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If you possibly applied more of the rule of thirds, you could even make the photo more appealing to the eye. The and darkening the background and applying some soft light from a dramatic angle. After you're done that, remember to do multiple conversions of your raw file to maximize the tonal range between certain shades and highlights, make it look nice and shiny-like. Also, if you can find a small shirt, and pull the shirt down a little and remove the fold, it would look a lot better, I'm finding that fold very distracting.