>>1250873Pleasant values but boring subject/pose.
>>1250875Skin looks processed and the iris' look brightened globally. You should learn how to bring out depth in the eye by brightening parts of the iris while darkening other parts of the iris. The eyes are close enough to the center of the frame that my eye doesn't find the image particularly compositionally appealing, but i like her scarf.
>>1250888They've got character. I wonder if it would have been possible to have them in a less posed looking shot. Like if you directed them to do something they'd find entertaining like carry one of the guys or something. I don't know. Nice values again, it's relaxing.
>>1250895Appealing to look at, but boring at the same time.
I think your processing is very easy on the eyes. It's such a nice change from super high contrast all the time. I disagree with the people suggesting you change it, but that's just my opinion. Lately I've been attracted to softer values. Keep on working on composition like you mentioned you were. Figure out what you find interesting about the shot and then crop in a way that leads the viewers eye without causing visual tension (by putting the first focal point in the middle of the frame so afterwards the viewer's eye doesn't naturally travel to the next focal point but rather has to decide where to go).