>>589005Your lines are very thin and rigid, and the ends of the lines shouldn't be flat, they should be either rounded or come to a point. You want to avoid having the lines all the same thickness as well, it wil make the image look more natural. On that length of hair coming down toward her right eye, you accidently made it combine with her hairline on her forehead; Im sure it was hard to tell the difference when you upscaled the image to vector it, but that line should bleed right off the page, and the hairline should be a separate line. It's good to copy the original image before you upscale it and stick it in another layer, just as a reference for hard to see lines like that in the furure. There are a few more of those little hard to see line mistakes, but theyre not noticable; the only one that sticks out is the hair. It also looks like you forgot to outline that small circular shape on her collar at the bottom-middle of the screen. Make the shapes in the eyes more circular (just convert those corrner anchors to rounded ones and smooth it out). The white circles are reflections, and making them look like they're on top of or above the iris and pupil (the colored and black circles) gives a nice feeling of depth, so try and keep their lines separate from that of the colored parts of the eye. Eyes are notoriously dificult to vector, and you will have to improvise lines a lot of the time.
That being said, you did the trace very well, preserved the color very well, and overall did a pretty spiffy job for it being your first vector. Good job! And as always, thankyou for contributing.