Alright guys, we need to put /x/ back on the map.
!!6HAdXaUEczd
>>7790815 I agree.
No idea on what though.
Anonymous
Sounds good.
A.L. GoodCat
Anonymous
samefaggin all up in this thread
fumer
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whatever it is, it should have spindly disjointed limbs. anything humanoid is automatically unnerving. whenever it opens it mouth, static should come out and flood into your brain. i would shit so many bricks i could build a handsome summerhome.
Anonymous
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we shall call it The Hoe. humanoid gait. not sure if hairless cat.
A.L. GoodCat
It's always much more creepy when they attack children.
Anonymous
Something like this, perhaps?
!!6HAdXaUEczd
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its tall and when your on the pc its always behind you. absorbing all light its a dark faceless figure that terrorizes all of 4chan
fumer
>>7790857 dogchickenfoot
>>7790855 it's creepier when it IS a child
T3am !!FITlyE41r8A
A.L. GoodCat
Wears a burlap sack over his head. One eye hole.
Anonymous
OP here, I'm currently writing a creepypasta (about a third of the way done) that I probably should've posted before this thread, about an entity I've currently named 'the black man' but I'll change it to something a little less comical in the future.
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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I'm in, and I flatter myself that I can write entertainingly.
Anonymous
I think it should look something like this.
Anonymous
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>>7790841 summer breeze.
>>7790863 sounds too much like scarecrow from batman, I dig the cyclops idea. Can we get a drawfag enlisted in this project? help us visualize our monster better
Anonymous
definitely has to lack eyes, and have gaping blank spots in their place
A.L. GoodCat
>>7790861 Agreed.
Also, it should be called The Grimm.
Anonymous
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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>>7790882 As much as I like that name, we should try and find a way to tie it back into Grimm's Fairy Tales if we give it that name. Not suggesting it has to be something from Grimm's fairy tales, but its "victims" should definitely assosciate it with those.
Anonymous
>>7790865 Sounds good, what kind of virus?
fumer
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>>7790881 blind, but he feels out his way and when you see him, you are gripped by paralysing fear so much that your doom is slow-coming... but imminent
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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Make the virus attack the soft tissues in a person's sclera, so that while they're in overwhelming agony eventually the blood vessels rupture and the entire eye fills with blood, making them eerie mockeries of the creature's own?
Anonymous
>>7790861 dogchickenfoot sounds like an awesome name for a horrifying creature
A.L. GoodCat
>>7790881 Maybe it should have eyes. Black cornias with small red dots for pupils and a long, shit eating grin that spreads from ear to ear. Sharp teeth and no nose?
Anonymous
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>>7790888 Something like morgellens, thin wires pop out of your skin, doctors just think you're delusional eventually it drives you to suicide at which point the wires rot away leaving your body scabbed and deformed.
A.L. GoodCat
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Will it be a child? Or childlike? I really think it should be. As for a name...
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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>>7790909 The idea of an unsettlingly large mouth with pointed teeth has been done far too often, I think.There needs to be something else to it.
Maybe have the mouth have been made overlarge with a Glasgow Smile while the creature was alive, and in this state its stitches have torn out, leaving the edges ragged, torn and bleeding?
Anonymous
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I think it would be better if we refrained from giving it a name. We post in on a couple sites and let the name evolve organically.
Anonymous
Long fingers is definitely a must, however pretty sure the ''tall'' thing has been overdone.
Anonymous
>>7790907 plus we've established it attacks children, right? that sounds like a name a child would give a monster, I like dogchickenfoot, but it should look nothing like its name implies.
something like my girl over here
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
>>7790921 How about a childlike frame, maybe 4' or so at the tallest, but have the arms and fingers disproportionately long?
fumer
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>>7790930 you guys are seriously going to name is dogchickenfoot?
fuck, i'm honored.
even if it doesn't get named that i'll fucking create dogchickenfoot myself lol
fumer
>>7790935 exactly what i was thinking!
Anonymous
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>>7790935 Exactly, the thought of something unnaturally tall now just doesn't do it for me.
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
>>7790949 *build established*
Now for the face. I'm really liking the whole red (non-glowing eyes) idea, what d'you think?
Anonymous
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drawfag here.
A.L. GoodCat
We need a better name than dogchickenfoot.
Anonymous
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The Smiling Man from SS13?
Anonymous
>>7790956 Nahh just white eyes, a complete vacant expression somewhat close the ''the evil dead'' eyes.
Anonymous
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I'm not really sure about Dogchickenfoot, I can't really take it seriously; I can't really contribute anything at the moment since I'm about to leave and I really don't have much time to think at the moment.
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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>>7790961 I also support that, that's how Slenderman got started, I believe. If we get some good pictures, some "child's drawings" of the monster, descriptions, encounters, coroner's reports, medical reports, etc. and start posting them around this could work.
Anonymous
>>7790961 OP here, I'll MSpaint til we can a competent artist in on this, here's what I think when I hear dogchickenfoot.
Are we in agreement that this thing should target children?
Anonymous
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Sinders should be the name, leaves a lot to the imagination.
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
>>7790965 Damn, I liked the tie-in between the monster having red eyes and a virus causing the victim's eyes to fill with blood.
Anonymous
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>>7790857 >>7790857 >>7790857 >>7790857 >>7790857 >>7790857 >>7790857 >>7790857 I just want everyone to know that dogchickenfoot came from me. So THERE.
Anonymous
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>>7790977 The victims eyes filling with blood would make in a nice direct difference from ''its'' eyes though don't you think?
Anonymous
>>7790971 the children thing is overdone. It should go after everyone, from babies to the elderly, with no one being safe.
Anonymous
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give it a mouth like this pic.
Anonymous
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>>7790956 like harlequin fetus eyes yes. tiny pupils. I can already see the thing in a photo, maybe it looks like a naked skinny human at first, but then it zooms in on those huge red eyes.
A.L. GoodCat
>>7790935 Will the arms and fingers reach the floor? What colour will the skin be?
And it's face should have a blank, shadowy expression. No mouth. Not until it attacks anyways.
Anonymous
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kinda feeling a hanging jaw effect. attached to the face by one side.
Anonymous
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>>7790986 Just make it target the people that fear it, sure to cause a few shivers.
Anonymous
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>>7790990 fingers gotta hit the ground.
scraping noise.
Anonymous
Suggestion:
Anonymous
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>>7790971 I'm a competent artist. Let me know when you're ready.
Anonymous
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>>7790990 Not reaching the floor no, just unnaturally long, make sure it's the first noticeable thing to distract you from the actual horror.
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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HOLY FUCK SO MANY FACE IDEAS.
Anonymous
I'm in. I think we should find somewhere better to talk about this, this thread wont last for long.
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>>7790865 the next Steven king
as far as names go
Grim
The Black Raven
The Agent
Western Fox
Anonymous
>>7790977 I'VE GOT IT!
No virus, but if you sight the thing (not just on a photo or whatever) that's what happens, you get a nasty hemorrhage in the eyes like this pic.
Anonymous
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WHAT THE FUCK /X/ YOU ALREADY HAVE ME.I AM THE ESSENCE OF /X/
Anonymous
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>>7791004 get an IRC or something going. I gotta run to the store
Anonymous
Just give it a unisex childlike name like Ashley, something simple.
Anonymous
>>7791006 I like "The Agent".
You could also go with something horribly ironic. If you choose the bloody eye phenomena, you could call him The Doctor or something that blatantly mocks his brutality.
Anonymous
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put /x/ back on the map?
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
If you guys want to do this in a chat instead of this thread...
http://rookotd.chatango.com/ Sheep.
>>7791022 Gold.
It'd be, if it wasn't tall.
Anonymous
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what about holes in the body? just scattered all over it. clean, though, like nothing was ever there.
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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Whoop fuck nevermind the Chatango thing.
Anonymous
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>>7791031 I thought we where staying away from the usual ''tall'' thing?!
Also capture: Lazybones.
Name in itself there.
Anonymous
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>>7791010 Meeeaah. It's... ok.
Do we want it to be that kind of SUDDEN RUSH GHOST GUY or that slow creeping guy? imo, those kinds of bloodshot eyes only fit the sudden one.
!!6HAdXaUEczd
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Mr Wiggles as named by one of his victims that he abducted centuries ago he never harms her and he steals people in the night and he takes them to her she feeds on them it sustains her memory as a little girl
also
http://vocaroo.com/?media=vowqTHooRHynWlAp7 Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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My bad, this is a better chat link.
http://xphileoc.chatango.com/ Anonymous
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>>7791030 That won't work. We need to have a chat room, that's only a user.
!!6HAdXaUEczd
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Mr Wiggles as named by one of his victims that he abducted centuries ago never harms her he steals people in the night and he takes them to her she feeds on them it sustains her memory as a little girl
Anonymous
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>>7791030 Anyone actually there?
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
Anonymous
A somewhat tall slender being that absorb light. When your eyes focus on them everything else around them goes blurry. If you see them out of the corner of your eyes they are like shadow mists... a 90% solid shadow that leaks this gassy "darkness". If you ever get close enough to see there eyes and you look at them you can see into their dimensions. Pictures taken of them show up as tall, intelligent looking men in somewhat professional clothes. Their pupils and irises are all black though.
Anonymous
>>7791030 Anyone actually there?!
Anonymous
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>>7791066 Oh, and they can walk through objects, and when they do their mist dissipates while the "solid" aspect of them goes through.
Rook !ROOK/uolr2
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>>7791069 Yeah that was my bad sorry. Use the updated link in-thread.
Anonymous
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NO! NOT TALL!
A.L. GoodCat
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>>7791026 The Surgeon.
Fingernails are as sharp as scalpels. Wears rubber apron coated with blood.
Appears to those who have shed blood in their life, weither it be a punch to the face or a brutal murder.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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>>7791063 He could be Yophus or The Curer
Anonymous
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>>7791066 >Pictures taken of them show up as tall, intelligent looking men in somewhat professional clothes. that's slender man.
I like the bloody eye phenomenon and the idea that the name should evolve on its own.
Anonymous
Crappy Suggestions:
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791113 >>7791113 So it's like a beaten up IT from stephen king's IT?
Anonymous
>>7791116 Never read it. Damn.
Anonymous
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Back from the store. Let's keep working the eye angle. before you see it you have visual disturbances, such as this
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Retinal_migraine maybe a bad headache.
capcha: nigger welpin
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791127 Well IT attacks kids, called IT due to lack of a name, at one point they beat it up...and it shapeshitfs
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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anyone liking the Yophus/Curer idea?
Macabre !!knNtfy4cPyV
Anonymous
>>7791144 I saw the movie once as a child, all I really remember is a fucking clown. and maybe a spider? bright light? Didn't know it had a bunch of forms.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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>>7791162 IT comes up with that himself
Anonymous
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This seems to be evolving nicely. I'm in.
Anonymous
what about the concept of living in your shadow, so wherever you go he is always with you, i could never evolve or elaborate on the idea but maybe we can work with it?
Anonymous
Dogchickenfoot is a stupid name.
Anonymous
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>>7790999 I really like the idea of it having an instrument.
It could be a pan flute.
Also, suggestion:
Maybe it could have a big, distended belly with a childlike body, it could be filled with spiders or something
Sorry for shitty english
Anonymous
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>>7791211 Some sorta emotional/mental parasitic relation? Kinda stalks you in your shadow feeding off your persona desperately wanting to be you?
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791165 IT does... so lets move past the dogchickenfoot idea
I'll stick by my Yophus, but heres another:
Sherry was driving her honda down Lower Mountain rd at 2 am, just about home to her small home in Furlong, PA. as she pulled into the development, she saw a man, or she thought it was a man, standing on the sidewalk. She had a bad vibe, but she still wanted to ensure his health. She parked her car on the side of the street, got out, and walked over to him. she used her keychain flashlight and approached him. He wore black jeans with rips at the knees, and a white button down shirt. That seemed odd to her, but she kept walking over. then she saw his face, his lips were dry and cracked, his nose looked broken, and his eyes....his eyes looked completely normal except for his red irises. He smiled, not a scary smile, but the smile of the final release of pain. Sherry's head began to hurt, and she watched as the man's eyes changed color. they faded and faded until they were all black. It looked like on of those BEK's she had heard of. then he walked away, suddenly his clothes looked freshly cleaned, his face was clean, and he walked away. Sherry left her car parked on the road and walked the short stretch home.
she got inside and decided she didnt like her clothes. she stripped down, then walked to her walk in closet. She put on her black skirt, and her favorite white blouse. then she looked in the mirror. her eyes looked red. it was amazing. Her head hurt, so she decided to go for a short walk.....
Anonymous
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>>7791221 It sounds like something a child would name an imaginary friend or monster which, in the case of something that's stalking children, works well.
Anonymous
>>7791238 and then a skeleton popped out.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
Anonymous
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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>>7791063 >>7791238 either sound good?
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791238 I like, but kill the location and time. Sounds too fake.
Anonymous
>>7791276 beadier eyes and more like a fish than black.
I think we've moved past that idea though.
>>7791238 This seems to incorporate a lot of what we've discussed very well. let's continue from here.
I don't think the creature should wear clothes, maybe this man is someone who had an encounter with the creature also?
Anonymous
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>>7791276 Not Op, but looks pretty good.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791286 sorry,so good otherwise?
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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>>7791292 >>7791292 well what i think is for that story, the origin of how it started is a mystery
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791304 I quite like it. Perhaps there should be some sort of lingering effect though, like the man's skin is extremely pale or something.
Anonymous
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>>7791304 OP here, I liked it.
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Anonymous
beyond the details, all monsters, or icons for that matter, should have an instantly recognizable silhouette.
Anonymous
>>7791276 CAN some one please give me a basic description of what we have so far, i want to get a quick sketch over here
also somewhat new drawfag here :)
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791316 Well he becomes a B.E.K.
so this story is like....where BEK's come from
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791338 Ooh, a BEK... Heh, I'd forgotten.
But... I think he should just become himself again, but changed. Personal opinion.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791340 >>7791340 how about every time they come in contact with anyone person who passed it one, it flares up again?
Anonymous
>>7791325 OP here, holy shit that exactly what I was pictures when I made the thread. but here's what it seems everyone agrees with:
nasty limbs and odd posturing, looks like it's had its bones broken and left to heal
red eyes, not glowing
height is still up in the air, some want it tall some short I personally think it should be average
it's generally humanoid and we all agree on that but maybe it's capable of running on all fours
we don't have a good hook for it though
>>7791323 this guy knows what he's talking about, we really have no good shape of the creature, it could be the elephant man or one of the monsters from amnesia for all we know. I think we should focus on that.
Anonymous
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>>7791349 >I think we should focus on that. focus on GIVING it a shape I mean.
Anonymous
>>7791349 somethin like this? any specfic kind of hands please?
Sheep
OP, we are in dire need of your attention.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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>>7791368 It should be named Biffel (BFFL)
and i think the idea i had, the eye disease thing should be called "Contacts"
Anonymous
It's more of super hero i have called the notice.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
Anonymous
heres a change in directions:
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791346 Ooh, I like that. You'd think you're fine, until someone sets you off, and eventually everyone will be like that.
Anonymous
>>7791407 forget forests, actually.
they can be seen at park benches, parked cars, swings, movie theaters.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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>>7791419 exactly, and you can only tell when you are near another. it cant be stopped
Anonymous
I truly think that you should avoid, as much as you can, giving a visual identity. Fear is not based on what you see but on what you don't, what you imagine.
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
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>>7791349 I think it should look bloated. There are too many skinny things, it should look bloated and emaciated, but also be the height of a young woman - 5'2 or 3
Anonymous
i'll just post this and come back in a half hour to get and update on the design KTHXBAI
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791433 We may be creating two different things at this point.
We should veer away from children though, children are over-done. Maybe people who are childlike in nature? It could have the strongest effect on mentally delayed people, people who are over-phobic, and those who are on drugs- downers only though. Kind of a losing-sanity terror.
Anonymous
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>>7791395 would it help if it was constantly hunched, thin, and can always view it's spine and instead was wearing an adolescent boys robe?
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791459 We are making two things
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791488 Alright. Then your thing is pretty much solid, right? I mean, it makes sense so far to me.
And as for the other one... Well, we need to keep it from getting too typical.
Anonymous
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>>7791445 isn't that the griftster
Anonymous
>>7791407 >>7791424 i really like this idea.
Anonymous
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>>7790815 why the fuck would you want /x/ on the map. We just got out of the shitstorm and you want to bring it back?
Anonymous
sketched something out for you guys
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791500 agreed, so for the other one:
1. It has the shape of a 17 girl with a shaved head
2.red eyes
3. approx. 4'11
4. the subconscious "thing under the bed"
5. origin in unknown
6. it feeds off of being remembered
7. gaunt
8. put's image into young children's minds to bring the memories forth later
9. number unknown
10. age unknown
Anonymous
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>>7791369 sorry I was fapping, what do you need? The eyes were my only good idea so far. although I'm thinking about tree sloths.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ES32UFlPOUA look at how it moves, imagine a pale naked human with those red eyes I keep going on about, moving like that, only fast.
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
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>>7791523 Yeah, I quite like the marvins in the park.
Anonymous
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>>7790861 Yes.
Fuck that chickendog thing.
I say we should make a Demon Child thing.
Gary Oak !tzufLtAyew
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I got sony vegas, I can fuck up some "Marble Hornets" like videos, if you want that kind of shit.
Anonymous
>>7791530 One swift smack with a baseball bat and this thing is dead.
Come on guys, I thought you'd be able to do better than this. None of this shit is scary.
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791533 Okay, but not an anorexic girl. Like, regular.
Ooh, what if it was a girl once... Perhaps she lost herself to her loneliness, physically showing what she'd become inside, and puts itself in others' memories in hopes that she will never be forgotten.
Unfortunately, the only memories that are vulnerable to her affect are those of the distant past, so instead of being REMEMBERED, she's more familiar to those she affects.
Is drawn to those with weaker minds, more susceptible to her influence. Children, those who are depressed or imaginative, drug-abusers and those who are the maturity of children.
It began with one, but of those whose memories she corrupts, some become ruined by it, and follow in her footsteps. Now there are hundreds of them, maybe thousands. The plague of loneliness, of corruption and the need for love.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
>>7791575 >>7791575 appears before suicides?
Anonymous
>>7791575 That's just sad, not scary.
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791583 escorts the recently voluntarily deceased away. collects them, maybe? She can have a whole other story of what she does with them.
BeyondLawliet !zmoQZ.OUGo
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>>7791593 >>7791593 yeah, like a sort of reaper for the voluntary. sounds great
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791591 It's scary when you realize that you are weak enough to remember her...
The emptiness of your life, if she's there with you... May even draw you to suicide.
It's like the social bunny in the sims.
Anonymous
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A NICE OLD "WOMAN"
Anonymous
>>7791571 that's the great thing, you go to smack it with your bat and it just kinda smooshes, with a sickening bone breaking sound, and keeps coming
Captcha wants to add: Onsionra book maybe some ancient lore to back it up ?
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
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>>7791602 No, it could be some sort of cook book that illustrates how to prepare the souls into dolls or something.
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
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can someone archive this please?
Anonymous
>>7791599 That really isn't scary, like I said, it's just sad. Emptiness and despair are fine emotions to evoke, but not if you're actually trying to creep someone out instead. It's always better not to define the reasons for something monstrous existing because then you have the fear of the unknown, which is always scarier than a defined fate.
>>7791602 Cool, so I can take out my aggression on it and it keeps bouncing back? Awesome, I'll take three!
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791620 It's a proposed theory then.
But she's around those whose souls are emptying.
She could also be near serial killers, she might even recruit them to capture more friends for her.
Anonymous
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k im back so can someone give me a description of one of your "creations" so far, lemme sketch it out?
Anonymous
>>7791654 Or, how about she's just 'around'.
She doesn't need to be around particular special snowflakes who are 'having their souls emptied', whatever that means.
Ugh, this thread blows, I'm out. Get more imagination guys, funny looking people aren't scary, they're just funny looking people. The reason Slenderman hits such a chord is because it destroys any ability to empathise with it. You can't understand what it does, you aren't even sure of what it does, there are just rumours. It doesn't have a face, you can't look into its eyes and see a soul, it's void of anything we as humans might be able to latch on to. Think along those lines instead of just going for slasher movie monsters.
Anonymous
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>>7791530 My take on this sketch. I apologize for the bad quality as well, and also for my lack of artistic prowess. I figure if we just keep drawing stuff and taking influence from others drawings, we'll end up with something satisfying.
I've added the idea of it only have one functional arm. It can stroke its victims with its nub or something. The long, maybe disjointed, arm can reach out from under beds and shit. I like the idea of lifeless doll eyes or very small, emotionless eyes.
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
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>>7791695 Not having their souls emptied- I meant more like, depressed, schizophrenic, losing touch from reality.
Anonymous
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>>7791695 Alright Stephen King, give us something to work with then, instead of bitching about it.
Anonymous
Okay, OP here, I've settled on what I really want
Anonymous
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>>7791749 Really like the idea of a sloth influence, especially with that bigfoot-esque urban legend bit. Not sure what you mean with the feet though.
Anonymous
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I agree completely with the pissed off guy somewhere above: Don't describe the monster, don't give it a purpose. Just hint at it.
Anonymous
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What about Freckles, the creepy imaginary friend?
Anonymous
When my sister and I were children, when we would lay down to go to sleep, we took special notice to the sound of the bloodflow that you hear when you press your ear down to the pillow. I thought it was the moon whispering to me or some weird shit. She thought Alf lived in her ear and talked to her.
Anonymous
Writefag here, waiting for the character to develop then will put it into action.
Anonymous
How about this? In my nightmares, from childhood, these creatures where constantly lurking in that dark pocket of my mind. Waiting..for me to close my eyes. They would talk telepathically. Always is a whisper or hushed voice. The only audible noise made was the clicking from there teeth. There where many of them. They called my soul, essence. They said the most enriched where the ones of children. Untainted by the world. They steed anywhere from 7 to 9 feet talk. Naked, hairless, pale gray to light pink in color. Eyeless. Where there eyes where they had just sunken pockets of smooth flesh. There gums and teeth forever exposed and jaunt like rabies had set in. The skin hugged there bones. They where devoid of sexual organs. Here is one of many sketches.
heterochromaticat !U9ZQz.2g..
>>7791835 That particular memory is already a creepypasta though.
Generally a good idea.
When I was a child, I thought people could hear my thoughts if my mouth was open. Could this be used?
Anonymous
We need something believable.
Anonymous
>>7791866 In the palm of there hands was another set of teeth and a small black thorn/spike that would protrude when they where ready to feast. There skin was always covered in a small film of translucent slime that seemed to weep from there pores and mucus membranes.
Anonymous
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This kind of thing has to grow slowly and organically. There has to be a kind of aloof mystery about it. You cant just come up with something terrifying in the space of one thread on /x/. It just doesnt work. Honestly none of these ideas are particularly scary, because you are all trying too hard.
Anonymous
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>>7791868 Hear my thoughts, oh wise one!
But in all seriousness thats not a bad idea, we just have to figure out how to make it pertain to something really creepy.
Anonymous
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>>7791879 just thinking of that gave me chills.
Anonymous
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>>7791888 They had told me they existed in the in-between where the darkness/shadows are most heavy or long. They have points in which they can cross into our world. If they miss a window they must stay in our world. Hidden within dark, moist, cool places. Sewage systems, subways, mine shafts.
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monsterdrawfag
It is a broken-looking thing, crippled, impossible to imagine it was designed that way. It drags itself forward, out of the darkness, out from the cozy place where it was waiting. It should be so you almost pity it. It calls to mind every little victim, every retarded child ever locked in an attic, polio victims, malformed piteous half-people chained up in freak shows. Maybe it is their avenger. Maybe it comes to you knowing every wrong you've committed against those unenviable wretches who were weaker than you, every childhood taunt, every petty cruelty. But these are just theories. It does not try to explain itself. It does not speak. It moves, awkwardly, painfully, seeking you out. You wonder if it's blind as it shambles inexorably toward you, but it doesn't matter, because it finds you with certainty, pulling you into an embrace in the dark.
>>7791866 >>7791749 >>7791530 >>7791325 Building from these descriptions and sketches, all of which are great.
>>7791866 especially, that's a beautiful sketch, I think that's exactly what a closer look of its semi-obscured face should be like.
I tried to give an idea of how it may seem to be a "bag of broken bones", its features shifting as it moves. This is a great thread, btw.
Anonymous
Lester. (pick a different name)
Anonymous
>>7791922 wow. really good description, dude. that's what i've been trying to get across, how something that looks weak can be scarier than some big hulking strong thing.
Anonymous
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noko
>>7791922 What I like about this one is it's vague, which is scary, but the threat that it comes after people to get revenge for weak things is good because everyone has guilty memories like that, so anyone could be a victim. Design could use some work though, it needs to be more distinctive I think.
Anonymous
>>7791922 o god your description is so creepy
Anonymous
>>7791865 Can we not make the story too melodramatic? What made Slender Man so intriguing when he first popped up on SA was that all of Victor Surge's posts were very clinical and straightforward. He wasn't all "The horrid creature of the pale night shrieked with the sound of a demon calling out from the deepest pits of hell. My heart sank and my blood ran cold as I saw its wretched face, white and sinister, boring into my heart with a stare of pure malevolence" because that would have sounded retarded.
Make it believable. We're creating an urban legend, not a Lovecraft story.
Anonymous
>>7791922 I call that one WINNING.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
We need to call it something weird.
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>>7791865 Would you be so kind as to make a fake news
paper article about mine?
>>7791749 let the event take place wherever, I'd do it myself but I'm only good at writing dialogue and stream of consiousness
Anonymous
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So, I don't know about articles though, that might be a bit much to fake. We don't want to do it like creepy pasta but like a real thing though, we need descriptions of meetings then I suppose ? Probably a little more BEK than Slendy yeah ?
Anonymous
>>7791999 we established early on that the name would develop on its own as we spread the stories about it
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>>7792012 Okay, sounds like a plan.
monsterdrawfag
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>>7791941 >>7791957 >>7791965 >>7791980 >>7792013 Thanks you guys, I tried my best lol. Hopefully someone with more artistic talent than me could do a photoshop or something, or at least a better sketch. I can see it so clearly in my head! Like it was always there.
Anonymous
i really like the idea of a blind creature that steals your sight. It could be blind, just have no eyes, or maybe have had it's sight stolen as well, maybe eyelids that were sown shut.
Anonymous
Can someone give me a detailed summary of what this thing is and what it does?
Anonymous
Can we give it a counterpart?
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>>7792040 No.
That sounds stupid.
Anonymous
Some dark, lonely night you hear the faint tinkling of piano keys. You cant believe what you are hearing at first, as nobody in the house even plays piano. You reluctantly peel open your eyes and in the corner of the room you can make out a man sitting at a piano, playing an old ragtime tune. It makes you think of children, laughing and asking for icecream as the ice cream truck comes driving down the road. It is a sinister and eerie tune. You find yourself asking "who are you?" The man doesnt stop playing. He says in an old southern gentleman voice, "why, im the ragtime man." Then he turns his head all the way around to look at you, never stopping his playing. The tune gets more frantic and scratchy, and sounds like its coming out of an old gramophone. All of a sudden his eyes glare red and he opens his mouth real wide and the terrified screams of children come out.
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>>7792051 ragtime man?
Corny, man.
Anonymous
>>7792038 Could you write something based on this description?
>>7791922 I think this has potential...
Anonymous
>>7791922 >mfw Easy there Dean Koontz.
>>7791968 I agree with this fella.
Lets not try to create some adjective ridden storybook monster. We need to make something much more cryptic.
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>>7792059 do this but keep in mind what
>>7791968 said!
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>>7790815 You know what are paranormal as FUCK?
Niggers.
I always wonder how THEY got in my house, crafty fucking third world thieves.
Anonymous
If it's going to be blind, can it be blind because it's eyes are sewn shut with haphazard stitches or something?
Anonymous
>>7792036 am i just blowing smoke here?
anyone else find this interesting?
Anonymous
>>7792068 Yeah but we're also not creating a pokemon. "hurr it has the power of ICE BLASTING and SOUL STEALING, it is 5 foot 4 and white. the end."
the description with the sketch creeped me the fuck out, actually.
Anonymous
>>7792059 I'm not going to write the story like the main character knows what the thing is. The encounter is going to be a normal guy recounting a tale of how he accidentally stumbled upon some abnormal shit.
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>>7792051 can we not make him black? Seems a bit racist if ya ask me
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>>7792093 We're going for a terror, not a ragdoll.
Anonymous
>>7792101 >Yeah but we're also not creating a pokemon. "hurr it has the power of ICE BLASTING and SOUL STEALING, it is 5 foot 4 and white. the end." How did anyone insinuate this?
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>>7792098 I find it interesting but I don't think it should be some weird monster that obsesses about your eyeballs. I like the twist at the end though, that could be good. I think it should be some stern old blind man or something, something unsuspecting.
Anonymous
>>7792102 WAITING
AND F5ing LIKE A MOTHERFUCKER
Anonymous
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>>7792138 Only 14 year olds believe in monsters.
If you want to make something really scary, you'll need something a lot more believable than this.
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>>7792116 Because reading through the thread, there are a lot of descriptions like that. I thought the post you referenced wasn't overly flowery, so I figured your idea of "not too adjective-y" would basically amount to stats.
Anonymous
It should have a stench or some ungodly odor so you know it's a comin'.
Anonymous
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>>7792151 What would you suggest then, O wise tripfag?
Anonymous
OP here
>>7791922 So this thing only targets people who picked on the weak, can we make it that only those people can see it? They'll scream and shout at it but no one knows what the fuck they're freaking out about until it shows up in a picture or something.
Maybe it leaves some kind of mark on them, branding them for their crimes.
Anonymous
>>7792160 No no no, I think the area should become slightly dimmed from it's nearby.
Just enough to know something's off, but not enough to start panicking.
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>>7792179 When it's nearby*
Excuse me,
Anonymous
>>7791957 Going off this, I like the idea that it's somehow related to remorse. As in, it doesn't appear when you hurt somebody else, it only appears years later, when you're thinking how ashamed you are for what you did...I might write something about this.
Anonymous
>>7792179 I suggested people get visual distortions when it's near, maybe a headache too
Anonymous
>>7792176 sounds way to deathnote-y for me
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>>7792176 >>7792197 I like these ideas very much. Contributing to a collective creative process like this is really fun! It means I can have a sort-of-dumb idea and then people who are better at this kind of stuff really draw out cool aspects of it.
Anonymous
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Does anyone remember the puppets from Thief 3's cradle? The lights would gradually fail as /x/'s new monster got closer. THat'd be downright terrifying. Sitting in a room, hearing its footsteps accompanied by the lights dimming and flickering.
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>>7792197 it would be classified like a mental disorder too, rather than a cryptoid, that would be pretty sweet. We could give it a funny name like "Asshole delusion" or "dickhead's remorse".
Anonymous
>>7792176 >>7792179 >>7792197 >>7792203 This is getting dumb. Fuck this. I'm not writing a story for what's basically a "SUPER SCARY POKEMON". Piling a fuckton of SPOOOOOOKY powers and giving it a stupid dramatic backstory isn't going to suddenly make thing scary.
The more arbitrary shit you throw onto the monster, the less scary it's going to be.
Anonymous
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How about Tree Dog.
Anonymous
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What if it can only be seen when over shadows?
Anonymous
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>>7792197 We can't give it a clear reason for it to be doing what its doing, because that just makes it sort of lame. We need something terrifying in the way that it cannot be explained or rationalized. Victims of this 'monster' (though I would prefer something simple like a strange old man, someone mentioned a cowboy or something. Something thats weird but not silent hill material.) would have no way to explain or figure out what was happening to them and why.
Anonymous
Want to restore /x/ back to its former glory?>>quit creating "streaming [insert shitty movie/game/show here]" threads >>Quit creating "How does I summon demon" threads >>Quit creating "New queen of /x/ threads" >>Quit with the slondermon threads >>quit with the tarot threads. >>POST SOME MOTHERFUCKING UNEXPLAINED OC
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Make it smell like something really odd, but not discusting. Like the smell of wet pavement, its not scary but if I smelt it while i was inside on a dry day i would be skecthed out
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Hatchet. It needs a hatchet.
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>>7792295 Oh and stop with the stale creepypasta. Creepypasta in general, actually.
Anonymous
A demon that disguises itself as a "homeless person" who appears under bridges and streets at midnight. He wears a tattered suit. He will ask you for money.
Anonymous
A demon that disguises itself as a "homeless person" who appears under bridges and streets at midnight. He wears a tattered suit. He will ask you for money.
monsterdrawfag
>>7792248 That's fine. Just like how Slenderman originally was slightly different and different versions evolved when people interpreted what they thought the scariest aspects of him were, you could totally come at it in a unique direction. Write about however you feel is the most effectively. You don't have to feel bound to include everything everyone suggests. And of course, if you don't want to you don't have to write anything
Here's another sketch of how I'm imagining it, I could picture it dropping face first off a bed, and then the back half of its body almost folding in half over itself, in a very gawky, painful looking way of movement. If anyone pictures it differently, feel free to share and improve it.
Anonymous
i dont think it should have any facial features whatsoever. just a blurry mass
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>>7792312 >>7792325 Site is being a bitch for some reason, sorry about that.
Anonymous
Someone give me what we're going with on this one, I'm kind of confused, I only jumped into this thread about 10 minutes ago. (too fucking lazy to read everything before then)
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>>7792174 Well, something that trustworthy people can say is real.
Here's a great example of that. 15 years ago in Paris, a guy caught the bubonic plague. Everyone was scared to death, because it is highly contagious, and in a city were 20 million people take public transportation each day, diseases spread really quickly. And this guy took the subway every morning.
So while everyone was scared, something happened: in the block were this guy lived, on the door of every single house, building and apartment, "CLI" was painted with white paint. All doors, except the one were this guy, who had just died, lived.
"Cito, Longe, Tarde", which means: leave as soon as possible, as far as possible, for as long as possible, because the plague is here. CLI was painted on all doors to warn people when the plague was in Paris in the 16th century. Many historians talked about that, and said that the fact he caught it was probably intentional, and that someone wanted to kill him, and choose the plague as a weapon.
Suddenly, what seemed to be an isolated case started to look like it was a premeditated crime. And a few days later, another guy caught it aswell. All doors were painted again. All, except one.
All of Paris was terrified. And it reached the apex when in the course of a week, all doors but one were painted in no less than twenty five other blocks.
Anonymous
>>7792326 Oh cool, glad you liked my design, thanks.
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>>7792357 Gay.
I hope you didn't spend the last 20 minutes just writing that.
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>>7792357 You want to know the truth?
That was an isolated case. The two guys knew each other, and, well, it's highly contagious, so he passed it. They were the only two victims of it.
Meanwhile, three students in French history had the idea to paint all doors with that, to make it look like some sort of crime. Then, it was a few pranksters, different from the previous ones. Then other pranksters did it again where they lived, to people they didn't like.
White paint. Done at the right time. With different people each time. But something that many serious historians could attest is real.
That's how you make something believable. That's how you make a good prank. You don't spend days planning it, and you don't invent something, instead, you search for opportunities, and base it on things that exist.
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Hey this reminds me of am idea that I had and it might help with your idea too. I was going to make a lot of little creepy notes and leave them around the city I live in and get friends in other cities to leave similar notes. We were going to write with our left hands (being that we are righties) so it looks like children wrote them we wanna get as many people as we can to help
Anonymous
>dogfoot = way creepier name than dogchickenfoot
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>>7792342 Going off this, here's sort of an idea of what the "face" area might look like closer up. I'm not very good at textures, but I'm imagining it being sort of wrinkly, overlapping, vaguely translucent flesh that looks like it has a lot of room for the underlying structure to change and sort of hides its real features.
>>7792363 It was a good design, sloths have a real creep factor once you look past the cute lol.
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>>7792352 i think we're mainly going off this one right now
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>>7792407 Dogfoot sounds sorta native american. Maybe a possible connection?
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>>7791922 Here's what i see fleshed out.
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>>7792527 PINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPINGASPING
AS
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Just a bit of my 2 cents in here:
monsterdrawfag
>>7792527 Oh man, that is like perfect! The skin and posture and everything look great. You've made this anon very happy :D
Now if some enterprising writefag would be willing to do some creepypasta related to it, that would just be the icing on the melty, pathetic, lethal cake.
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I guess I'm no longer innocent.
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>>7792373 I could also tell you of a prank in which I participated. It's very similar, and we got inspired by the CLI prank.
A few years ago, a guy commited suicide in the subway. Pretty usual, it happens all the time. Most people aren't even shocked anymore, they're only mad because they're going to be late because of it. Only, this guy had been laughing loudly for a few minutes before he jumped on the tracks when the train arrived, and it shocked a lot of people that were there. That was on the 21th of December, which, a few centuries ago, was the first day of the Feast of Fools.
It was a festival celebrated in may European countries, but mainly in France, and especially in Paris. If you've seen The Hunchback of Notre-Dame, you already know what it is. This festival celebrated the donkey that carried Jesus when he entered Jerusalem. In churches, prayers were ended not by "amen", but by "hi-han", which is what a donkey sounds like to a French ear. That's how crazy it was.
I called a friend who's a graffiti artist, and told him to make a donkey in the station in which the guy commited suicide. A discreet one, the kind you suddenly notice like you've never seen it before, yet you can't say if it was there before.
So that was just a donkey, and a suicide. No one really made the link between the two. Until we started forming a larger group, and made donkeys everywhere when someone commited suicide, along with a few mentions of the 28th of december which, as we'd learned, marked the end of the Feast of Fools. Then a few of us started to act crazy in stations, one even jumped on the tracks when the train wasn't there. And with the occasionnal crazy homeless guys, it was just perfect.
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>>7792562 You can take and add a bit to it it' sorta ruff but it's a concept I like the way this is going. Now it needs a name.
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>>7792557 Ooga booga, where da white wimmin at?!
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>>7792599 A few journalists started to make the link between donkeys and suicides, thinking it was a bad joke. then a guy came and said "Hey, the 28th of december was the last day of the Feast of Fools during the 15th and 16th centuries!"
Then, they started to report people acting crazy in the subway. Then shit just got real.
There are suicides almost everyday. Most people don't care, and these aren't even reported on TV. And it was during winter, at the end of the year, which is known for very high numbers of suicides. But this suddenly made those suicides widely reported every day.
Then the 28th of December came. Something like 6 people commited suicide, which was insanely high.
Is it a coincidence? Did our "prank" made people that were willing to commit suicide wait for this specific day? I sometimes feel a bit guilty about that, but well, we'll never know. This joke is still, to this day, taken very seriously, because there's no explanation, and no one knows who painted all those donkeys everywhere.
But, well, have fun with your monsters, I wish you success in scaring 14 year olds.
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>>7792562 How about erepo it's latin for creep, to creep, to creep up, to creep out.
Anonymous
>>7792562 I'm working on something...
Anonymous
It has to have SOME facial features, or we would just be making a smaller Slendy, how bout just a sharp toothed grin? no nose or eyes or ears just hollow places and a big fucking grin.
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This is coming from a dream I had
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>>7792670 Cheeks.
No mouth, no eyes, no nose.
But you can see it's cheeks reared up into a mouthless grin.
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i feel like everyone is gonna forget about this in a few days but who cares, contributin with my stuff
Anonymous
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
Anonymous
>>7792653 Okay, here's part 1 of probably 3. I tried to make it an anecdote sort of story cuz I figured those would be more believable. If anyone wants the text version to post as creepypasta just lemme know.
SmileGhost !ScaryKHzOA
This needs to be said.
Anonymous
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
>>7792766 Give it a bow-tie. Bow-ties are cool. Or like a bow-tie shaped birthmark/scar/discolouration.
Clothing gives it a semblance of humanity, and if that's what people think would work best, then good.
If it's truly bestial, then there still has to be some identifier, but without the clothing.
Harlequin !AMqw/VTW2A
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>>7792557 Sounds a bit like the wall men from SH 4.
>>7792766 True. This also applies to the general slasher antagonist. So, to make a monster like this, one would simply make a slasher, but alter the concept a bit...
Anonymous
>>7792824 Red eye like /x/tans.
Except on the opposite side of it's face.
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
>>7792835 Every slenderman and their dog has red-eyes.
Why not glowing yellow?
Anonymous
>>7792853 Or be creative, Silver.
Anonymous
>>7792763 part 2, suggestions and criticism welcome
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>>7792527 So this thing is basically an inbred retard baby with vagina-balls?
GOSH, THAT'S AWFUL SPOOKY!
Anonymous
hatshoe.org is already our mascot.
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
>>7792881 >unfinished/unfinishable ARG >mascot >nope >>7792864 Silver is good. A luminescent silver maybe? (So you can see it in the dark, like animal eyes)
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DO SOMETHING WITH BEKS
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This is not scary.
Anonymous
>>7792909 Just so.
Next question is; pupils or no pupils?
While a solid eye would suggest it being inhuman, I think dilated pupils would work wonders on the doubters, as they cannot see our creation in dark, they could only assume it's human. Until, of course, they see it in the light.
Anonymous
>>7792853 >>7792864 >>7792909 GUYS COLORED EYES ARE NOT MEMORABLE, there are lots of different creatures worth different colored eyes and unless this one has the colors of the rainbow in his its not memorable, we have to think of something significant, something uncommon, like suits aren't everyday things but they are noticeable
lets try to stray away form articles of clothing or eyes, maybe a certain bodily mutation that is noticable
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>>7792943 Goat's pupils.
No one uses that and goats have very weird pupils.
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
>>7792943 Always go with your more well thought-out idea. So the dilated idea seems to be better.
Is this a feasible project for /x/? I don't know. Does /x/ need more community projects like this? Yes.
Anonymous
I work in a little newspaper of Barinas, Venezuela. Gimme some photorealistic pictures of him and a good story and i can put that shit on the newspaper and make it public. I will add pictures and scans of the paper to make the people believe is truth. I can also make a bunch of fake witness of the monster and put it on the news.
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Bee-are-bee, bringing out some doodles I've made.
Anonymous
>>7792873 part 3, last part coming up
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
>>7792992 >mutation A fair enough idea. But what exactly? IDEAS man, give us solid, tangible ideas!
Kid Cannibal
Sheeyit, I can't find anything recently good. I probably misplaced anything decent I've doodled up. Drew this for a class awhile back, though.
Anonymous
>>7792998 That sounds like a great place to spread our boy!
We need some drawfags all in here.
>>7793025 Plenty of monsters are mutilated, I say we go with the eyes (still thinking about Silver Dilated vs Silver Goat eyes)
And maybe something like a sword or bones sticking out of it's body.
Anonymous
>>7792997 when /x/ started we did shit like this all the time.
Thread is about to autosage but I think we did some nice work here.
Anonymous
>>7793019 The End
Thoughts?
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Here are some other doodles. Ignore the plague doctor, I saw a thread with a sweet comic and felt a little inspired. The middle guy looks funky though.
H !!Rh6KfVj5eSz
I think we should archive this, so we won't lose all our progress.
>>7793072 I didn't read yet, I'll get to it right now.
*dons tripcode*
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>>7793046 the thing is eyes are very insignificant and small, a mutation can be just about anything, maybe it can be something related to what little kids would do to bully people like swirlies and wedgies and such, but not as comedic
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
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>>7793064 I know, I remember.
>>7793085 I'm leaving now, but I at least Ctrl S'd the thread for my personal use.
Fearchan !MARYJ/Ns.o
>>7793072 It's a good way to start a discussion about "the sloth." Clearly, we'd need actual first-hand accounts, but I like how your story isn't all in your face about this monster.
Anonymous
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>>7793123 Thanks. Yeah, I figured it'd be more effective if it didn't seem like that was really what the story was about. Then, cook up a couple different stories with similar details over a couple of days or weeks, and bam, people start talking.
Anonymous
So should we start writing similar stories also?
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Hey, if somebody could go to chanarchive and vote for this thread, we're only one vote short. Let's save all our awesome brainstorming so we can refer to it later!
Anonymous
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>>7793163 Yeah go for it. I think the things we are mostly agreed on is: it has a body similar to/moves like a sloth, it's deformed and/or broken bones, it's white with red eyes, it has something to do with mistreating the weak. Try to work at least some of that in so people will connect the stories.
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>>7792998 This actually reminds me of the whole satanic rites prank that happened in Italy some years ago.
Good idea, media will surely try to strumentalize that shit to get audience.
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This humanoid serpent shape has a camouflage pattern on the front that looks like a human form, similar to a cobras false eyes on the back of its head. It will spin rapidly if it knows it is being pursued, and a pattern of dots/eyes take on the appearance of many human eyes and faces. Similar to a mimic octopus it can also change color.
Anonymous
so reading the story made me picture him a little like this, i dont know should he be fatter? and do we have any significant mutation/object or anything to stuck on him
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>>7793255 I think that looks pretty good, actually. Slightly differing versions are good, anyways. It adds to the realism.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>7793072 BRILLIANT
I want more!
Anonymous
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How about a creature that sneaks into your bed at night and pulls your skeleton out and hides it in places so it can pop out and scare people.
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>>7793435 Thanks :D
Right now I'm trying to think of some more plausible ways to encounter it. From the descriptions here, it sounds like the sort of thing that pretty much comes out and attacks you, so there's not a lot of time to sensibly report on it. I'm thinking now maybe a close family member or witness who saw it attack the victim, sort of like the Rake?
If somebody could do some shoops of it, I think that would help a lot as far as getting it established as a 'real monster.'
Anonymous
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what a shame, the thread is dying, well if anyone does think of a physical attribute for this nameless man post it please
Anonymous
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>>7793044 This looks like the shattery teeth people but without eyes on the side and the gums are more exposed.
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>>7792998 Basic story: High School bullies are found dead with their eyes filled with blood after they had brain hemorrhages. Police find a photograph on on their phones of the creature crawling out of some shadowy corner somewhere, with a timestamp dated only 10 minutes before the time of death.
Somebody fucking shoop that shit
Anonymous
Name:?
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>>7793541 Name: The name will be decided by the public when the story spreads
How it kills: It induces fatal brain hemorrhaging or something like that
Location: Anywhere
How to know it's coming: I'm thinking maybe ringing in the ears and the smell of sulfur.
Anonymous
>>7793560 what about a static noise instead of a ringing
Anonymous
>>7793654 static would be freakier
now we have to know when it comes out, is it random like slender man, or only at night?
Anonymous
I like the ringing of the ears, perhaps also a sharp pain in the temples that becomes unbearable as it gets closer.
Anonymous
>>7793703 someone earlier suggested wet pavement, i like that idea, it's subtle but would be offputting.
>>7793696 i think it should be able to appear at any time, even in daylight, but only when the victim is alone.
Anonymous
>>7793714 maybe only the victim can see it? so it can appear when the victim is with someone and he or she can die right infront of the company
Anonymous
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here is what i'm imagining based on these descriptions, i really like the idea of a loose skinned creature whose bones are all broken up inside it.
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>>7793728 I like the idea that only the victim can see it, but i think at the very least it should only kill when it's alone with the victim. To me at least, that's more mysterious/freakier.
Anonymous
>>7793703 well if the pain gets worse as you approach it most people would avoid getting near it or hitting it for that matter, and the point is that he can be beaten up all day and still stalks you
So what we have so far
-Red eyes and pale white skin
-broken bones and twisted limbs all over it
-Attacks childhood bullies
-Kills by creating a brain hemorrhages which cause bleeding out of the eyes
-has a damp, wet pavement smell
-no matter how much you attack it or beat it, will always stalk you until you die
what we need
-something significant that separates it form other "monsters" (Like slender man and his suit)
Anonymous
>>7793753 I'm not sure on how to separate it from other monsters, i just wanted to throw in my two cents that i think it should attack lots of people, not just bullies. and maybe sometimes people just have "near misses" with it, but when it's nearby they can't help but think of times they've been cruel in the past. or that might be getting too complicated/superpowery. but regardless i think if it attacked other people it would make it more universally scary. also we could maybe make a fake viral video or story that suggests, for example, someone who was abusing animals got hunted down by it (since the internet hates animal abusers).
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>>7790815 OK IM JUST GONNA THROW THIS OUT
we need something to seperate this from the rest of the worlds creatures, make it noticable so you know who he is once you see him
HIS LEFT FRONTAL LOBE is missing, completely hollow with only blood stains in it
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>>7793791 your implying that most of the world is without regret and knows they have never bullied, no matter how insignificant your taunts may have been they could have ruined the kid's life and since we dont know how bad our taunt was we dont know if we're safe
Anonymous
I don't really know why you're all hung up on the thing being separate from other monsters. I think its mutations and gross crawly movement is enough to make it unique.
Also, I agree with
>>7793791 that making it only go after bullies would not only make it less scary to most people, but would make people think of it more as a hero rather than a scary monster you should watch out for. There needs to be another catch to what makes it go after you. Seriously.
The bully thing is fucking dumb.
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>>7793820 >>7793836 Actually yeah, what I meant was it doesn't only go after people we identify as "bullies", it goes after anyone who's ever been cruel or hurt someone or something weak and helpless, so basically everyone since we all have some regrets like that. That way it doesn't come off like a hero, it can go after anyone, but it seems like the reason why is still tied to the sort of things from our past we'd all rather just forget, which i think is an interesting fear to explore
Anonymous
If we're going with that it goes after cruel people, why not have it sown together out of different body parts? Maybe a part that reminds someone of something cruel they did, the eyes of a kid they bullied and regret it? Some trait that reminds them of that one bad thing they did.
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admittedly i'm terrible at shooping but here is my first try
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>>7793940 i think that may be a little on the nose, don't you? perhaps just the general pitiable appearance of the creature should remind people sort of instinctively relate it to weak creatures that they might have victimized, it could be like a trademark of the creature that when you look at it you start thinking of all the really terrible things you've done, so there's like shame and regret mixed with fear.
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>>7793976 lol so i was slightly off the mark. now that you said pig i can't stop seeing it though ha ha
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>>7793995 How about when it appears to you, as it's crawling up to kill you, you feel compelled to tell it all the stories of how you were evil and cruel. Like not like "storytime!" lol, but that could be another detail lots of "accounts" include, they got the strong urge to tell it about times they were evil that they regret.
