>>303368This is tedious and boring. It doesn't seem like any effort went into the picture. The face is underexposed for seemingly no reason(mood is no excuse), and her jaw seems to be sticking out in an unappealing fashion. I wouldn't let her see this shot.
Why did you choose the striped background?
>>303373This is shot gives me weird feeling. Even though it's right in her face, I don't feel any intimacy. Sure it's clean and well composed, and the skin tones are even. But other wise, its meh, from me.
Is this a 100mm+ telephoto? It feels like there's a bit of distance between the observer and the subject. If that's what you were going for, good job Lars.