actual gentlemen's club - Actual gentlemen's clubs (not strip clubs) were just places for men only to go hang out, drink some fine liquor and smoke cigars.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7015294 Ah my mistake. Should have read that.
>>7015293 Make them red and blue so they're rivals with similar taste always trying to show which outfit is more gentlemen like?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:35:00 No. 7015311 Report Quoted By:
>>7015305 Girls can wear suits and stuff.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
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>>7015305 The girls could do a Maid outfit. And a suit.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:38:00 No. 7015322 Report >>7015308 Guess I should tell you guys each of the characters personalities.
Red: Lethargic about being there but after the Henshin he becomes all hot blooded and cool
Blue: Meek and nerdy
Green: Full of himself and cocky
Yellow: Posh and pretentious
Pink: Kind and but very conceded and appearance based.
Anonymous
>>7015305 Okay, ideas for female members:
-Riding gear, complete with helmet and riding crop.
-Chef Jacket
-Suit
-Some sort of formal attire, I'm thinking like something a performer in an orchestra would wear.
I'd like some ideas to separate each member's headgear. red likelly will use the top hat... blue likelly will use the monocle... what else?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:47:00 No. 7015344 Report >>7015332 Oh my god! I have an idea! What if....Lady Cravache had a henshin...?
>>7015344 ... hah, she'd go all Doggie Kruger, I like that!
that'd end up with a 3 men 3 female team, something that I cannot seem to recall on sentai so far.
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>>7015339 Depends on the outifts you're going with.
Tux -> Tophat
Three-Piece Suit -> Bowler, maybe?
Smoking Jacket -> Monocle
Suit/Cravat ->Skipper hat?
I got nothing for the rest.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:52:00 No. 7015361 Report >>7015351 What would her suit look like, It would have to be sexual in a way.
>>7015361 dude... two words:
CAN CAN
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:54:00 No. 7015367 Report >>7015364 Something like this?
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>>7014603 Wierd, we had this exact discussion in Justice Time about a month ago.
Just call it "Business Sentai Salaryman"
>>7015367 likelly open longer skirt and just to be an ass, shoulderpads. but yes.
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 04:58:00 No. 7015377 Report >>7015371 This with shoulder pads?
>>7015377 I like the other one better, but I can arrange details here and tehre, of course, I'm barelly starting with designs. I'll be showing the helmet of GentleRed soon, it is quite simple so, be ready to suggest changes
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:02:00 No. 7015388 Report Quoted By:
>>7015381 I can't wait, bro!
ok, as promised, a quick draft and paintwork on the GentleRed helm, top hat included. the no mouth thing is ... well an option to me, as I think mouths on sentai masks always look weird and girly
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:17:00 No. 7015444 Report Quoted By:
>>7015422 I love it, I can't think of anything to critique.
Anonymous
Original content! I love it. I hope this goes further than Kamen Rider Yen.If the sentai after Gobusters turns out similar to this then maybe Toei really is stealing ideas from us. Best if creative control is left with a couple of people, too many cooks and all that. Still, if there's anything you'd like us to help out with...
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:19:00 No. 7015453 Report >>7015448 I still need help with names...
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>>7015293 The way you say that I'm guessing you've never actually seen the difference between a tailsuit and a Tux, in motion particularly they're really rather different.
Also an alternative idea for one of those two;
A dress Kilt (perhaps the battle butler can be scottish?)
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a little thingy, added the shoulders and the most ovbious line I could think of "good day ol' chap"
Anonymous
>>7015422 It'd be better like this imo.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:22:00 No. 7015473 Report Quoted By:
>>7015462 Oh shit...Dudley has a Henshin now too? I like it.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:23:00 No. 7015475 Report Quoted By:
>>7015471 Keep the mouthpiece and the black band.
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>>7015471 I say keep mouthpiece, make it less notorious and add the black stripe because you're right, black is cool yo'!
working on GentleBlue, the one with the bowlerhat
fixed the black band back to bowler hat gentleblu (SPAH!)
Anonymous
>>7015453 Okay, so from what I'm gathering, Red/Blue/Green/Yellow are men and Pink is a girl?
>>7015322 is personalities... did we want Japanese first names and British surnames, or the other way around, or something different?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:30:00 No. 7015514 Report >>7015503 Yellow is female as well.
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>>7015503 Yellow needs to be a pretentious ojou-sama. Complete with the hand to the mouth when she laughs.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:30:00 No. 7015520 Report >>7015503 Oh and Japanese First names, British Surnames
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>>7015533 hoho! give me the parts that are to form it, and I'll do it... heck, I'll do it... OBARI STYLE.
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>>7015536 Lets not do that. Steam punk is ugly.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:44:00 No. 7015567 Report Quoted By:
So, I think we should change GentleSuede to GentleSilver, it sounds better and Suede isn't a color. I've recruited another writer to help me out too.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:50:00 No. 7015596 Report What's the mech going to be? I'm about at that point in the story.
>>7015596 good question, I have no idea. I need a concept in order to come up with a design
have GentleBlue in the meanwhile.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:53:00 No. 7015608 Report Quoted By:
>>7015600 Love it! We need a mech concept now though, steampunk seems cool.
Anonymous
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How about giving the mech a royal purple cape? That's all I've got for it.
Anonymous
>>7015600 Could we get a front view, please?
Also, the robot should have a mustache that puts Turn A to shame.
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>>7015610 sure, I'll quick sketch a front view of it fix now
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>>7015520 >>7015514 I went through a baby names site for some ideas for first names, picked ones that sounded appropriate (and were short-ish). No particuar significance to the surnames other than feel - I chose to have the double name for two of them, as that's a fairly 'posh british family' thing to do, but didn't want to do it for all of them.
Red: Ichiro Ravensdale
Ichiro means 'first-born'.
Blue: Reiji Edwards-Clark
Reiji means 'courteous child'
Green: Hideo Goodrington
Hideo means 'excellent man'
Yellow: Rika Lowsley-Ward
Rika means 'Eternal ruler'
Pink: Kanae Withinghall
Kanae means 'beautiful one'
Just some ideas.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 05:59:00 No. 7015621 Report We need to assign outfits to each rider, who gets what?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 06:01:00 No. 7015624 Report Quoted By:
>>7015621 >Rider Oh jesus, I'm tired...
here's gentleblue with the quick sketch front view that is rather poorly done, the idea is to show how the mask is diferent only. from what I got it Red was Tux and Blue was 3 piece suit... I also know that mistress = burlesque dancer with a whip. any other details I'd like to see them now, or directly tomorrow in order, so I can start working on the females
>>7015635 you know what? sorry, I'm really tired, I have some sketches, but they need work. so I'll return tomorrow, if anyone could save the data and upload it somewhere for me to read tomorrow, I'll be more than grateful.
anyway, I'm off to sleep, see ya' peeps
PS: Gentle green was the random sports one, right? heh, crocket I see in the future!
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>>7015655 Just bookmark this thread. It'll last for about a day or so just fine.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 06:10:00 No. 7015679 Report Quoted By:
>>7015655 GentleSilver is the Random sports one, GentleGreen has the monocle and Cravat.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 06:19:00 No. 7015711 Report Quoted By:
Well, I'm going to try and finish the story up, I need help with the mech though.
Anonymous
Please no steampunk. Also if the mech has to have a moustache, might I recommend a mutton-chop/ moustache combo for maximum British?
Anonymous
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>>7015746 Mutton chop air vents.
Anonymous
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Gentlered should be modeled a bit more after Fred Astaire in Blue Skies.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 07:35:00 No. 7015949 Report Quoted By:
Bump, just took a shower and now I will continue the story.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 08:05:00 No. 7016038 Report Question, how would GentleBlue's pipe work? He can't exactly blow into it.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 08:16:00 No. 7016071 Report Quoted By:
Bump, I might be done for the night, kinda tired. I'll pick up tomorrow.
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>>7016038 How did Dragonranger play his dagger like a flute? It's magic, he just holds it to his mouth and it works.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
I gotta say, I am really loving this so far. Got some ideas for villains: Instead of just things like dirt and whatnot, why not add some typical "low-class" stereotypes. You could throw in some guidos, maybe some wannabe gangtas, some soccer hooligans. Hell, you could even have some upper-class bad guys to counter the main team - like rich douchebags that act like money = class, or look down on others, or made their fortunes in most ungentlemanly ways, like backstabbing or corporate espionage/sabotage or something.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 08:33:00 No. 7016125 Report Quoted By:
>>7016113 I'm just about done the first episode/adventure. I like those ideas a lot!
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"I say GentleRed, that dastardly hooligan has multiplied greatly in stature." "Hm. Quite." "Harumph." "Harumph."
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 08:41:00 No. 7016157 Report Is it okay that they aren't gentlemanly in the first adventure? They just got to the reform school, you know.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 08:45:00 No. 7016167 Report >>7016157 Also, how should the mech be made? A bunch of robot animals or should they all have buttons they press on their weapons that summons forth the Giant Bare Knuckle Boxer Mech?
Anonymous
>>7016157 So they're kids from noble families that're upstart hooligans to start with? I'd probably have at least one acting classy at the start - maybe not genuine classy, but putting on airs, pretending to be. Makes for good conflict, and allows for character development.
>>7016167 I'm not sure robot animals fits here. Well, you could have a horse, a dog of some kind... but there's not too many animals that'd fit.
Maybe have them snap their fingers, and butlers (or the Boy) drive their vehicles to them, then get out and let our heroes get in?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 08:53:00 No. 7016194 Report Quoted By:
>>7016187 Yeah, I have that character, she's a princess of a small country and she's a prude.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
>>7016167 I like the idea of the giant bareknuckle boxer. If they have to have a combining mecha, why not a mech comprised of like a Rolls-Royce, a private Jet, a Fancy boat/yacht (like a Wallypower 118 or something), and I don't know what else, basically a mecha made up of super-fancy/luxurious/classy vehicles.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 08:59:00 No. 7016231 Report Quoted By:
>>7016213 I was going to do a bunch of old, classic cars that Dudley and four other butlers drive to them, then they combine into the Giant Bare knuckle boxer.
Anonymous
It would be far less interesting, but I just love the idea of them doing the standard Sentai thing, they beat the enemy, then it grows in size, and so the butler drives up in the giant mech... and proceeds to fight on his own. Meanwhile, the Gentlerangers (or whatever we're calling them) retire to the balcony for cocktails, as actually -driving- would be wholly inappropriate for gentry like themselves. Commonfolk drive their own vehicles, you know? That's what we employ people to do.
Anonymous
Beta logos, which of the three colour schemes are to be worked on?
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>this thread has received 1 of 4 requests needed to trigger archival.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
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>>7016246 Okay, what about this - They get driven in their vehicles, and the butlers are still driving when the mech is combined and fighting. So you've got the cockpit with the front occupied by the butlers who are actually piloting, and behind them is a sort of backseat where the Gentlemengers are sitting, sipping champagne, smoking cigars/pipes, and occasionally giving orders/directions to the butlers.
Jefferson Steelflex !!OMXegKdKEl6
>>7016259 Needs to be fancier. Very uniform writing, and very formal/fancy, like a Japanese equivalent of cursive, if there is one. Color scheme should be like black and gold or gold and silver or something.
Just my 2 cents.
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>>7016278 Will work on that later on. That was, in the end, three minute scribble
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 09:19:00 No. 7016306 Report Quoted By:
BLAM! Here's the first draft of the fucking origin!
http://pastebin.com/86qwjsXp Anonymous
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>http://chanarchive.org/request_votes Do it for all of the Gentlemen of the world!
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 09:34:00 No. 7016356 Report Quoted By:
Bump
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 09:42:00 No. 7016381 Report Quoted By:
Alright, I'm going to bed now, I'll look at feedback tomorrow.
Anonymous
>>7016259 Spelled wrong. It needs to be ジェントルマンジャー instead of ジェントルマニャー
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>>7016424 Acknowledged. Went this one
>>7014788 thou, should've double checked.
Gryphman
>>7015500 >>7015635 Put a different kind of mustache on each of the mens helmets, and eyelashes on the females.
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>>7016569 >>7016569 back. and DAMN I like that idea. moustaches for the male helms and eyelashes for the females.
As for the robot, a bare knuckle boxer made out of limos driven by the butler (and AI butlers, no need to have a bunch of these) while the actual rangers are having tea time on a "patio" setup on the very same mech.
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... I'll have troubles with this... but damn it sounds funny.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 19:20:00 No. 7017045 Report Quoted By:
I'm back for a little bit, how'd you guys like the story?
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>Gingaman >Changeman >Liveman >Flashman >Maskman >Bioman >Gentlemanger durr
Anonymous
PLEASE /m/! Dont let this idea die like kamen rider YEN
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 19:41:00 No. 7017083 Report >>7017073 I won't let this die, I wasted too much time already. I just woke up and I have somewhere to be, when I get back I'll start tossing ideas around for episode two.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 23:13:00 No. 7017591 Report >>7017083 Alright, I'm back and the thread hasn't changed. That's not good.
Gryphman
>>7017591 I've started on something. I'm also waiting for a corrected version of the logo, so I can do something else.
Anonymous
ETA. 20h I need to sleep and I didn't get much job done beyond that one I did early in the morning
Anonymous
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 01:10:00 No. 7017955 Report >>7017809 Something? Care to share?
King Nekketsu !.MAVHdDpyY
Do you intend to do any actual acrobatics, or staged fights? I can share a little of the training regiment used by stage show actors...
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 01:33:00 No. 7018011 Report >>7017987 That would be cool but we'd need someone to make costumes and shit like that. So, for now it's just a thing we'll draw and write about.
>>7018011 Ah, understandable. I'll leave my e-mail, so contact me if it ever gets further.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 02:03:00 No. 7018080 Report Quoted By:
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>>7016259 I feel obligated to tell you guys, it would be ジェントルマンジャー、 not ジェントルマンヤー, which would be Gentlemaner.
Also, if you went with an old school name, you could just drop the ジャー altogether.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 05:02:00 No. 7018571 Report Quoted By:
Bump
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Treyalt
>>7017955 I really like what I'm reading thus far. I was initially confused as to what their ages were (it seemed like these were a bunch of Primary aged kids so maybe clarify that?) I'm really digging the imagery of the Gentlemenger, there's an air of toffery about them that I really like. FOr the mecha I'm kinda imagining a Freddie (from Cromartie High School) looking character, with Chops obviously. Treyalt
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Also, the school can be a bit more fleshed out. If this is an upper class, gentleman's reform school, then the description should reflect it. I'll dump some walls to show what I'm talking about.
Treyalt
Treyalt
My $0.02? Even though it's a school and the Gentlemenger are kids (well, teenagers) there should be this air of old world money and Scotch and Cigars and Fox Hunting and shit. I love everything I've read and am anxious to read or write some more.
Anonymous
>>7019239 Ah! I couldn't put my finger on what felt off about the ep summary, you've done it for me. It feels like they're 12 year old kids.
If I may offer a large suggestion;
Change it so they know about the situation beforehand. The best comparison would be the Shinkengers at the start of their show. That would seem more fitting - they've been raised from birth to inherit the mantle of Gentlemen. So they'd be somewhat gentlemanly from the start of the show, but still kind of immature about it in various ways (that differ from character to character), to allow for growth.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 10:15:00 No. 7019535 Report Quoted By:
>>7019239 >>7019270 >>7019269 Yeah, I should have put ages in, if anyone wants to help with the next episode that'd be great. For now though, I'm off to sleep, I have to tutor some kid every day from 12PM-2PM so when I'll get back I'll start bouncing more ideas off of you guys.
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>>7018096 Already pointed out. Didn't you read the thread?
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>>7016569 I think that would actually be too much at that point.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 23:02:00 No. 7020631 Report I'm back from my tutoring job, open to any questions.
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>>7020631 Post your e-mail for this thing
Here's the quick sketch logos. Don't mind the colours, it's just my way of colour coding for later shoop da woopan.
Choose one style of logo (and name to boot) which I will continue to work on slowly whenever I can, if you wish so.
>>7020651 Looks like you missed the dealybobs to make it "ji" instead of "shi".
>>7020651 Email attached.
Those are all nice, but think regal. Like this.
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>>7020656 Fuck. Well, that's what you get when you're scribbling sentai logos while doing work
>>7020659 Will do.
Anonymous
>This thread >All of my money I know the designs aren't done yet, but when they are might we seen Gentlemanger Ranger Keys?
Anonymous
>>7020659 Just to ask, are you going to with Gentlemenger, or Gentleman? Kinda makes a big difference in the logo.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 00:12:00 No. 7020795 Report Quoted By:
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 00:25:00 No. 7020823 Report Quoted By:
>>7020696 If anyone knows how to work with plastic who can make ranger keys for Gentlemenger that'd be great.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 04:55:00 No. 7021523 Report Quoted By:
Bump.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 18:26:00 No. 7022797 Report Quoted By:
Last bump.
Gryphman
Ok, here's the first thing I was working on. As opposed to the regular name of Gentle White, I was thinking about either Sir White, or Duke White. He doesn't have a hat, because the only hat that really goes with a cape like that, is a top hat, which red already has. So I decided to draw more attention to his awesome mustache and beard.
Anonymous
>>7023565 I like it, but the head does look a bit bare. Would a wide-brimmed fedora work?
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7023620 I kinda like the Bare head look. Makes me think of those bald headed rich guys you typically see in movies and such.
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>>7023629 That's exactly what I was going for. lol
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Sat 29 Oct 2011 06:24:00 No. 7024430 Report Quoted By:
>>7023565 Looks cool! Could you design the evil, disgusting King now?