So /m/, I'm getting a Teaching job in Japan but before I go I have a plan. My friends and I were thinking of buying tuxedos and Sentai helmets, go to Tokyo and be a very meek version of a Super Sentai. The only problem is that we don't have a name! I have one in english "Super Sentai Businessmen!" but not one in Japanese, you know how most Sentai have like "ShinkenGold" "GokaiRed", what would a businessman sentai's be?
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>>7016278 Will work on that later on. That was, in the end, three minute scribble
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 09:19:00 No. 7016306 Report Quoted By:
BLAM! Here's the first draft of the fucking origin!
http://pastebin.com/86qwjsXp Anonymous
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>http://chanarchive.org/request_votes Do it for all of the Gentlemen of the world!
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 09:34:00 No. 7016356 Report Quoted By:
Bump
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 09:42:00 No. 7016381 Report Quoted By:
Alright, I'm going to bed now, I'll look at feedback tomorrow.
Anonymous
>>7016259 Spelled wrong. It needs to be ジェントルマンジャー instead of ジェントルマニャー
Anonymous
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>>7016424 Acknowledged. Went this one
>>7014788 thou, should've double checked.
Gryphman
>>7015500 >>7015635 Put a different kind of mustache on each of the mens helmets, and eyelashes on the females.
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>>7016569 >>7016569 back. and DAMN I like that idea. moustaches for the male helms and eyelashes for the females.
As for the robot, a bare knuckle boxer made out of limos driven by the butler (and AI butlers, no need to have a bunch of these) while the actual rangers are having tea time on a "patio" setup on the very same mech.
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... I'll have troubles with this... but damn it sounds funny.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 19:20:00 No. 7017045 Report Quoted By:
I'm back for a little bit, how'd you guys like the story?
Anonymous
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>Gingaman >Changeman >Liveman >Flashman >Maskman >Bioman >Gentlemanger
Anonymous
PLEASE /m/!
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 19:41:00 No. 7017083 Report >>7017073 I won't let this die, I wasted too much time already. I just woke up and I have somewhere to be, when I get back I'll start tossing ideas around for episode two.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Wed 26 Oct 2011 23:13:00 No. 7017591 Report >>7017083 Alright, I'm back and the thread hasn't changed. That's not good.
Gryphman
>>7017591 I've started on something. I'm also waiting for a corrected version of the logo, so I can do something else.
Anonymous
ETA. 20h
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 01:10:00 No. 7017955 Report >>7017809 Something? Care to share?
King Nekketsu !.MAVHdDpyY
Do you intend to do any actual acrobatics, or staged fights?
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 01:33:00 No. 7018011 Report >>7017987 That would be cool but we'd need someone to make costumes and shit like that. So, for now it's just a thing we'll draw and write about.
>>7018011 Ah, understandable. I'll leave my e-mail, so contact me if it ever gets further.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 02:03:00 No. 7018080 Report Quoted By:
Anonymous
>>7016259 I feel obligated to tell you guys, it would be ジェントルマンジャー、 not ジェントルマンヤー, which would be Gentlemaner.
Also, if you went with an old school name, you could just drop the ジャー altogether.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 05:02:00 No. 7018571 Report Quoted By:
Bump
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Treyalt
>>7017955 I really like what I'm reading thus far. I was initially confused as to what their ages were (it seemed like these were a bunch of Primary aged kids so maybe clarify that?) I'm really digging the imagery of the Gentlemenger, there's an air of toffery about them that I really like. FOr the mecha I'm kinda imagining a Freddie (from Cromartie High School) looking character, with Chops obviously. Treyalt
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Also, the school can be a bit more fleshed out. If this is an upper class, gentleman's reform school, then the description should reflect it. I'll dump some walls to show what I'm talking about.
Treyalt
Treyalt
My $0.02? Even though it's a school and the Gentlemenger are kids (well, teenagers) there should be this air of old world money and Scotch and Cigars and Fox Hunting and shit.
Anonymous
>>7019239 Ah! I couldn't put my finger on what felt off about the ep summary, you've done it for me. It feels like they're 12 year old kids.
If I may offer a large suggestion;
Change it so they know about the situation beforehand. The best comparison would be the Shinkengers at the start of their show. That would seem more fitting - they've been raised from birth to inherit the mantle of Gentlemen. So they'd be somewhat gentlemanly from the start of the show, but still kind of immature about it in various ways (that differ from character to character), to allow for growth.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 10:15:00 No. 7019535 Report Quoted By:
>>7019239 >>7019270 >>7019269 Yeah, I should have put ages in, if anyone wants to help with the next episode that'd be great. For now though, I'm off to sleep, I have to tutor some kid every day from 12PM-2PM so when I'll get back I'll start bouncing more ideas off of you guys.
Anonymous
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>>7018096 Already pointed out. Didn't you read the thread?
Anonymous
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>>7016569 I think that would actually be too much at that point.
Anonymous
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Thu 27 Oct 2011 23:02:00 No. 7020631 Report I'm back from my tutoring job, open to any questions.
Anonymous
>>7020631 Post your e-mail for this thing
Here's the quick sketch logos. Don't mind the colours, it's just my way of colour coding for later shoop da woopan.
Choose one style of logo (and name to boot) which I will continue to work on slowly whenever I can, if you wish so.
>>7020651 Looks like you missed the dealybobs to make it "ji" instead of "shi".
>>7020651 Email attached.
Those are all nice, but think regal. Like this.
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>>7020656 Fuck. Well, that's what you get when you're scribbling sentai logos while doing work
>>7020659 Will do.
Anonymous
>This thread >All of my money
Anonymous
>>7020659 Just to ask, are you going to with Gentlemenger, or Gentleman? Kinda makes a big difference in the logo.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 00:12:00 No. 7020795 Report Quoted By:
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 00:25:00 No. 7020823 Report Quoted By:
>>7020696 If anyone knows how to work with plastic who can make ranger keys for Gentlemenger that'd be great.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 04:55:00 No. 7021523 Report Quoted By:
Bump.
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Fri 28 Oct 2011 18:26:00 No. 7022797 Report Quoted By:
Last bump.
Gryphman
Ok, here's the first thing I was working on. As opposed to the regular name of Gentle White, I was thinking about either Sir White, or Duke White.
Anonymous
>>7023565 I like it, but the head does look a bit bare. Would a wide-brimmed fedora work?
CrashmanX !!GAKnwBRBYtV
>>7023620 I kinda like the Bare head look. Makes me think of those bald headed rich guys you typically see in movies and such.
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>>7023629 That's exactly what I was going for. lol
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Gentlemenger Writing Force !rOX80.Ef4M Sat 29 Oct 2011 06:24:00 No. 7024430 Report Quoted By:
>>7023565 Looks cool! Could you design the evil, disgusting King now?
